MP1
In this assignment we had to do make an essay about if Fracking is good or bad. Somethings that I did good in the assignment is that I have made a good thesis, and i have also explained why fracking is good or bad and which one I decided on and explained. Something that I could have done better in this assignment is that I could have made a strong analysis and also add more detail in my conclusion.
In this assignment I had to write a essay on a topic that I choose and how they changed. I went and decided to choose video games and how the console changed over the time. We got to make out own thesis ahead of the essay and then put our thesis into the essay and example it. Somethings that I could have done better in this assignment is that I should get better at my citations and make my analysis stronger.
MP2
In this assignment, we had to make a lit review of our capstone. My capstone is about a app that help with finding park near by and trying to find the best park for the user. There was multiple sections for this lit review. There was the introduction, what is our app about, what makes our app useful, what similar app are there, and how our app could be better then the rest. Something that I could have done better in this assignment is to try to clean up everything and try to add more details in some thigs.
In this assignment we had to do a writing assessment about how technology is affecting the world. I wrote about how technology is affecting the mental health of many people. I have show tables about how technology could lead to ADHD and depression. Something that I could work on and could help me in the future is that I could make my quotes better and stronger to support my claims and to have more evidence.