Feedback will be based on the rubrics below. If you have questions about your feedback, ask your teacher.
Example feedback
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Thesis 0/4: I had trouble identifying a sentence as your thesis statement which supported the prompt.
Development 6/8: You have supported the prompt with your subtopics and made the needed connections using your resources. Remember to refer to your sources in the body of your paper to strengthen support for your subtopics.
Organization 4/4: Organized according to directions. You consistently used transitions in your essay.
Communication 3/4: Your essay a few mistakes. Check proper nouns.
Digital Project 4/4: Your essay is completed in the digital format. Thank you for including your source.
Thank you for your hard work and effort. Good job!17=81% (-7)
Reflection
This essay needs to rewrite the thesis to better address the prompt, use/mention the sources in the body of the essay and proof read for errors.