About 30% of prisoners reoffend as soon as they are let out of prison. What do they think governments should do to try to stop this happening? What do prisoners need to make them law-abiding citizens?
1 Crimes are committed by people who need help rather than punishment.
2 Prison life teaches people how to become better criminals.
3 Young people achieve great things with help and guidance.
Avoid making exaggerated statements. Use modals, adverbs or describe quantities to make your opinions sound more realistic. In the final paragraph, answer the task question by summarising what you have written and adding a comment. If you can’t think of a comment, say something about what might happen in the future.
You have been talking about crime and punishment in class. Now your teacher has asked you to write an essay for homework. Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. (140-190 words)
Army
discipline, self-discipline
physical/survival training
obeying orders
Crime
break the law
commit a crime
turn to a life of crime
arrest someone for a crime
find someone guilty of a crime
minor/serious offences
Skills
dealing with people
working in a team
communicating
learning a life/work skill
Prison
send someone/go to prison
prisoners
cells
do time
education programmes
Results
a sense of responsibility
a sense of right and wrong
self-confidence
be proud of yourself
know what you are capable of
What went well in your writing?