Hero journey

One day Jake and Karen were going to the woods to hike for the summer It was raining. it took them a day to get there they got there and stared going to the mountain to hike. Karen said to Jake to go down the mountain he saw a dead body on the ground a men killed him in the face. So they got scared jake went back up they saw a men with a hammer the men saw him he said I"m going to kill you people. So Jake and Karen ran away to the car it took then 30 min to get there. When they got on the car the car had no gas so Jake took his phone out to call his friend to help them so he said yes he Will come to help them . They were waiting for him they got a call that he was here . So Jake and Karen hero got off of the car to the woods to find the men that wanted to kill them. When they were walking in the woods Jake and Karen hero found the killer in the wood walking to a house that was old . So they went to it quietly .The hero had his backpacks with his stuff to trap him he sit it up to trap the killer he nocked on the door we hided he came out he got stuck on the rope. So he stab him with a shot to go to sleep he called the police to come to get him for being a bad person .T he police got here and took him then left, The hero saved him and putted gas on the car then Jake and karn said thank you to his friend hero they left home. Then they had a party a lot a people came they had fun then everyone went home.