Embedded Files
Our Project Name is the Clip Box.
As we went through our project like making it on tinker cad we messed up over and over but at the end we did it.
On the first day we tinkered around to see what we could do, we made and we made a little box that can hold paper, but it still did not look right.
So today we are planning on improving it so that we can make it better. We are going to see if we can add more stuff to make it better!
We made the paper slot the right size. But the things we forgot to do is add the clamp to connect it to the desk.
Somethings we messed up on is we ran out of time because we were raging. Mr. Steltman really helped us a lot!
But something that we really want to achieve is working on the actual project. The mailbox we made was our prototype and it was rushed.
So today we are excited to work on our good copy and we will try to achieve our goal to work harder and take our time on our prototype.
On the 3rd day we finally added the clamps onto the mail box and got the right size for it. We also made it so we are in the same one instead of working separately.
It really went well because we finished the clamp part and did not get distracted so now we are all most done.
Some things that did not go well is we got really frustrated with the program and it is definitely not helping us get it done.
The problem that is Being Solved is that paper is always messy and everywhere in your desk and not being organized so you cant find them but with the clip box we solved that problem. We solved the problem by making an organised that would hold your loos papers so they would be organised and we could find them.
This is our Script for our commercial!
J - Do you have problems keeping your desk organized and don’t want to clean it? Well if you do... Try the Clip Box. It is the easiest thing to use!
M - All you do is clip it on to your desk. I am sure you do not like organizing your desk with all these papers do you? Your teacher will probably say “Get It Done!”
J - “GET IT DONE” - Claire “GET IT DONE” - Emma “GET IT DONE - \
- Well saying it clips on desk show it
M- Want to see how other people think of this “Clip Box”
C - This Clip Box changed my life and made me so much more not stressed!
E - I don’t know what I would do without it my desk it would be so messy if i didn’t have it!
R- “I Love this so much, it is the BEST
I would Definitely recommend it.
J - Here's a different box organizer that sits on your desk. It is called the Organizer box, the Organizer Box is a box that will keep all your school supplies in it.
- Show organizer box
M - The Clip Box is better than the Organizer box because it simply clips on the side of your desk so it doesn't take up as much space and the Organiser Box some people could knock it over and all your stuff would fall out. Clip Box is tightly clipped on and wont fall off.
- Show how its better
- Show the organizer box falling off the desk - emma will walk by
J - But the best part is that you do not have to use it for only papers, you can use the Clip Box for books and School Supplies.
- Show school supplies and books in the clip box
M - The Clip Box is a easy plastic organizer that slips on your desk and has a lot of space inside it to fit papers. It also has little screws so when you clip it on your desk you can adjust it to tighten it more with the screws.
J - Usually you would get this kind of stuff for about 30 dollars, but if you call now for the next 60 minutes you will get a Clip Box and an Organizer Box for a special offer of 50% off discount that is only 15 dollars for both organizers!
- Show both organizers surrounding the price at the end with the phone number
Mr. Steltman - Call 166 - 244 -6000 for your 50% off discount on both organizers
M - “Get It Done!”
Report abuse