In these tabs, you will find my journal entries, each varying in different types of central points. I have three subpages to my Journal tab, which are called "Das Kapital", "Castro Speeches", and "Life of Marx". The "Das Kapital" includes all my notes and annotations taken while reading through Marx's famous book, Das Kapital. As for the "Castro Speeches" tab, that also includes annotations and notes done on famous speeches given by Fidel Castro. Lastly, the "Life of Marx" tab has a brief overview on Marx's life and his writings.
My name is Agata Montanini, and this year I will be a junior attending GHS. Apart from participating in daily academic activities, I love to be active. Every morning I walk my dog, and I sometimes also join my mom on her nightly walks. I play volleyball, both for the school and club. I used to swim, but due to the current situation involving COVID, I prefer not to get involved with too many social activities that involve high risks of contamination. I also run, both on my own and during the Track season. Since the age of six, I have been playing the piano, but recently my former teacher relocated herself to another state, leaving me and my sisters without a teacher. Subsequently, I've been playing for my own enjoyment and time. When I can, I also like baking desserts, especially matcha flavored ones.
I like spending my time walking, mainly because it's both simple and allows me to either reflect on myself or just listen to podcasts. My favorite podcast I like to listen to is called Throughline, which is produced by the company NPR. Simply put, the podcast tries to explain current societal problems using the past. I also find myself really absorbed by certain books from time to time. I especially love the books that make you reflect a lot on current society through their criticisms, whether they be the futuristic dystopian ones, such as Brave New World, or the biographical political ones, such as The Mauritanian.
I was born in Italy and moved here to the USA when I was two. We first moved to Arizona, then to New York. When I'm at home, I always speak in Italian with my family, but that's recently changed because we've become part of the foster system. To make the foster children not feel left out, we've been speaking a lot more English than usual. I grew up with three other sisters, one who's gone to college and the other two who are younger than me. Now that I've become the oldest, I've received the responsibilities that come with it. I've come to the recognition that to fill in my older sisters shoe is tough, but it's a good challenge and does come with its own perks.
From an early age, I've always been nagged by my father that getting good grades shouldn't be done in his favor, but for mine, which has impacted the relationship I've had with my grades. Last year was an especially weird year, changing my perspective on a lot of things, including grades. I wasn't at my best, as this can probably relate with most people. I easily got distracted, leading to a loss of understanding which directly affecting my grades. It was the first time I've ever felt horrible about myself over a long period of time, and not only because of my grades. Those numbers accurately represented my work ethic, and it made me realize how important grades were to my social wellbeing. If I demonstrate my best self, I get the best results I possibly can from my grades. If not, it reflects my laziness and lost will.
I don't have any memory that pops in mind, but all the good times I remember in school are all the ones I had with friends. Whether it was school trips, tests, or labs done with them, all those memories remain in my mind. No matter what we may be going through, the times spent with people whom I feel comfortable around and enjoy spending with are always the best. As for memories outside of school, they're always the ones where I spend my time doing things I enjoy, as simple as it is. The bike rides with my dad, the family movie nights, and the nightly walks on the beach are memories I know I will cherish until I'll fall into the inevitable doom of old age forgetfulness.
Coming into school, I like to think about my future, and what exactly I'll end up spending most of my energy on. Recently, I've been given the task to research and look into colleges I might be interested in. For now, the European University Institute and the University of Bern have piqued my interest. I've also been looking into Universities in the USA, but the only problem I have with them is the cost. Unlike European Universities, the ones here in the "land of the free" have an average tuition cost of about $35,331, according to Melanie Hanson who reported her research on Education Data, and this only entails those first four years of undergraduate college. Now compare this to the average tuition cost for European nations, and you find that almost none of them exceed a cost of 30,000 USD. Either way, before I can complain about the costs, I should focus on getting accepted, which means succeeding both in my numerical grades and getting into AP classes. It means leaving high school with a feeling of accomplishment, both in my academic achievements and my social ones as well. I want to leave having found a passion I know I can carry through my college years, and things I do well in that leave not only and impact to the ones around me but also to people to who come after me.
The first thing I thought of when pondering on things I hate about schools was grades, and ironically it's the same for when I think about what I love about school. Before COVID hit at the end of my freshman year, I used to despise how numbers were all we cared about. It was a motivator for sure, trying to constantly hit those high 99's, but it also sucked out all the enjoyment of learning. Instead of taking my time and appreciating the fact that I had an opportunity to understand a concept I never even heard of before, I would scramble through it, memorizing the definitions and formulas. The test would take place, and then for the next unit, I would forget everything from the previous unit, falling into a cycle of memorizing and forgetting. Then, at the end of freshman year during COVID, grading policies changed. Instead of numbers, you would get DEL (demonstrates evidence of learning), NEL (no evidence of learning), and NYS (not yet submitted). One could have numerically earned a 75 on a test and get a DEL same as one who would have earned a 99. I no longer had the motivation to work my best because I knew that even if I fell short of my best, it would be sufficient for a DEL. And that's all I needed. Looking back, I knew it was a horrible way of approaching this difficult time, but I found it difficult to get out of the rut. In all honesty, the rut almost felt comfortable. The stressing over grades, and the huge self-value I placed myself on numbers just vanished for those few months, and it felt like a guilty pleasure.
My older sister took EMC² during her senior year of 2020-2021, and although the work did seem exacting, the thing that stuck with me the most was the concept that one could choose to cover whatever topic they desired. I had finally found something that I knew I wouldn't ever get fed up with. I've had phases of interest, moving from astronomy to climate change and music. They've all lasted max one year, never more. Marxism, and just the general study of the role politics and economy play in society, has always stuck with me since seventh grade. Though there are some ups and downs in my level of interest, it has never dropped below the point where I got sick of it. The only problem is that I never had the will to actually sit down and create a research project of my own. Yes, I would read and inform myself on Marxism and other social philosophies, but I never wrote down and created a final understanding of my own.
Ever since a few years ago, I've been investing my time in learning about Marxism, Leninism, and other ideologies of Communism, along with studying the lives of the people who brought forth these radical policies, which includes Karl Marx, Vladimir Lenin, and Ho Chi Minh. When people think of Communism, their mind jumps immediately to the oppressive Soviet Union, Cuba under Castro, or China under Mao. We forget about where it originated from, from the carefully laid out descriptions of this utopian society in The Communist Manifesto. A lot of historical people which I admire believe, to a certain degree, in these communist ideals. Even many current political influencers that I follow fall under the Democratic Socialist branch. It's a push towards socialism, the bridge between Capitalism, that which we participate in right now, and Communism.
Podcasts have paved my road to learning and understanding the concept of Marx's Communism, but what opened the door to this path was none other than Twitch. Yes, you read that right, Twitch. Twitch is a streaming platform, similar to YouTube, where people live broadcast themselves to an online audience. The platform is often used to stream video games, but one streamer I love to watch is called Hasan Piker. His username is Hasanabi, and he streams every day of the week to a following of over 1.5 million. On these broadcasts, he does a review on the news, giving his own critiques on it, hence why he's a Political Commentator. He self-identifies as a Marxist, and this open dialogue to this new philosophy really opened my mind. For the people who are also willing to open their minds, I would recommend beginning with this website → https://www.socialism101.com/basic. This wasn't my first stumble onto Marxism nor Socialism, but looking it over, it provides a very 101 guide to Socialism, as implied by the websites name.
How did Karl Marx come up with the Communist Manifesto?
How and why did the USA push a lot of propaganda against Communism during the '60s?
Has there ever been a true Communist nation, let alone Capitalist?
It's Okay To Not Be Okay is a K-drama TV series that has a lot of sentimental meaning to it. It shows many different sides to human nature, from the struggles we all deal with mentally, and those concerning societal pressure. From mental disorders to mental illnesses, it shows how people cope from a realistic point of view. This series follows the growth and development of three characters and their ways of coping with past trauma. Moon Gang-tae, a health worker who works at OK Psychiatric Hospital, and Moon Sang-tae, who is diagnosed with autism, are both brothers. From a young age, their mother was murdered and it was witnessed by Moon Sang-tae, who has suffered all his years trying to not let this hold him back. Meanwhile, Ko Mun-yeong, who's a children's storybook writer, is another character brought in the series. She has an antisocial personality disorder, which affects her ability to sympathize. She is introduced as a potential love interest for Moon Gang-tae, which brings a lot of tensions between the relationships of all three.
This story touches on a lot of messages through its complexity. From how society treats people with disabilities, to how everyone has a struggle in their own unique way, and finally learning and understanding that loving others is just as important as loving yourself. The series depicts how Sang-tae while dealing with his past trauma, was able to navigate through the world even with his autism. The brother, Gang-tae, on the other hand, is often seen treating Sang-tae as if he were someone in need of help. This kind of perspective towards those suffering from mental disabilities is prevalent in society, often interpreted as pity. We also see the stark contrast between the personalities of Gang-tae and Mun-yeong, with the former being the more gentle-hearted and the latter being more antisocial. Gang-tae has trouble thinking about himself and is overly preoccupied with others. Mun-yeong instead has the struggle of showing emotion towards others, especially when it comes to love. It's also really artistic how the directors used the children's book stories as a way to relate back to the story at hand, and how such a simplistic book can be used to accurately summarize a complex situation.
It's okay to take a break and heal no matter the circumstance.
My trouble with writing, or in general with any story-telling format, is I never know how to start things off. I spent many days thinking about what story I could write about, whether it’d be a personal one or not. I thought of revolutionaries who have pushed for communism, and maybe sharing their stories, but when I researched for a story of theirs that could speak for all, I couldn’t find one that was able to be easily relatable with. The time spent wasted in searching for stories while there was one right in front of me is one of my weaknesses in storytelling. I get nervous that I can’t make some normal story as interesting, often relying heavily on the character’s charisma to catch the reader's attention. In my Person/Place/Thing assignment, I feel as if it’s just a jumble of thoughts rather than a structured story.
Having a guide to this assignment was nice to have, but it acted more like a prompt. The directions were clear in the manner that they carried their end goal, which definitely got your mind thinking. I did feel the difference between the assignment was from previous journals, and how the journals had a lot more of an outline. The details given from the assignment only set you on the starting line, whereas the rest of the race was left up to you. The only part that left me a bit confused was the “extra mile” collaboration. I wasn’t sure if it meant thinking and writing the assignment out with this person, or just sharing it with them once you're done for revisions. In the end, I never shared nor collaborated with anyone, which I do regret a bit. I know I’m not the best in communication, especially with the English grammar, so having someone I know who understands my communication skills for revision would be ideal.
People who aren't successful in a task often overestimate their abilities, and those who are tend to underestimate themselves. This is what David Dunning and Justin Kruger concluded from a social experiment they conducted. I've tried to apply this in many aspects to my life, from academic subjects to my athleticism. Understanding the balance between egotism and cowardice takes a lot of self-reflection by understanding your limits and how you compare to your potentiality. For my self-reflection on what I know about Communism, it helped a lot to discuss with someone who has background knowledge on it and isn't scared to set me straight. This person was my dad for the past few weeks.
There were some things that I already knew before discussing, such as the time period which influenced Karl Marx's philosophy behind The Communist Manifesto. I also knew the mass-spread propaganda against Communism which the United States put through to their citizens during the Cold War against the USSR, often referred to as the Red Scare. (Wikipedia). I know many leading figures that took inspiration from Marx's philosophy like Lenin, Mao, and Che Guevara (Investopedia). They each had their own individual interpretation and modifications, but they still all derived from that end goal of achieving a world where the means of production were in the hands of the state rather than private organizations. I know that Marx explained his philosophy on the oppressed and the oppressor and the solution, but he never gave a detailed explanation as to how society ought to transition from a capitalistic to a socialistic and finally a communist system (The New Yorker). I know that Communism, in its ideal form, is stateless, money-less, and classless, compared to its rival, Capitalism, which needs states, money, and class in order for it to function because it relies on competition (Medium). I know that a hugely used critique against Communism is how do we assure ourselves that society will still function without that motivation for money (Stanford)? I know that Marx was not an avid believer in religion, and he had a certain take on it when relating it to Communism, saying it was the "opium of the people", meaning the drug for those who didn't want to face reality (Revise Sociology).
My dad did point out many arguments which I have never thought about or even knew. It really showed me how I may think to know so many things, but in reality I've only scratched the surface. When it comes to the things I think I know, they're often the things I will say in order to elevate my argument, but when challenged, it will fall weak. I think I know that Cuba under Fidel Castro's reign began on the right foot. With free education, social security, and many other privileges given to every citizen, I think that Cuba was going in the right direction. Then, I think with the involvement of the USSR and the Cuban Missile Crisis, that's when things took off for the worse. I think that if Castro hadn't accepted the USSR's aid with their missiles, they could've potentially ended up differently. I think that in order for Communism to succeed, it'd either have to be done in a small, independent community or initiated by a big and financially stable country. With Globalization and the free market being adapted in many corners of the world, I don't think a communist nation would survive, especially since participating would essentially contradict its ideologies. I think that although Capitalism does have its pros, Communism is inevitable if humanity truly wants a society where all people are given the same opportunity. I think that in order to live under Communism, we have to give up a lot of trust to the government. I think that Marx believed that having religion practiced under Communism wasn't possible, and I think he critiqued it as such, saying it would only dissolution people, which would prevent the progression in society.
I don't know the full story behind Che Guevara.
I don't know why majority of the time when nations try to impose Communism, it often becomes authoritarian.
I don't know the philosophy behind Ho Chi Minh, and many other Orthodox Marxists.
I don't know much about Karl Marx and The Communist Manifesto.
I don't know if Communism is actually possible in the future.
I don't know if Communism is actually inevitable as some Marxists believe.
I don't know the processes to reach the ideal Communism without it turning into a dictatorship.
I don't know if a Communist nation would be able to survive in modern day.
I don't know if under Communism, the philosophy of "individualism" still exists.
I don't know the modern philosophies on Marx (Noam Chomsky, Slavoj Zizek), and how modern advancements may have contributed to their interpretations.
The most important thing I need to know, currently, is point number four because the Communist ideology was birthed by Karl Marx through his Communist Manifesto. Without knowing the origin of something, one can't know where it is at now, nor where it will be in the future. I also think it's key to understanding Marx and his philosophy for one to manifest their own concerning Communism. A lot of Marx's ideologies are referred to from many politicians and activists today, each with their own biases and interpretations of his work. Being able to read Marx and challenge every point he makes is what helps with the creation of your own interpretation, taking the logic you agree with and replacing the ones you don't.
For this SDA, I did put in a lot of time, probably too much, but I think that I understand what I would need to fix for next time. I found a podcast site which I like and think is easy to use, so for the next time, I'm thinking of doing a podcast again, or something involving a voice over. For next time, I also know that I'll need to plan ahead accordingly, making sure that all my research needed for the next SDA is done before a certain amount of days before the SDA is due, so that it'll leave me with about half a week to a full week of planning. The Person/Place/Thing assignment definitely helped with my reflection on what I needed to research on. Recalling back to conversations with my dad concerning Communism helped me realize how much about Karl Marx I didn't know. Before the assignment, I had already started reading the Communist Manifesto, so I was already focused on Marx, but identifying what I know and didn't know guided me with having a set construct of what exactly I was looking for in the Manifesto. It also helped shape what exactly I want to research next, opening my mind to many different directions I can take this research. As for the directions, I think they were completely clear and I understood what my goal was supposed to be. The meeting one-on-one did help with clarifying any extra information, but regarding what I had to do and how I was supposed to do it was clear. I think the SDA was more of a self-assessment to see what you can do using the resources you have rather than a project of "can you understand the rubric."
For my first SDA, I attempted to answer the question, "What was Karl Marx's criticism in one of his earlier works, The Communist Manifesto?" In order to accomplish this, I read the Communist Manifesto and did a superficial background gathering on Karl Marx's life. I definitely learned through this SDA, but both the Manifesto and the research I did on Marx were minimal when it comes to having the full comprehension on Marx's Communism. Though a recent goal of mine is to read Marx's Kapital, realistically, I won't be able to finish and have it ready anytime soon. Either way, I still believe that I need to have a better grasp on Marx's influence, which is why for my next question, coming from the Comprehension section, will be, "How would you compare Marx's philosophy, specifically that of Communism, to philosophers who came before and after him? How would you contrast?" I intend to do an introduction to other forms of Marxism that were shown prevalent in the 20th century, along with a brief overview of philosophers who had a big impact on Marx's views, such as Hegel.
I plan to use Lenin's book, The Teachings of Karl Marx, along with the podcast, Philosophize This. I'll also use the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy. The Teachings of Karl Marx is a primary source, and I think it'll not only give me an insight on how Lenin thinks, but also gather a bit more information about Marx. Philosophize This is a podcast that I've already been listening to for over a year now, and through the ways that the host presents the information works for me. He also makes his podcasts entertaining and understandable. Lastly, the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy is a very reliable resource as it is a site for educational purposes and Stanford is a credible resource. All articles in this site are written by experts in that area.
Lenin, Vladimir Ilʹich. The Teachings of Karl Marx. International Publishers, 1969.
Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy, Stanford University, https://plato.stanford.edu/.
West, Stephen. “Philosophize This.” Philosophize This!, 6 June 2013, https://www.philosophizethis.org/podcasts.
My next question is, "How would you compare Marx's philosophy, specifically that of Communism, to philosophers who came before and after him? How would you contrast?" Compared to my first question, it does still focus on Marx and his philosophy, but instead of researching his philosophy, I'm going to be researching the basics of the philosophies that either impacted or were impacted by Marx. Some people I'm hoping to touch on is Hegel, Feuerbach, Lenin, Mao, and hopefully even Fidel Castro. I don't plan on digging deep into their philosophies, but getting a general idea on the fundamentals of each person's philosophy and contrasting it to Marx is my goal. I think it works as a transition to my next main goal, which is tackling Marxist-Leninism.
Thinking ahead for my project, I really want to understand other forms of Marxism, so I think a good way to go about it is by dipping my toes into various philosophies. I do plan on going in chronological order, but I think having a general overview of what's to come next helps with knowing what's most critical to understand. The sources I picked are both primary and secondary resources. Having secondary resources helps with the comprehension of the data, but I think that having primary resources is just as important, providing a challenge. They leave the interpretation up to you, and gives you a more self-gratification in the end.
Bibliography:
Lenin, Vladimir Ilʹich. The Teachings of Karl Marx. International Publishers, 1969.
Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy, Stanford University, https://plato.stanford.edu/.
West, Stephen. “Philosophize This.” Philosophize This!, 6 June 2013, https://www.philosophizethis.org/podcasts.
I think what fits good for this question is the "Today I Learned" SDA format. As a self-reflection from my previous SDA, I know that I need to work on summarization, so I think this format will provide that challenge. I intend to gather enough information to have a strong understanding of the general forms of each philosophy, but not too much where I overextend myself. Sort of like a warm up to a workout, I don't want to go too hard where I tire myself out, but I also don't want to hold myself back too much to the point where I risk injuring myself later on. The Teachings of Karl Marx by Lenin has about fifty pages in it, so the only challenge it has is the understanding and analysis it requires, but even then I relieved a bit of that pressure by having already read the Communist Manifesto and having a grasp on Marx and his philosophy. I also find that Stephen West, the host of "Philosophize this", provides a lot of analysis on Hegel's and Feuerbach's philosophy. He talks about Hegel's dialect, which had a massive influence on the manifestation of Marx's philosophy, and Feuerbach's religious views, which were often criticized by Marx. Lastly, the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy showcases a lot of reliable details and facts about many philosophers, ranging from Hegel to Marx to Lenin. Sifting through the information will be challenging, but along with the primary resource and the podcast, I think that gradually I'll start picking up on overlapping information. Using these overlapping information, I'll pick and choose the most important for not only the comprehension of the topic, but also the vitality it will have to responding to the question at hand.
The time I had disposable for EMC was enough for this SDA. I spent a good amount on the research part, using various resources, but I did cut short on time when it came to the actual construction of the presentation. I only spent one night and a day on the slideshow, and I tried to make it as professional as I could, but I did realize after I turned it in the few minor mistakes I had made. I had ideas to add to the slideshow, but forgot towards the end, so for the next time, I'm thinking of creating a list of To Do's or ideas so I won't forget. I think that putting the presentation together within the final two days will be inevitable for me, so I want to also have a compiling sheet separate from my notes that collects only the highlights of my findings. I also like my choice on picking Google Slides. Personally, I'm a visual learner, so I also think that I teach best through similar means, and using Google Slides allows me to not only give literal information, but also visual ones. I enjoy experimenting with multiple different ways of organizing the visual with the literal parts, and keeping an aesthetic and understanding ratio between the two. With this, I think it helps with my persuasiveness, forcing myself into the position of the viewer and understanding what type of organization would make it more appealing for them.
Finding my resources was easier than what one might think. I knew I wanted to use at least one primary source, preferably that of Lenin's since I knew he was someone who was hugely influenced by Marx. I think it was mainly luck when I found his Teachings of Karl Marx, bringing both his perspective on things and more information on the philosophy of Marx. I've also been a follower of the podcast Philosophize this for a while, and I had already used the Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy in previous researches for this project. It's also convenient that it's a database full of various articles packed with information. Though I was disappointed that they didn't have an article dedicated to only Lenin or Mao, I did find information on them through other articles in the database. How I think I then organized my information was a bit effective. I used different ways of presenting the details, from Venn diagrams to tables and just plain text. I'm not sure which one was the easiest to gather the most information from, but adding variety to my project did allow me to experiment in my organization. I also think that the visual aspects of things helped with maintaining the attention of the reader, though for certain parts, I might want to make the visual part more important than just relying on the text. The assessments give me feedback a way that shows whether or not the readers are incorporating the information I've given, but it didn't get executed in the way I wanted it to, due to the shortage of time. Other than that, directions were clear and with a few questions I asked (a bit late, which I realized was something that played a role in the shortage of time), I found exactly what I wanted to do.
Is Communism even possible in nations with mass populations (i.e. USA, India, China, etc.)?
What are the misconceptions on Communism, and why?
Why have most previous attempts to Communism never work?
For the first problem, I think it's more of a matter of personal interests. For a while, I've been fascinated by Communism and Marx's philosophy, specifically if it were even possible for the USA to develop into this system. I know about the Soviet Union, China, and North Korea, and how they've claimed to execute Marx's ideology through their current nation. I know the terrifying things that are and have taken place in these "Communist" nations, even when leaders had good intentions behind it. The problem affects the people, mainly because Communism is a system made for the mass. I believe in democracy being the one true humanitarian system for the people, but specifically that which can be brought out through Communism. It doesn't take much to look around and see the failure of democracy under the current Capitalistic society, same as it failed under the Communistic one. However, just like capitalism isn't the only reason why not all can be represented properly, Communism also isn't solely to blame for the oppression that can be observed through many of such nations. I think it's more of a question as to whether or not it was even true Communism, and even more relevant, if we are even living in a true Capitalistic nation. I know this is a problem because we can see various successful socialist nations who were small in population and size, yet when we start looking at broader countries with bigger populations, such as the USSR and North Korea, we see the leaders becoming despots. Democracy is taken away from the public, along with free will. In this area, if I choose to go with it, I'd also want to research if the American narrative of individualism causes this notion of Communism to be impractical, along with the Red Scare that took place during the Cold War Era and even modern times today.
Felt, Alexandra. “Commentary: Why Communism Doesn't Work.” Granite Bay Today, https://granitebaytoday.org/commentary- why-communism-doesnt-work/.
The problems with misconceptions is then the quick spread of misinformation. It creates a general public opinion on something, taking it to the extreme of a "me vs them" mindset. No matter how sensable the other side may speak of their opinions, it will always be perceived as an attack. I've realized this for myself as well, which is why if I take up this problem for my midterm project, I want to focus on capitalism a lot more than I have been thus far. I want to see the pros and cons of both systems, and then try to approach the problem in the most neutral way possible. I do have a bias, a strong one on top of that, which I do think won't be changed by the end of this project. Though I recognize certain benefits Capitalism brings to communities, I can't ignore the drawbacks. We all want to live in a utopia, and my utopia would be a Communistic one, the one described by Marx. In this project, I think a lot of research would go into those philosophical questions that many still debate to this day, such as if humans are naturally greedy, or if it's the system that molds them to be this way. This problem mainly affects those who proclaim themselves as Socialists or Communists. The USA often associates Communism with an authoritarian government, so when someone comes out as Communist, it receives the same reaction as someone coming out as wanting to be the next Stalin or Castro. This doesn't denote the fact that there are Stalin-sympathizers and Castro-sympathizers, but they shouldn't be the whole representation of the party. I'd probably like to research into Mandela, Gandhi, and MLK in this problem, mainly because they are well-known virtuous people who were Communists. This problem can be easily spotted in the media and in the general opinion Americans have on Communism, especially those who don't necessarily do much research on it.
“The Basics of Socialism.” Socialism101.Com, https://www.socialism101.com/basic.
Lastly, I think this problem is probably the most important one for those who wish to not only debunk many misconceptions surrounding Communism, but also those who want to strategize a possible future for such a system. History is important because it allows humans, us, to learn and avoid mistakes done in the past. I like to think of society and the future like a scientific experiment. We have the hypothesis, that being Marx's philosophy, then we had experiments that failed horribly in some nations (USSR, North Korea, and China under Mao), while others managed to succeed for a small amount of time (Chile, Ghana, and Senegal). So, my question is, why did it succeed in some places while fail in others? And why do many people not know of these small socialist nations? I'll probably be researching how the leaders of the socialist/communist movements in these countries differed, and possibly find a reason behind the failure of the typically thought of Communist nations. I think it might be too broad of a question for now. I could take it in so many different directions, from researching on Cuba, to researching the USSR, and the staged coup attempts the USA's CIA set up during the Cold War Era. I will say that this question interests me the most, mainly because I recently found the CIA website, where certain classified documents were allowed to be released. Personally, I just think it's cool to be reading "CIA Top Secret documents" on the Cold War, and be able to use it in my project. I could use this resource with the other problems as well, I'm just not entirely sure if there are any released documents on the Red Scare propaganda the US government pushed on its people.
Central Intelligence Agency, Central Intelligence Agency, https://www.cia.gov/readingroom/.
I think my biggest weakness not being able to actually work on the things I need to work on for EMC, and instead getting distracted by other stuff. I admit that I am turning in this Journal entry late, mainly because instead of working on it last night, I went on an internet dive into CIA Top Secret documents and couldn't stop myself. Worst part is that once I did stop, I just moved on to watching a documentary called, "Fidel: The Untold Story". By the end of watching that documentary, it was 1 in the morning, and I was tired, so I went to bed. While this is a weakness of mine, I also think it can be a strength. I have the passion for this subject, but I think what's more important is that I have the curiosity to ask for more. One can have passion, but without curiosity, I think it can be a dead progression. I have passion for playing the piano, but I don't have enough curiosity to play more pieces, so I end up playing "La La Land" and Studio Ghibli soundtracks every day. My skills aren't progressing in that case, and though I don't think it's a bad thing, I still believe that a healthy individual should have curiosity for at least one thing. It gives them meaning and understanding to what they are doing and what to do. Although this curiosity can lead me to hours and hours of reading CIA documents, it also gives me that motivation to never stop learning.
20/12/21
I've decided to stick with problem number three, that being "why have most previous attempts to Communism never worked?". I want to concentrate it more, and focus only on Cuba for this midterm. The question has been an interest of mine for a while, and though I found the first problem just as interesting, I think that answering the third question first is needed for the other question. The second question is important when considering the audience, especially because it would make the readers be critical of not only the information provided to them but also of themselves. But before answering even that question, I think one has to understand the reasons why nations who took on this notion of "Communism" often failed economically, and then from there translate that failure into a way that helps understand the Red Scare and McCarthyism that took place in the USA. The reason why I chose to narrow it down to Cuba is because to tackle multiple nations and their failures would be too broad of a research. The USSR began with someone who I personally think had a clear view and ideology as to the future of Russia, that being Lenin, but his story ended short and was taken over from Stalin, someone who I view as a power hungry despot who only sought to find ways to suppress his people out from any revolt. China is a particular case, where there was an agricultural revolution done by the peasants, rather than the revolution seen by Marx that would take place under an industrialized nation and be done by the working class. Whether he is praised or labeled as a despot, Cuba had Fidel Castro as its Marxist revolutionist. I've known Che Guevara for years since my dad has always liked to talk about him, and I know he played a major role in not only the Cuban revolution, but also the few beginning years of Castro's rule. Being of a huge interests, this only added more reason to pick my research on Cuba. I also think that though many arguments can be made for the immense amounts of wrong-doings Castro's made, I think he is one of the few who became a nation's leader and tried their best to help their country transition into socialism. I also think that many arguments can be made that it wasn't entirely his fault for the economic failures of Cuba, but also external influence of the Cold War between the US and the USSR.
What I looked forward to the most was the family reunion with Irene, which would involve a lot of card games. During the hybrid school year, we, as a family, would routinely play some Italian card game after lunch. It's always been my favorite part of the day, not only because I enjoy playing any type of card game, but also because we are a very aggressive family. We each got very passionate in our own ways with the game. My mom would get silent, focusing on her strategies, and my dad would play mind tricks, trying to manipulate the game on a mental level. My oldest sister, Irene, liked making jokes, often distracting her opponent, and Elena was usually just herself, not really seeming to play up some elaborate strategy. But who knows, maybe that is her strategy.
Why did Cuba fail its attempt to Communism economically, socially, and politically?
The article I used is titled Fidel Castro and "China's Lesson for Cuba": A Chinese Perspective. The author is Yinghong Cheng and it was published in March, 2007. I found it using the database Syracuse University Libraries, and I used the search terms "Cuba" and "Fidel Castro". The article examines the post-Mao transformation that occurred in China, and its major influence on the world, especially the one it had on Cuba. Castro has praised Mao and his nation, giving his support for China's crackdown on the pro-democracy movement that took place in 1989. At the same time, the article examines that although Castro had shown clear support for China and its ways, he also had doubts to its vitality in socialism. Analyzing Castro's policies, one can see that even with the support, Castro never really fully adopted any of China's policies, and instead stuck with his old strategy when dealing with the USSR's influence. (Cheng 13).
I find this article not only useful, but interesting too. Castro came into power when many Marxist revolutions were taking place all around the war, beginning with the Bolshevik revolution, all to way to the Maoist revolution. Each revolutionary had its own way of interpreting Karl Marx's words, what we often categorize as Orthodox Marxism, and adopting it in a way that was appropriate for where their own country stood at at the time. The article gives a depth analyses on Cuba's policies under Castro, and how it was affected by those of China's. Although my question focuses on Cuba, it's impossible to answer it without taking into account what's going on politically in other parts of the world. Castro took power of Cuba during the Cold War era, a time where there were huge tensions between the USSR and the US. China also played a huge role in the rise of Communism during the 20th century, aiding it neighboring allies such as the North Vietnamese and the North Koreans during their wars. Their prevalence in history still shines true today, as we see Russia, China, and the US being the three world superpowers. The relations between these countries affected Cuba, along with each of these nations relation with Cuba itself. This article provides a compelling argument to China's influence on Cuban policies, and how its continued to affect the nation even after Castro's resignation.
Cheng, Y. (2007). Fidel Castro and “China's lesson for Cuba”: A Chinese perspective. The China Quarterly, 189, 24–42. https://doi.org/10.1017/s0305741006000786
For my journal today, I've been using the book Cuba: From Economic Take-Off to Collapse under Castro, written by Jorge Salazar-Carrillo and Andro Nodarse Leon. I found the book on the database of Syracuse University Libraries, and used the search terms "Cuba", "Fidel", and "Castro". Carrillo is a professor in the department of economics and the director of the Economic Research Center at Florida International University. He specializes his research primarily on Asia and Latin America, along with US macro and microeconomics. He graduated from the University of California, Berkeley, with a Ph.D. and M.A. in economics. Leon is the co-founder to the Managing Partner of LEON, MAYER and Co. He also founded LionGrove following LM in 2018. He graduated with a B.S. in Economics and a B.S.E. in Systems Engineering from the University of Pennsylvania. The book was published in 2015, with the purpose of figuring out what exactly set Cuba on a path of economic failure. The beginning of the book focuses more on the past economic history of Cuba, setting up the potentiality Cuba had for their economic prospering in the future. Then they start detailing what exactly changed over the course of the Cuban Revolution in 1959, where Castro then took control. Towards the end of the book, they use data tables to compare the successes of Cuba compared to the rest of the world. As a disclaimer, this book focuses only on the economy of Cuba, not the social impacts Castro had on the population.
The difference between this book and the previous article is that this one gets more into the problems surrounding Castro's economic policies, and when comparing Cuba with other nations, it uses statistics rather than a personal take on what's similar and different. The previous article was also more preoccupied with explaining Mao's policies, and then using these to contrast to Castro's policies. The book did help a lot more with answering my question than the previous article, but I do think it came with a few flaws. The book would repeatedly say that was tarnished Cuba's potentiality was Castro's overregulation on the economy. They would restate his egocentric acts of wanting to have Cuba succeed on its own, without the USA's help. While I do agree, I think it's necessary to also acknowledge the political time period, and the faults the US had on Cuba's failure as well. The book seemed to place all the blame on Castro and his "ego", without referencing the Red Scare and McCarthyism taking place in America, which I think played a huge role in the USA's treatment towards Cuba. The authors proposed throughout the book that Cuba should pull back on any government regulation it has over its country's economy, and let a free market take place in order to restore its economy to where it could've been if Castro's "ego" hadn't gotten in the way.
Salazar-Carrillo, Jorge, and Andro Nodarse-León. Cuba from Economic Take-off to Collapse under Castro. Routledge, Taylor & Francis Group, 2017.
The article I used was more of a preface to the book recently written by NYU professor Ada Ferrer, the daughter of two Cuban immigrants who moved to the US when she was just a young child during the reign of Fidel Castro. She's written three books, each focusing on Cuban history, those being Insurgent Cuba, Freedom's Mirror: Cuba and Haiti in the Age of Revolution, and Cuba: An American History. Her goal is mainly to analyze Cuba's history, starting all the way back to its discovery from Christopher Columbus and then its conquest from the Spanish empire. It puts the failure of Cuba's economy today not solely on Castro's management of it, but also it years and years of exploitation from other nations in the the previous years. It explains the roles Spain and the US played in the various ways the land and the people had been used for financial benefits, and explains the reasoning why there was such a huge support for Castro and his revolution. The article presented some solutions Ferrer had thought up on, a major one being that the US and Cuban government should come together and figure out ways to support each other. The author primarily places the blame on previous attitudes the US government took when approaching Cuban foreign affairs, hence putting most of the responsibility on the US government to take the first step and aid Cuban affairs. There is a bias to this book, since she grew up viewing Cuba through her growing years in the US. She also has the national heritage bias, but overall I do think that her view on Cuba and its current standing are close to neutral. She doesn't take an outright stand or preference to one side over the other, and provides mistakes both sides have done.
I find this article intriguing, and does bring my interest to reading Ferrer's new book, Cuba: An American History. Unlike the previous book, she focuses on Cuban history at a broader length, going as far back as to 1492. She uses US' foreign policies with Cuba in the late 19th century and early 20th century as an important context to modern-day Cuba, but also provides that critical lense on Castro's management of Cuban affairs during his rule. In modern terms, I do think this article does provide itself to be useful, although the book is where it gets more nitty-gritty. I think that her thinking as to how to adjust Cuba's economy is reasonable in today's world, but I also don't think it'll ever actually happen. I don't believe the US government will ever give enough donation or aid to the island, especially considering that the embargo placed on Cuba during the Cold War still remains in effect today, and Americans were just recently allowed to visit the island as of 2019. It's understandable that America took its hostile actions it did at the time, but I see no reason to remain with the same policies towards Cuba as we were over 50 years ago. For this weeks database, I used Novel NY and used the search term "cuba".
Anderson, Jon Lee. "A New Cuba? The Fight to Define the Post-Castro Era." Foreign Affairs, vol. 101, no. 1, Jan.- Feb. 2022, pp. 173+. Gale In Context: Opposing Viewpoints, link.gale.com/apps/doc/A687663064/GPSu=nysl_ca_guild&sid=bookmarkGPS&xid=4aed3003. Accessed 26 Jan. 2022.
With this assignment, both SDA 3 and 4, I realize that I've never used databases as thoroughly as I did then. I recall back in middle school when the teachers would introduce such tools, but to use them as extensively as I did for these two projects, I have never done. I've never read scholarly articles before these assignments to the full extent I did. Typically, if I used a scholarly article, it'd mainly be a quick read on one small section and then move on. For this assignment, I found it way more helpful to read the whole article and fruit out as much information as needed. Scholarly articles have a credential behind them that not all published research-based texts have. As a scholar, you are presenting your research either from a professional and credentialed place or as an upcoming professional and one that was overlooked by someone with valid credentials. While scholarly articles can be very helpful, I found them also challenging to be valuable to my specific research. I believe it did hinder my progress as the search for a well-developed, thought-out, and unbiased article took time. Not only did I need to look for an article that would sufficiently answer my question, but I also had to critique it and recognize any type of bias it may have on the subject at hand. As for my curiosity, I think the articles helped a lot. Not often would I find an article that would answer head-on what I was looking for, filling the research with a lot of extra information. Names, dates, and terms I never saw or needed to understand would be introduced, leading me into a rabbit hole of research on top of research, even on things that concerned with Cuba but didn't necessarily answer my question in any meaningful way. For my research skills, it did help in the sense that they forced me to adapt and figure out ways to use the sources and manipulate them in ways that fit with my aim. Most articles on this topic typically are structured in argumentative ways, so through the readings, I had to filter through all the biases for the informative sections, while still keeping them in the back of my mind. All in all, I found this good source called JSTOR, a website full of primary resources and research articles that are easily accessible through the Syracuse University login. The discovery of this website helped me so much in being more time-efficient for when I looked for resources. Other than that, what I found most interesting in the scholarly articles was the difference in their setup compared to how books are usually formatted.
As for the SDA, what I found most difficult was a tie between the animation in SDA 3 and the setup of SDA 4. It was pointed out how confusing the timeline and structure of my fourth SDA got, and I completely agree with it, especially since I was conscious about it while organizing it. I wasn't sure how to go about it, whether links back to some previous slide would've helped, or if that would've just made things even more confusing. The question I aimed to answer was, "Why did Cuba fail its attempt to Communism economically, socially, and politically?" and whether or not it was answered could honestly be up for debate. Cuba, along with everything else involved in the Cold War, is rather primarily derived from interpretation. I have my own opinions, just like most other people who are informed on its situation, and that can greatly influence the answer to my question. Throughout my research, I did come to realize that there wasn't a one for all answer. A few things, such as the fall of the USSR, are known to have affected Cuba's GDP, while other things, such as Castro's policies, are really up to the individual. I thought that the best I could do was present it from various aspects, but especially from the Cuban one. My audience, I'm assuming, would primarily be from the US, so they'd be taught from the US perspective about the Cuban crisis. Of those forms, there is a spectrum of both extremes, but what we don't often really take into consideration are those who stuck behind in Cuba, never left, and still look up to Castro almost as if he were a God. Why they do, not many people know. It's such a complex dilemma that I don't think it's ever possible to feel accomplished or satisfied. When you feel as if you've reached what you've wanted, you just find yourself with double the amount of questions. Did the Cubans who remained in Cuba only praise Castro because he was a symbol of someone who stood up against the US? What about those who fled to Florida, have their lives improved significantly? What's the relationship between Cuba and Russia like today? I think it's this endless cycle of questions upon questions that helps make my curiosity the strongest C (communication, collaboration, creativity, critical thinking, curiosity). I'm always wondering and wanting to know more, adding as much as possible to my notes and assignments. My weakest C would be communication, mainly because I tend to spend more time on a project than anticipated, and often forget to reach out to my coordinators about my delay.
My goal for next month is to probably continue with Cuba. Through this research, I was able to figure out that more was needed to understand Cuba. The complexity and various outside forces each have their own stories, things that need to be uncovered to have a full grasp around Cuba and its development to today. I began this project intending to only focus on the Cuban economy, how it was before the revolution to how it became after. Through the research, it was hard to contain all the information presented to only economical ones, since the Cuban Revolution impacted so many different things from the economy to society and politics. Every change made would indirectly affect something else since that's how history works. Marx's publication of the Communist Manifesto indirectly affected the Bolshevik Revolution, the ideologies of Guevara, the Red Scare in the US, the Cold War. History is often explained as this happened, which then caused this reaction to occur, which when it's done to get a basic sense of something, it's understandable. But to use it in an argument, or to apply criticism on an event, such as the conflict currently taking place between Ukraine and Russia, one has to have a more complex understanding of the situation. I strongly believe that if I want to make a reasonable argument for Cuba and Marxism, I'll have to have a more complex understanding of the situation—take into account the social, political, and economic impact Castro, the US, the revolution, and the Cold War had, and how each was translated and manifested into what we now know as Cuba today. Hence why I'm caught at a crossroads between two questions: what formed the Cuban Revolution and its ideology and how does Fidel Castro's ideology compare to that of Marxism? The former one focuses more on an historical perspective, and how the ideological turn of events that occurred during the Revolution still has profound impacts on Cuban identity today. The latter, instead, takes on a more ideological stance. I'd be going back to presenting and researching my information as I did towards the beginning of the year, where I uncovered a lot of Marx's and other philosophers thinking. The major people that I'd be analyzing would be Fidel Castro, Raul Castro, Camilo Cienfuegos, Juan Almeida Bosque, and Che Guevara.
For this month, I prefer an open inquiry mainly just to start taking that extra step in independent research. As for my essential question, I've decided on doing a combination of both questions. I'll be focusing on the Cuban Revolution, then compare how it developed and its outcomes with what Marx iterated in both his Communist Manifesto and his Das Kapital. I remember in the beginning of the year, I had really wanted to do something similar with the Bolshevik Revolution, or even the Cultural Revolution. I think comparing the Cuban Revolution with Marx's ideology will be the most interesting out of all because unlike the other two, the Revolution in Cuba didn't commence with a Marxist instigation. It wasn't until 1961 when Castro came out on a live broadcast as being a Marxist-Leninist. What I know for sure is that Che Guevara and Raul Castro, two huge influential figures in Fidel Castro's life, were already self-declared Marxists before the Revolution, possibly huge reasons for Fidel's turn towards Socialism. I plan on using my journal assignments to publish notes on Marx's writings, along with self-analysis on the Cuban Revolution. I know how thick and dense Das Kapital is, which is especially critical as to how I plan to take advantage of my journal assignments. Breaking down the book into multiple sections and thoroughly dissecting it in a way that can then be easily manipulated into my final SDA will just make my final product that much easier to accomplish. My most successful SDA was my fourth one, the Opposing Sides, and I think the reason why was because I had written the notes and had a basic scheme as to the formation. The final product did come out a bit confusing with the timelines jumping from place to place, and I think the brunt of the blame should be placed on my lack of creativity. I knew as I was finalizing the assignment, I was jumping all over the place, and the only solution I could think up at the time was just to refer the audience back to a previous slide.
Fidel Castro self-declared himself as a Marxist-Leninist in 1961, just a few years after the Cuban Revolution. This declaration, along with the nationalization of US businesses in Cuba, was the trigger for the years and years of hostility between the US and Cuba. Marxist-Leninism falls under the orthodox Marxism, an adaptation or interpretation manifested by Vladimir Lenin on Marxism, or Marx's ideology. Where it gets confusing is the multitude amounts of terminologies, and trying to understand what's different and what's similar between each one. For terms, we have Socialism, Communism, Marxism, Anarchism, Leninism, Maoism, Trotskyism, Democratic Socialism, Social Democracy, and Revisionist Marxism, just to name a few. In this post, I'm going to be defining and contrasting only the terms related to this next project. These are all definitions from the Marxist point of view, and are going to be what I refer to for my project when using such words.
Socialism: The stage of economic and social development that takes place in between the transition from Capitalism to Communism. It follows the Proletarian Revolution, when the workers rule over the replaced bourgeois. It is the workers responsibility to properly rearrange society in a way that can then easily transition into Communism, which is why this stage often entails a lot of redistribution of wealth. It should be noted that any type of nationalization of private businesses is not Socialism if done under a Capitalist regime. This section is often left up to interpretation, mainly due to Marx's vague explanation. He gives full detail into Capitalism and Communism, but often overlooks the detail concerning the steps needed to transition between one to the other. This is where Orthodox Marxism often occurs, such as Leninism, Maoism, and Trotskyism.
Communism: A socio-economic system that is the antithesis to Capitalism. Theoretically, it is a borderless, moneyless, classless state, with an abolition of bourgeois private property. A bourgeois private property does not entail personal belongings, but rather the property brought on by the bourgeois, such as money and the monetization of natural resources that haven't yet acquired that level of labor value. It is also the final stage of societal evolution, which begins with Capitalism, transitions to Socialism, and finalizes itself into Communism. I also think it's vital to note what Marx said in his Communist Manifesto that, "Communism deprives no man of the power to appropriate the products of society: all it does is to deprive him of the power to subjugate the labor of others by means of such appropriation." It is said that Communism was born out of Marxism, and it is a tangible concept that can be implemented. The Marxist definition of Communism has never been successfully achieved in history. I would say that the kibbutz foundation in Israel would be one of the closest to a Marxist Communism society.
Capitalism: A socio-economic system that is primarily based on the private ownership of production and exploitation of labor. It contains a free, unregulated market in modern times, which tends to benefit those in more privileged classes. The only way for this system to operate is with a class system, in which Marx identifies two distinct classes: one being the bourgeois and the other the proletarians. The bourgeois are the exploitative class, who owns the capital under this system, while the proletarians are the exploited class who serve only as the labor force. The US has experienced Capitalism's most purest form in its laissez-faire capitalist era during what historians refer to as the Gilded Age.
Marxism: Economic, social, and political theory developed by Karl Marx, a German philosopher who lived in the 19th century, that primarily utilized historical materialism in its critiques. While Marxism includes detailed explanations behind Marx's Communism, it also is heavily filled with critiques on Capitalism. A huge pillar to his critiques is his labor theory of value. While the theory itself isn't unique to him—that the value to a commodity is objectively measured by the average amount of time spent on producing it—he does introduce a unique spin to it. He introduces the cost and value of labor power—the capability from the worker to produce—which depended on the average labor hours it took from society to adequately reinforce people with the capability to work the next day. The question left to ask is where do capitalists manage to make profits? This is where surplus value comes into the equation. If the average labor time needed to reinforce people was five hours, and the wage per hour were two, then ten dollars a day would be what we'd consider the "minimum pay". His next pillar of criticism was alienation, an alienation that is driven into the working people through competition.
Leninism: A political ideology established by Vladimir Lenin, a Marxists political thinker who led the Bolshevik Revolution in Russia, also known as the October Revolution. It doesn't differ much from Marxism, other than the fact that it's a practical theory which focuses primarily on the dictatorship of the proletariat, as a step that Lenin found necessary for the transition from Capitalism, or as he had it Czarism, to Communism. Leninism is at its essential core the morphing of Marxism to fit the view of what Russia was in 1917. Under Marxism, the theory goes that a revolution brought by the proletariat would occur under an industrialized and capitalized state. Leninism instead implements the revolution to fit in a time when the state isn't yet industrialized nor capitalized. Marxism also theorized that a revolution would be inevitable, since the bourgeois class would never permit the state to progress into socialism. Lenin disagreed, speculating that a capitalized state would be powerful enough to delude the public into thinking they were progressing into socialism, effectively suppressing the revolution. What I think sets the two most apart is the fact that Marx believed in a spontaneous revolution, out from a collective recognition between all working classes of their status. Lenin believed in the need of an "intellectual group" who would guide the revolution, rather than the working class. Hence the creation of the Bolshevik party, composed of those he considered intellectual, such as himself.
Democratic Socialism vs Social Democracy:
The definitions I used were from the Marxist view-point. Considering our current political climate, everyone will have their own interpretations on how Communism, Socialism, and Capitalism functionally work. Some equate the USSR with Communism, while others take the Marxist ideological definition of Communism, which is what I refer to when mentioning Communism. The word Socialism is throw around a lot in today's media, used to describe lockdowns, universal medicare, minimum wage, and just pretty much any progressive act taken by the Democrats in Congress. It's also used as a descriptive term for European social systems, which typically are more "advanced", from the progressive standpoint, than that of the US'.
Works Cited:
https://www.differencebetween.com/difference-between-marxism-and-vs-leninism/
What I found most fulfilling about this month was my better comprehension on Marx and his ideology. Of his works, I had only read The Communist Manifesto, which only laid the first few steps to Marxism. Reading, and taking the time to understand it using online resources, brought me that much closer to Marx and his critiques. Of course, I'd like to reread the book when I have the time to so I can take it slower and actually understand what Marx is talking about that second round about, but for now, I'm glad I took the first initiative by at least "attempting" to understand his critiques. This was a benefit to having little guidance over my journals, since I got to decide how to organize them depending on what I needed and wanted them to go in order to help me best understand my processing. The negative was that I probably over challenged myself, and while I am glad that I got to semi-read Das Kapital, I also think it ended up being a bit sloppy and over rushed.
I approached this SDA differently since I showcased my information through an infographic rather than a slideshow. I found that with the type of information I wanted to provide, it essentially divided into two: Marx's Das Kapital and Castro's speeches. Organizing it in a simple and easy way as a slideshow was and is possible, but I found that not only would it be new, but also easier to navigate if I made it into a more interactive infographic. The site I used, genial.ly, also was very useful and had its own cool perks to it. I think not only was this new step towards a new type of platform vital to my project, but also my deeper analysis into Marx. Learning more on Marxism while also analyzing Castro on a more individual basis simultaneously helped me with comparing and contrasting primarily their ideology. It also made me understand more profoundly how Marxism is just an ideology, not a policy. What sets any type of orthodox Marxism from Marxism itself is its practice. Marxism is the utopian idealistic world, while Leninism, Castroism, and Maoism are each attempts to putting Marxism into practice, each in its own way.
Following this fifth SDA, I think I might stick with an open inquiry, although I have learned to scale it back a bit. Especially since we're nearing the AP exams, along with the final symposium, I think I'll be using these last few final journals just to collect my thoughts so I can use whatever extra time to prioritize my last few researches needed. For example, during this project, I found that watching a documentary on Mao and his policies on China during their Agrarian reform helping with understanding Castro's approach to his nation. I'll probably use these next few weeks as an opportunity to get a better grasp of historical context concerning Cuba in the late 1900's. As for my speech, my top three ideas as of now are as follows:
1. Difference between Marxism and Castroism. The goal here would to have the audience leave with a better understanding of Marxism and Communism, and how their perceptions are all based off of attempted failures in the 20th century.
2. What Castro could've done differently to stick more true to a Marxist implementation. If I choose this one, I would aim to use this "we should learn from our mistakes" kind of attitude, and show that although attempted implementations of Communism have failed multiple times, it was due to so many external factors and we shouldn't be quick to judge.
3. What Marx didn't take into account, and how we see that play out in Cuba. This one would be a bit more cynical than the other two since I'd be more focused on everything Marx and Castro got wrong, but I'd still want the end goal to be having people walk out with a different perception on Communism, or Marxism if that makes it easier, and have a more open mind to its ideology.
I'm mainly torn between the first two. I think the third one is too ambiguous, and even wrong in its assumptions since it would require Castro to have followed Marx step-by-step. At the end of the day, while people can critique Marx as harshly as they want, it's never been successfully fabricated the way Marx envisioned his idealistic ideology to come about. As for the first two, if I pick the first one, I'd already have a sort of platform to it since my fifth SDA was kind of centered around that theme. My second one would require more critical analysis from my behalf since I'd have to collect everything I know about Marx and everything I understand about Castro and his policies, and then critique them through a Marxist lens. That might just be the reason why I'm leaning more towards the second one since I think it'd be interesting and fun to do something different, while also applying a bit more of "me" into the argument.
I'd probably connect the second idea to the theme of The Greater Good by delivering it with a "we learn from our mistakes" sort of manner. At the end of the day, everyone has made up their own ideas and conclusions on Castro and his policies, but I think majority can come to a consensus that this Marxist ideal is a utopia, a land which in itself is unachievable, but is still strived for. From Lenin, to Ho Chi Minh, to Castro each presented themselves striving for this utopia, whether or not they actually cared for it. We all want a better world for everyone, and Capitalism (in my opinion) just isn't the right answer. That care idea is what drove me to research on this topic, mainly with the curiosity of whether or not Socialism and Communism were truly the only other alternative to Capitalism, and if so, why have they never succeeded? If the majority can come to agreement that a better world for everyone is the end goal, and both Socialism and Communism present themselves as the solution to this, how did the USSR, China, Korea, and Cuba fail? What about Marx, or about Castro, fail? And, most importantly, is Marxism a dead ideology, one that should be forgotten due to its unattainable and unrealistic standards in humanity? I probably won't touch on all of these during the symposium, but I do want the audience to walk away not only with more of an open mind, but with more questions and curiosity, just like I did and still do on this topic.
My biggest worry for the symposium is probably the speech itself. I think that while my delivery skills are not the best, they're manageable. As for my writing skills, it lacks in not only grammar, but even a cohesive element. I'm worried I'll either be too vague or too complex. I want the speech to be light and entertaining, but also serious and even a tad bit cynical. I think by presenting my speech with pessimism will enforce that need for change, whether it be from an individual level or a societal one.
Did you find the freedom of the course to be challenging? Explain.
Did you find your coordinator to be helpful throughout the year? Explain.
What were the biggest challenges you faced in your project this year? Things to consider reflecting upon include: motivation, prioritizing your research, journals, SDAs, asking the right questions, scheduling, etc.
What role did asking questions play in getting you to think or rethink about your topic?
Do you feel as though the level of research or investigation this year has prepared you for the next step in your education? How do you know?
Did you feel comfortable taking risks when creating assignments/journaling/discussing potential learning opportunities with your coordinator?
Of the 5Cs, which did you find most challenging to fulfill? Why? - 5Cs = creativity/critical thinking/communication/collaboration/curiosity
What assignment are you most proud of this year? Why?
Is there anything you would like to add or recommend to your coordinators about how to make EMC better? What would you change?
Finally, how do you feel about your symposium speech - the content, the delivery, the experience? Please explain.
(1) This year, I really enjoyed being able to finally do what I've wanted to do for a while. I've been interested in Marx and his philosophy for over three years now, so to have an incentive to stop and read—to really understand—both Marxist literature and Orthodox ones as well. The freedom that was given was adequate enough, especially when one knows exactly what they want to study next. At the beginning of the year, it was guided enough to give the person enough time to self-reflect and really think about what exactly they want to know or understand by the end of the year—or even the end of the month. Then, as the months passed, it became less restrictive and would put more responsibility on the individual to essentially accomplish what they want. Although it may seem daunting to some, I think having liberty actually makes the research easier since the person can choose whatever medium, whatever topic, and whatever communicative method they felt most comfortable with. (2) Meeting with Mrs. Gergen throughout the year really helped a lot. A lot of the ideas that would later become my favorites were either inspired by or even presented by Mrs. Gergen, along with other people I communicated with often. I knew generally what I wanted to research next, and how to go about it, but certain questions or the creativity that was needed for both the research and the assignments came through discussions and collaborations. I would take the feedback given to me after an SDA or a journal, and try to apply it into my next project.
(3) My biggest problem this year was probably due dates. I had the motivation, which I often like to think is synonymous to curiosity, and I like to think I prioritize my research. I could definitely be more organized in my research, and make it so I don't overload or underload myself too much. For example, I set myself this goal to read Das Kapital in a month and looking back on it now, I really don't know what the heck was going through my mind. Almost two months have passed since then, and I haven't even reached the halfway mark of the book. I even organized my SDA for that month to be centered around Marx's Das Kapital, so when I was just a few days away from the due date, I realized just how screwed I was. In the end, I had to rely on outside sources to draw a conclusion on each chapter of the book instead of analyzing and interpreting the book in my own words. (4) Throughout my research, I constantly asked myself questions. They ranged as generic and simple as asking myself, "Who the heck is this person, and why should I be listening to him?" to more complex ones such as, "How did this person come to think this way, and what kind of impact did they have on the coming generation?" The more straightforward questions often helped guide me through my research in order to then answer the more complex ones. (5) I've read the most theoretical literature in the course of this year than probably the rest of my life combined. I do think it's made me much more critical and able to read more sophisticated books, and has gotten me a lot more comfortable with reading scholastic articles. I'd also stretch it a bit and say that using this year to study one specific subject has helped me in figuring out what exactly I enjoy doing. It's helped me explore my likes and dislikes, along with testing if I had enough patience with the subject at hand.
(6) When I spoke with my coordinator, apart from the aid of creativity, they also helped me organize my thoughts and kind of cleared my mind. This year, most of my SDAs were slideshows, apart from my first and last ones. I chose to go with a podcast for my first one because I've always loved listening to them, so to be able to be a part of that intrigued me. Then, as I was recording and after I finished, I realized just how bad I was and how confusing it ended up being. For my last one, at first, I was going to go with a slideshow but then opted for an infographic because I felt it'd be the most coherent way of presenting my research for that month. (7) Out of the five C's, I think that my biggest challenge was fulfilling the communication C. I'd often come up with crazy ideas and goals, and then jump right into them without stopping and thinking about it. I wouldn't share it with others to have their feedback unless it was required or I had already scheduled a meeting with them. Otherwise, I think I'd often opt for the easiest option when it comes to communication, which was just sticking to my own and not really expanding much with others. (8) As for which assignment I'm most proud of myself for this year would probably have to be my fourth SDA. I'm happy with how the organization turned out, and I like how I added various perspectives, along with verifiable data and facts. It didn't really have much of a personal touch to it as some of my other SDA's might, but I like how packed with information it is, giving a lot to my disposal in just one slideshow. For some, I know it's not their preferred organization, but for me, I like to often look at the bigger picture and then come to a conclusion afterward.
(9) The way EMC was handled this year worked great for me. I can't really think of much about where or how it can be improved, although I guess we could try to host more meetings. I never really spoke or knew much about the others who were taking this course alongside me, except for those in my classes such as Shreya, Nithya, and Karsen. So, in general, maybe a few more after-school meetings during the year just so we can all get to know one another better, and maybe have a few collaborations between each other. (10) I watched and listened to my speech just recently and I wasn't able to follow through my whole speech because I was cringing too much. I remember that as I spoke my speech, I was nervous at first, but then quickly got comfortable. The slides were definitely helpful and needed, and played a huge role in my comfortableness. I do think that, in hindsight, I was really tense inside and to an extent, I think I got really lucky because I know for a fact that if I had done one slight slip up, like forgetting the whole theme of one particular slide, I probably would've either froze or began blabbering about something that wasn't coherently thought through before. I also think I could've done way better with my choice of words. I realized midway through my speech that I was being really confrontational and using the pronoun "you" a lot, rather than "we" or "us". I did try to fix it, but even then, I feel like I made the switch up seem too obvious. I also still remember this one part of the speech where I wanted to use the simple word "guilty", but for some reason, it just didn't exist in my archive at the time, so instead I used the word "victim". I honestly have nothing to say to that except that I blame myself still to this day for not having picked a better word. Apart from "innocent", I really can't think up of any other better antonym to "guilty" than "victim".