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I think that Bugs Bunny is more entertaining than Mickey Mouse. Bugs Bunny is more sarcastic. Bugs Bunny makes better jokes. Bugs Bunny gets out of trouble in fun ways. I would rather watch Bugs Bunny cartoons. Also, Bugs Bunny has friends who are more interesting. Daffy Duck and Yosemite Sam are always trying to cause trouble for Bugs Bunny. Bugs Bunny always wins in the end.
Mickey Mouse is entertaining, too, but not as much as Bugs Bunny. Mickey has a lot of friends. His friends are Minnie Mouse, Donald Duck, Goofy, and Pluto. I don’t understand why Goofy is a dog that can talk, but Pluto is a dog that is a pet. Mickey and his friends get in trouble, too, but it is usually not as interesting. They always solve their problems together.