A. Let us analyze the parts.
1. Setting: The place mentioned in the story is the room of Ella, then restaurant, and the concert venue. The time is evening.
2. Character(s): The characters are Ella and Ezra. They are lovers and fond of music.
3. Plot: The plot is linear in manner. It starts with the day before her birthday, then her birthday, and its celebration.
4. Conflict: Probably the conflict is the inability of Ella to watch a concert of her favorite band and so her boyfriend surprises her with such.
5. Theme: The theme is love and how to show it to your loved.
B. Let us have a closer look at the process of narrating the story.
First, you should have a clear setting. The time and place of the story were specifically mentioned. It helped the readers to follow the events and the discourse of the characters.
Second, you should make impactful and clear characters. The characters were alive in our imagination. Their exchange of conversation showing the feeling of joy, excitement, and love were very imminent that will be easy for you to retell the story.
Third, you should link the events in an orderly manner. The author did not use transitional devices in the story. He instead used the conversation between the characters to show action indicating the smooth flow of the story.
Fourth, you should use simple and precise language. The language used in the story is so simple. It can be understood by all for the author used simple terms to have the events flow smoothly.
Lastly, you should use actual conversation. The use of the direct or quoted statements of the author to show the exchange of conversation between the two characters makes your narrative clear. The author shows the excitement and love to both characters through their uttered words.