"Creon's Humility"
"Creon's Humility"
Anthony Graf (Class of 2026) is pursuing a major in Musical Theatre and a minor in Philosophy.
This essay was written under the supervision of Dr. Jeremy Specland in Spring 2024.
The Cornerstone Transformative Texts I Writing Prizes are awarded to the best creative projects written in ENG 206.
Essays are nominated by the instructor and the winners are selected by the Director of the Cornerstone Program.
Prompt: Antigone and Antony in Cleopatra both present their narratives through not only what the audience sees happen on the stage but also what characters report happening off stage. Write one of the scenes that the play implies but does not explicitly present. Your scene should comprise at least 150 lines of poetry or 1000 words (the minimum is whichever is less). You may either a) write the scene in the style of the original or b) forge your own style (e.g., a novelistic depiction or a stand-alone poem).
(Enter CREON and MESSENGER)
CREON
Before me lies the half-devoured, putrid corpse.
A righteous end for enemies of royal state.
And though the prophet’s words must bear the truth, still now
my honest sense repels me from the sight. A king
owes what to his adversary? Justice ne’er
can hesitate. Must he submit to enemies
once freedom from their earthy burdens is achieved?
And what of that Antigone, whose name is laced
with spiteful venom from the viper’s fang. What acts
must she endure for that Teiresias to claim
her falsities as truth. Has such a prophet been
entranced beyond his sense? I cannot think it false.
MESSENGER
Lord, pray may remind you of your promise to
your state. The prophet cannot speak what is not true.
Teiresias has spoken words that may bring strife
into the heart, but none rules greater than the king
who humbly bears the truth. Recall the foolishness
of Oedipus, who lived denying all he heard
the prophet spoke, and cast a shadow of disgrace
for disregarding truth, just as you now shirk from
this body you must lay to rest.
CREON
You speak such words
to me, and yet do I remain uneasy here
beside this rotting corpse. For here on stand on that
great state which lives on sturdy foundation of law.
Must that strong rock of order shake and crumble neath
the quaking wrath of rash and thoughtless acts?
MESSENGER
To you, my lord, these acts may appear fierce and crass.
A king who stands at eagle’s height is quick to see
the foe around man’s bend, yet loses sight of roots
that threaten crooked paths ahead. Yes, you may speak
of state and law, but know your people rather speak
of family whom they owe their being to, and still
of mercy, charitable enough to save a man.
CREON
A charity to save a man deserving it.
MESSENGER
Perhaps to save a brother my good lord! Do you
not think of this poor man, your sister’s flesh and blood?
CREON
A traitor.
MESSENGER
In his time on earth, but now a man
whom death has cleansed of sin. A corpse can ne’er bear spite.
CREON
So say not spite, but taunting nonetheless.
This cursed bloodline hounds me time and time again.
MESSENGER
And might
you live to put such taunts to rest?
CREON
And burial,
you think, will silence him henceforth?
MESSENGER
Kinship between
those of familiar blood may end that feud which lives
beyond the strict confines of death.
CREON
Can it be so?
Wise Teiresias, did you know of the fierce
necessity of such a crude burial act?
And did my harsh tongue scold, unjustly, innocence?
Condemned for doing naught but speaking what you know
is true?
MESSENGER
Ask not I sir, but say of such to his
face whom you speak of. There shall true humility
find home.
To whom do you now speak? A life defined by mere
humility is as a life among the stars -
contemplated, but never lived. The kingly pride
that reigns within my heart does crack and wilt, I fear.
CREON
Humility. So it must be.
MESSENGER
And do
you find such actions difficult to swallow Lord?
CREON
To whom do you now speak? A life defined by mere
humility is as a life among the stars -
contemplated, but never lived. The kingly pride
that reigns within my heart does crack and wilt, I fear.
MESSENGER
Fear not, my Lord. Such cracks oft clear to leave behind
The tender flesh of souls.
CREON
And what of state?
MESSENGER
And what,
indeed?
CREON
A state reliant on the strength of hearts
that shift relentlessly stand chance as much as men
engulfed in sand.
MESSENGER
But think, my Lord, of that your son
hath once before proclaimed: “the ones that bend preserve
their limbs and leaves.”
CREON
Oh think! My son, my flesh and blood
to whom I lashed so ruthlessly. Where may he be?
My men, come quick! O let us bury this poor man,
that he and I may fin’lly rest. And quickly may
we find my son so I may fall beneath him once.
To tell my strong and righteous son I see my sins
so clear as though they never, to me, could be true.
MESSENGER
But where, my Lord, to find him so?
CREON
I know my son.
The man’s ambition likely draws him to his bride
to be. That cave of she, Antigone, is where
we shall first look. O Polyneices, son of that my cursed
Jocasta. Now I see your face. I know not how
I lost such sight, but now I know you clear. Your face
contains such angles, arches, blemishes and scars,
and should I dare to lift your lids I know I’d see
that hue of healthy lumber growing day by day,
turned faint from early death for which I punished you.
I know this face from my good sister, stolen from
the world too soon. To think that I withheld respect
while mourning her with every sunrise. Hypocrite,
I name myself! Pour earth upon that face, I beg,
I cannot bear to look! Jocasta, now I plead
forgiveness. Guide your son to heav’nly rest, that I
may seek amends with her, your brave Antigone,
whose strength I took advantage of.
MESSENGER
So be it. You
good men have heard your king.
CREON
But let it not be my
judgment that makes so true an order.
MESSENGER
Whose then, sir?
CREON
Man embracing man; born of state.
MESSENGER
What say
you now of state, my king? You once swore by your state
as sole anchor of truth.
CREON
What I once knew as state cannot exist.
MESSENGER
And what
instead?
CREON
Ask not for what I cannot give to you.
The state of those who mourn and cry
for justice out of malice. Or perhaps of dear
Antigone who knew what none but prophets knew
and suffered for her pleas. A king is ne’er a state
so long as trunks cannot be trees. The ocean not
confined to water, nor the sky but clouds alone.
These words are hard to say, but I am troubled, friend.
MESSENGER
Your words are valiant, my lord, and men will find
fulfillment in them yet.
CREON And I am glad, but I
am torn. The instability of life does show
his ugly face and taunt my smallness - tease the depths
of my inadequacy. Here I am: humble
and desp’rate. Gods, do grant me what I lack to lead!
(beat)
Alas the silence murmurs. Good Antigone
what do you know? I am at your mercy now.