Imagery: Butcher’s main element throughout all his stories is magic. He uses very in depth imagery so that his readers are able to see the magic as he imagines it in his own mind. He shows how much power the magic has by how much imagery he uses to describe it.
Characters: The characters in his writings are more of a tool than a person. Many of the side characters are used to progress the story forward or have a certain skill that the main character needs in order to continue on. In his novel Blood Rites an assassin for hire named Kincaid consequently is introduced in the story and then he is desperately needed for help to kill a nest of vampires but then leaves and is not in the rest of the book.
Sentence Structure: Butcher writes pretty simplistic and has straight forward sentence structure that is easy to follow what is happening in the book. It also helps his foreshadowing abilities because if something sounds like it may happen in the future or is hinted at in the slightest the reader can get at least a small inclination of what is going to happen.
Coming back from an intense fight with a werewolf that seemed unkillable I walked up the stairs to my shabby apartment almost needing to flop down into my bed. I open the door and my roommate Ray is sitting in his rocker watching cartoons that flicker in and out on the old tv.
“Tough night Rich?”
“Like bad beef jerky.” I grunted back through the pain in my back as I set my coat on the rack and my recently bloodied and cleaned dagger on the table.
I headed for the fridge, desiring a crisp, cold diet pepsi. Achieving my dream at the moment the next one was the couch that had never seemed more cushioned in my life. As I sat down the stygian iron ring I had on my left middle finger lightly sparked from being almost as exasperated as me. Made specifically for fighting monsters, the ring had saved my life multiple times as it had for my father, grandfather, and generations before. With intricate engravings from over two thousand years ago the rumor was that Jesus himself blessed it with some of his power and I’d believe it as it still glows with a luminous, almost holy, white-gold light.
As I cracked open my diet the window shattered and a blur of dark brown fur and a glitter of a claw flashed into the apartment, making quite the messy entrance.
“I suppose this was the bad beef jerky?”
“Yeah except it hasn’t been hung out to dry.”
The werewolf lunged at me looking as determined to kill me as I was determined to sit down in peace. I quickly side stepped into the coffee table, nearly avoiding the sharp claws of the beast.
“Use the ring Rich!”
“Its all out of juice!”
“I’ll handle it then. Just distract it for a second!”
I managed to get to the door and grab my dagger attempting to stab the beast where it would hurt most. Instead the beast slashed me across the face leaving a cut from my eyebrow to the corner of my mouth.
“Watch out!” Ray said as he flipped open an old leather case which held six polished silver throwing knives. He threw two at a time with precision accuracy, all the knives dug into the back of the werewolf as it started to burn a bright silver flame where they stuck. The werewolf howled and fell to its knees slowing disintegrating from the silver it found poisonous.
“You think it’ll still dry well?”
“Good chance it will be mostly ashy hair but worth a shot.”
Imagery: I described the silver ring as being made with a mythical metal and how the magic in it was from Jesus along with the detail of it giving a little spark to show how powerful it was at the time. Since the spark was little it didn’t have much of any power left in it. The description of the silver fire burning the werewolf is also magical imagery and that it was described more because it was powerful enough to kill the werewolf.
Characters: The character Ray’s purpose was to have quick quips alongside Rich and to kill the werewolf with his silvers knifes he just has laying around coincidentally. His job is to keep the main character alive pretty much.
Sentence Structure: I wrote everything out very straight forward so that the story is easy to follow and the hinting at the beginning that the werewolf seemed unkillable was a little foreshadowing that he was going to fight it again.