Have you been giving the target of adding MORE DETAIL into your writing? There are many strategies you could use to do that. This video workshop introduces you to one strategy: using the five senses to add more detail into what you write.
You will need: paper, a pencil and your imagination :-)
Happy writing!
This video workshop builds on the work you did in the first workshop. Keep developing your skills in using the 5 senses to add more detail into your work. Became a master at ADDING DETAIL!
You will need: paper, a pencil and your imagination :-)
Happy writing!
Use the SHOW don't TELL strategy
Your character is happy? How can you SHOW that rather than say "She was happy."? Your character is sad? How could you SHOW that in detailed way without using the words "He was sad."?
Show don't tell! Describe your characters face, body, voice and their actions. If you describe each of these aspects of your character, you will be adding excellent detail which will SHOW your reader your characters thoughts and feelings.
SHOW don't TELL
Write a paragraph using the SHOW don't TELL strategy using the characters to the left.
SHOW don't tell! Describe your characters face, body, voice and their actions. If you describe each of these aspects of your character, you will be adding excellent detail which will SHOW your reader your characters thoughts and feelings.
Post your writing on SEESAW to get feedback from your teacher.
Play this game with word tiles. You might have some like the ones Mrs McKenzie is playing with, or you might find tiles from games like Scrabble or Upwords around your house.
You can play by yourself or play together with your family. Have fun