E( verified )

 Student B: Sophisticated evidence of development of a  journey both with narrative and a range of mini scenes like  cinematic  story board. 

Students A : Lots of ideas on aging  using a varity of artist models and conventions - methods and ideas from a range of approaches with students own visual or technical innovations. 

M ( verified)   

Students C : Presents clear visual  and thematic ideas  but does not fluently execute them . In each shoot not enough evidence of exploring a range of conventions 

Student H: Evidence that resources are not refreshed with new material enough to extend ideas sufficiently.

Students E = Cusp M between A and M 

Achieved student eg (verified ) 

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