1. What would you add or change if you had more time?

I would have put more shading on the lamb.

2. How does this assignment demonstrate growth? In what area?

this shows how I understand what the short story is about. 

1. What would you add or change if you had more time?

I would have had add more detail to both of the vignettes and I would have add a little bit of background.

2. How does this assignment demonstrate growth? In what area?

this show that I grow in writing vignettes and that I can think about my life and take away some of the things.