Changes for the second edition, about 140 in all:
Lev 8:33 for seven days? DONE
Lev 13:3 look on him: look at him? Elsewhere too DONE everywhere
Lev 13:7 seen of the priest: seen by the priest (no other occurrences) DONE
Lev 16:10 omit comma DONE
Lev 16:10 as a scapegoat DONE
Lev 18:22 omit comma DONE
Lev 19:20 omit comma? DONE
Leviticus 20:23 omit comma? DONE
Lev 21:2 omit comma? DONE
Lev 23:15 Count unto you: count for yourselves DONE
Lev 24:2 omit comma? DONE
Leviticus 24:3,4 order? Tend to? DONE
Lev 25:35 decay? Hard times? DONE
Lev 25:51 behind? Ahead? Remaining DONE
Lev 27:28 omit comma? DONE, also change to “either … or”
Num 5:13 and she be not DONE
Num 14:2 would to God? (twice) DONE, also a few other places
Ruth 4:1 sat himself DONE
Judges 19:15 sat him down DONE
1 Sam 20:24 sat him down DONE
Deuteronomy 10:18 the judgment of the fatherless? Judgment for the fatherless? OK as is? DONE
Deut 12:1 omit commas DONE
Deut 14:7 as the camel? Such as the camel? DONE
15:1 make a release? Grant a release DONE
16:4 neither shall any (omit “there”) DONE
16:9 unto you : for yourself DONE
17:14 around me DONE
17:18 write himself DONE
20:9 appoint captains DONE
21:3 nearest? DONE
21:6 nearest? Yes DONE
27:2 set you up DONE
29:1 omit comma DONE
32:14 kidneys of wheat: grains of wheat DONE
32:35 belong (omit s) DONE
33:16 the fullness thereof DONE
Josh 5:3 made him: himself DONE
6:15 in the same manner DONE
10:5 and DONE
Psalm 5:10 omit “thou” DONE
Later too (Ps 7:7, 9:6, 10:15, 19:12, 22:19) DONE (mostly)
Ps 19:6 thereof? His heat? DONE
Ps 39:3 semicolon Do it DONE
Judges 2:9 border? Check other versions DONE
Judges 15:14 cameto DONE
19:15 sat him down: Omit “him” DONE
Judges 20:39 retreated? Drew back. DONE
Judges 21:7 provide wives: Omit “for” DONE
Judges 21:7 as wives DONE
Judges 21:16 provide wives DONE
Ruth 3:18 turn out DONE
Ruth 4:1 sat down DONE
1 Sam 6:14 as a burnt offering DONE
10:5 where … is DONE
12:8 who DONE
1 Samuel 22:9 who? DONE
23:23 Omit “thou” Come back? DONE, omitting thou only
3:14 whom DONE
3:19 omit “that” DONE
7:12 who? DONE
8:13 got a name for himself? DONE
10:9 some of? DONE
15:1 himself DONE
20:6 get himself DONE
1 Kings 1:5 himself DONE
5:5 have decided? DONE
8:30 omit first “thou” DONE
8:36 that you may teach them? DONE
11:8 foreign wives DONE
11:23 another adversary to him, who DONE
18:5 so that? DONE
22:11 himself Do it DONE
3:3 who Do it DONE
7:10 gatekeepers? Check modern versions DONE
13:2 who DONE
13:25 omit comma Do it DONE
18:12 the things? Do it DONE
18:32 grain Do it DONE
16:7 first delivered DONE
25:1 workmen: those who served? Men who served. DONE
26:29 affairs? (30,32) DONE for 26:29 only
27:1 was DONE
2 Chronicles 1:17 they brought out (were brought out by them) DONE
6:28 whatsoever DONE
6:36 who? DONE
29:15 brethren? DONE
29:31 brought burnt offerings DONE
34:33 countries? Lands? Other occurrences in the Bible too? Lands, DONE
2 Chron 11:23 lands DONE
Ezra 2:2 and Baanah? DONE
3:6 they began? DONE
4:2 who DONE
4:7 interpreted? OK as is
7:9 began he? DONE
Came he? DONE
7:27 who? DONE
8:33 were DONE
10:16 chiefs DONE
Nehemiah 2:12 did I tell? DONE
3:6, 3:14, 3:15 was repaired by? DONE
9:7 chose DONE
11:2 omit comma DONE
11:3 chiefs DONE
5:3 even be; even to? DONE
9:2 lay hands? DONE
9:16 hands DONE
Job 3:24 the waters? Waters? DONE
5:4 end with comma DONE
9:5,6, … Who, no comma DONE, added commas
10:16 you (capitalize) DONE
14:8 its root its stump DONE
14:19 wear away DONE
14:20 passes away? DONE
15:33 as? Like DONE
17:8 stir himself up DONE
20:13 still keeps it DONE
22:5 are not your iniquities? DONE
22:11 covers? DONE
42:8 because I will accept him? Because him will I accept? For I will accept him? (for him may be ambiguous) DONE
19:6 its going forth … its path … its heat; leave 19:5 as is DONE
34:2 its boast DONE
48:9 thought about DONE
51:4 clear? Blameless? DONE
78:63 in marriage DONE
Genesis 2: In the image of God he created him; male and female he created them. DONE, also in Genesis 5.
Numbers 1:53 have the oversight? DONE
Numbers 15:2 when you have come? DONE
Numbers 22:29 would that DONE
Numbers 22:34 go DONE
Psalm 19: his warmth? Leave alone or make all “it” DONE
Daniel 1: vegetables for pulse? DONE
NT: fan: winnowing fan? DONE
Doctors: teachers? DONE
Set: destined? Appointed DONE
Acts Footnote 11: KVJ to KJV DONE
Romans 1:10 At length: After so much time DONE
Psalm 103:13 As a father has compassion on his children? DONE