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1. The Inheritance Games
2. The Hawthorne Legacy
3. The Final Gambit
4. The Brothers Hawthorne
5. The Grandest Game
6. Games Untold
7. Glorious Rivals
8. The Same Backward as Forward
Bonus Chapters
Jameson Winchester Hawthorne knew one thing for certain: The game wasn't over yet. Of course it wasn't. The old man's plans were always multilayered beasts. Why kill two birds with one stone, he'd say, when you could kill twelve?
Jameson took a step toward Avery. "Tell me everything, Heiress."Â
As it turned out, everything wasn't much, but every word out of Avery's mouth captivated him.
Why her? That had been the question from the moment Jameson first saw Avery Kylie Grambs. Once the will had been read, once he'd realized what the old man had done, it had been the only question that mattered.
Until they'd solved it.
And now, there was another mystery with Avery at the center, and Jameson couldn't shake the feeling that she was more than she appeared, that there were layers to this puzzle, layers to this Mystery Girl. Jameson's gaze settled on her lips as she spoke. He tried to absorb everything she was saying about his "dead" uncle, tried to see Avery Kylie Grambs through his grandfather's eyes.
Why kill two birds with one stone when you could kill twelve?
>--------------------<
Hours later, Jameson's mind was still racing, still roaring as he rounded a corner-and ran smack into his brother.
Grayson steadied himself. His eyes narrowed slightly, and Jameson prepared himself to spar - verbally, physically. But all Grayson said, as he dusted a hand over the lapels of his suit jacket, was "Are you okay?"
Now it was Jameson's turn to narrow his eyes. "Never better."
Grayson locked eyes with him. "I meant what I asked, Jamie." Gray's voice was softer and lower now. "Are you okay?"
It had been a long time since Gray had asked him a question like that - and even longer since Jameson had wanted to answer.
"It helps." Jameson felt his throat closing around those words. "That you know." He didn't say Emily's name.
He wouldn't.
"I know," Grayson confirmed. "And I don't blame you, Jamie."
Jameson didn't want anyone's absolution. With a theatrical roll of his eyes, he scoffed. "You wouldn't, Suit Boy."
"What precisely is that supposed to mean?"
"I'm certainly not mocking you," Jameson replied seriously. "I wouldn't dare."
"You are a child," Grayson said.
In other circumstances, Jameson would have insulted him back, but this time, what came out of his mouth wasn't an insult. "I'm what the old man made me," he replied quietly, "same as you."
Grayson bowed his head slightly, then brought his eyes back up to Jameson's. "What do you think the old man would say if he could see us now?"
>--------------------<
Jameson closed the door behind him, then flipped the lock. "What would the old man say," he murmured under his breath, "if he could see us now?"
Without even realizing where he was going, Jameson walked toward his desk. He opened the main drawer and released a hidden compartment in the back. From inside the compartment, he removed a knife. The handle was as long as the width of his hand. Curling his fingers around the grip, Jameson stared at the knife's blade until the thoughts in his head quieted, and he was caught up in a memory.
>--------------------<
A fishing hook. A price tag. A glass ballerina. A knife.
One by one, Tobias Hawthorne laid the objects out on the table in front of him. Jameson eyed the knife. Beside him, he could feel Grayson doing the same.
"How old are you boys now?" the old man asked - a rhetorical question that Tobias Hawthorne answered himself as he looked at each of his grandsons in turn, starting with Xander. "Twelve." His gaze slid to Jameson. "Fourteen." Grayson. "Fifteen." Nash barely even blinked as the old man's gaze settled on him. "Twenty-one."
Jameson's hand crept toward the knife. Grayson caught his brother's arm by the wrist. "Not so fast, Jamie."
"If my goal had been fast," Jameson shot back, "I'd already be holding that knife."
"If your goal was stealth," Xander interjected cheerfully, "you suck."
"Jameson doesn't suck," Nash said, trying and failing to sound stern. "Pretty sure that was a prime example of blowing it."
"Enough," Tobias Hawthorne declared, but he was smiling, too.
"Grayson, unhand your brother. Jameson, hands by your side. You all know the rules. Until you have deduced an object's purpose - hands off."
"Can we get on with it, then?" Nash asked, earning himself a narrow-eyed stare from their grandfather. Games proceeded on the old man's timetable. No one else's.
"Remember," Tobias Hawthorne announced, "sometimes, to see the big picture, you have to take three steps back."
Jameson searched that statement for a double meaning. Everything was something in their grandfather's puzzles. Everything.
"Your challenge this morning," the old man continued, "is this: Tell me what's real."
Jameson waited. They all did. But the old man had nothing more to say. He removed an envelope from his back pocket, dropped it to the floor, and walked out the door.
Jameson dove for the envelope-and so did all three of his brothers. A brief scuffle ensued, before Nash pulled Jameson off Xander and shot a warning look at Gray.
"Go on, Xan," Nash drawled. "Read it."
With a triumphant grin, Xander scrambled to his feet and took a single page out of the envelope. Jameson pushed in beside him for a better look and saw the words TAKE NOTE scrawled at the top center of the page in all capital letters.
"'Go be afraid,'" Xander read aloud, making his way through the message written underneath, "'cause Friday's coming.'"
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"Go be afraid, 'cause Friday's coming." Jameson had repeated those words to himself at least a dozen times. Nash had already made himself scarce. Xander was holding the message up to a light bulb to see if heat revealed any extra clues. Grayson was staring intently out the window.
"Go be afraid, 'cause Friday's coming," Jameson repeated.
"Must you think out loud?" Grayson asked, annoyance playing across his features.
Jameson smirked. "I must." But he kept his next thought quiet. There has to be a reason the old man used an abbreviation of the word because. Hawthornes were taught to enunciate. They were expected to speak "properly" - and only Nash took a special kind of joy in subverting that expectation.
"Go be afraid,'cause Friday's coming." Jameson closed his eyes. There were easily a dozen differences between the word 'cause and the longer because. They had different numbers of letters, different numbers of syllables, of phonemes. They started with different letters.
And that was the moment Jameson saw it: the first letter of each of those words. G, B, A, C, F, C. He began walking toward the door of the study before he'd even finished solving it. G, B, A, C, F, C.
And the title at the top was TAKE NOTE.
>--------------------<
Jameson twisted his way through the secret passages - better to make sure no one was following him. When he made it to the music room, he skidded to a halt.
Nash was already at the piano.
Too slow, Jameson berated himself. I shouldn't have taken the scenic route. A moment later, Grayson appeared next to Jameson. He must have solved the first clue, too, which meant that taking the passageways really had been a miscalculation.
"Move," Grayson told Jameson.
"Not on your life." Jameson stayed where he was, and together, he and Grayson watched as Nash played a sequence of six notes. G, B, A, C, F, C.
A compartment on the piano released. Nash attempted to reach down into it, but it quickly became apparent that his fingers were too large.
Jameson turned to Grayson. "The fishing hook," he said under his breath. "I'll get it. You distract him."
And just like that, the bargain was struck.
Nash was older. He'd been playing their grandfather's games for longer. But now it was two against one.
>--------------------<
When Jameson got back to the music room, the fishing hook in his palm, his brothers were nowhere to be seen. Jameson knew instinctively that Grayson would have waited until Nash was a good distance away before running interference. It was what Jameson would have done, if he'd been the one blocking Nash for Grayson.
Walking over to the piano, Jameson realized the hidden compartment had been closed. Jameson played the sequence of notes, released the compartment, then used the hook to fish out what appeared to be two silver charms, each one a letter.
"Q." Jameson stared at them one by one. "And R."
Right on cue, he received a text from Grayson. Nash is on his way back. Rendezvous you-know-where. If you double-cross me, you'll regret it.
Jameson grinned. It wasn't time for the double cross. Not yet. And Grayson knew it.
>--------------------<
"The letters could stand for something," Grayson said, turning the charms over in his hands. The two of them had met at their usual rendezvous spot - on the roof. There was a flat five-by-five-foot area, obscured from view on all sides by the sloping angles of Hawthorne House. Only Grayson, Jameson, and Xander ever came here.
Nash didn't even know it existed.
"Q," Jameson said aloud, determined to make sense of the clue. "And R. R and Q. Red Queen?"
Grayson shook his head. "He's used that one already." The old man never used the same clue twice. "R is the eighteenth letter of the alphabet," Grayson continued. "Q is number seventeen. They're only one position apart."
Jameson chewed on that and thought back to the puzzle as it had been laid out for them. "Tell me what's real," he said, echoing their grandfather's instructions.
Grayson had a habit of standing still as a statue when he was caught up in thought, but Jameson paced, even when there wasn't much room for pacing.
"What did he tell us to remember?" Jameson knew the answer to that question, but Grayson provided it anyway.
"Sometimes, to see the big picture, you have to take three steps back."
Jameson tried it, literally taking three steps backward. He tripped over something - or rather, someone who had just popped out of the trapdoor.
"Scone?" Xander offered, holding up a platter.
Out of the corner of his eye, Jameson saw Grayson quickly close his fingers into a fist, obscuring the charms.
"How can you think about your stomach at a time like this?" Jameson asked Xander.
"I don't have to think about my stomach to eat scones," Xander said. "I'm practically a scone-eating prodigy. Can I see what's in your hand, Gray?"
Grayson caught Jameson's gaze, and after a moment, Jameson nodded. Xander almost never won the Saturday challenges. Jameson wasn't even convinced he tried. But their youngest brother was also probably the one whose sheer level of brain power came closest to the old man's.
"R." Xander examined one charm, then the other. "Q." He grinned. "Clever."
Jameson narrowed his eyes, and the moment Xander registered that, his grin grew about ten times wider. "Wait, you guys haven't figured it out yet? Seriously?"
"Seriously," Grayson replied without a hint of humor. "Now hand me a scone and talk."
Xander tossed a scone Grayson's way, then punched a fist up into the air in victory. "Look at us!" he said. "Just three brothers, hanging on the roof, eating scones, and basking in my awesomeness."
"Talk," Jameson told him.
Xander obliged. "QR," he said again, wiggling his eyebrows. "l'll give you a hint: Think about the price tag."
Without waiting for a response, Xander dropped the scones and disappeared back down the trapdoor - and Jameson and Grayson took off after him.
>--------------------<
They caught up to Xander outside their grandfather's study. Inside, the youngest Hawthorne went directly to the table and the three objects that remained.
A price tag. A glass ballerina. A knife.
"QR," Xander said happily. "As in a QR code. Go ahead. Worship me, lesser mortals."
"QR code?" Jameson glanced toward Grayson, who shrugged.
"It was originally short for quick response," Xander rattled off, his words gaining speed as he spoke. "It's a type of matrix barcode-"
"A barcode." Jameson came to stand behind Xander. "Like the kind on a price tag?"
"Not all price tags. But this price tag?" Xander grinned again. "Gray, we're going to need a scanner."
One app download later, Xander triumphantly scanned the QR code, which took them to a website, one that was obviously of their grandfather's making. Numbers covered the page. The site scrolled through them automatically - on and on and on.
Xander blinked. "I think we're going to need a bigger screen."
>--------------------<
Once they'd made their way to Xander's room and pulled the site up on the laptop Xander had built from scratch the summer before, all the three Hawthorne brothers had to do was take three steps back.
When you stopped looking at the numbers as numbers, when you saw the big picture, an image emerged. A knife.
As the page scrolled downward, the image changed - the handle on the knife flipped open.
>--------------------<
It was every man for himself now. Jameson wasn't the fastest Hawthorne - but he was the least above playing dirty. As he ran back to the study, he tripped Grayson and shoved Xander, sending them sprawling into each other. Someone grabbed for his ankle, but Jameson jumped over the hand and made it back to their grandfather's study first.
He snatched the knife off the table. Running his fingers over the hilt, he found the release, and when he hit it, the top half of the hilt popped up. Curled inside was a small piece of paper, the kind you might find inside a fortune cookie.
"Hand it over," Grayson ordered, his voice like steel. He knew as well as Jameson did: The end was drawing near. They weren't a team anymore.
Double-crossing each other was part of the game.
Jameson dropped the knife back onto the table. Fending off both Grayson and Xander with one hand, he made an attempt at unraveling the paper with the other. Xander snatched it from him, then Grayson took it from Xander, then Jameson ended up with it again, and this time, he managed to read it.
There were only two words, written in all capital letters. The message read SHATTER ME.
Jameson didn't hesitate. They'd used three of this puzzle's four tools: the fishing hook, the price tag, the knife. All that was left was the glass ballerina. Jameson grabbed it. It was small enough to fit in his hand. Delicate. Beautiful. And he threw it with all his might against the wall.
It shattered.
Glass went everywhere. Time seemed to slow down, and Jameson thought back to the beginning of the game. Tell me what's real.
There, on the floor, amid the shards of glass, was what looked to be a diamond. Jameson dropped to the ground. He grabbed at it, barely noticing as the surrounding glass cut into his hand.
Beside him, Grayson knelt more carefully and pulled a second diamond from what remained of the glass ballerina. Xander found a third. They sifted carefully through the debris, looking for a fourth, but that was it.
"Three diamonds," Jameson said out loud. He looked at each of his brothers in turn. "Which one's real?"
>--------------------<
Jameson and Grayson spent the afternoon poring over websites, trying to determine what supplies were needed - and what they needed to do-in order to tell a real diamond from a fake. Xander got distracted. And hungry. He had always preferred the thrill of the chase to locking down the win.
So when the old man called them all back to the study near sunset, Jameson had two of the three diamonds in his possession. Both, he had ascertained, were fake.
"Well," Tobias Hawthorne said, a glint in his eyes, "tell me what's real, boys."
Jameson pushed down the urge to glare at Grayson. He hated losing - and by what amounted to luck of the draw. "Both of these are fake," he told his grandfather, laying the faux diamonds on the table. Then he waited for Grayson to gloat.
Instead, Gray laid his diamond down on the table, too. "Also fake."
The old man's eyes twinkled. "So tell me, you two: What's real?"
For once, Jameson didn't have an answer. He was silent. So was Grayson. Xander appeared to be dismantling a nearby clock.
And then Nash threw a leather bag onto the table. "That," he said, drawing out the words, "is a real bag of glass."
Jameson stared at it, then looked to the corner of the room where he'd broken the glass ballerina.
None of the shards remained.
"By that token," Grayson said finally, "my jewel was real, too - it just wasn't a real diamond."
The old man snorted. "Too little, too late," he told Grayson. "And that goes double for you." He swung his gaze to Jameson, who hated disappointing the old man even more than he hated to lose.
"In this life," the old man intoned, his eyes still on Jameson, "to be what I am, to do what I have done, to have all that we have... " Tobias Hawthorne closed his eyes. "Sacrifices have to be made. Things get broken."
"What kinds of things?" Xander asked, proving that he wasn't as distracted as he seemed.
"All kinds," the old man said quietly. His eyes opened once more. "Well done, Nash. As for the rest of you, listen well: Never forget the broken things, the ones you leave behind. Clean up the shards, because when you don't ... " A muscle in their grandfather's neck tightened. "People get hurt."
>--------------------<
Back in the present, Jameson flipped open the hidden compartment on the knife. He didn't know why he'd kept it after that game. He didn't know what he'd expected to find inside. The compartment was as empty as it had been for years.
Sitting down at the desk, Jameson took a piece of paper from the drawer. He thought about his grandfather's will. About Avery Kylie Grambs. About Toby Hawthorne, supposedly killed in a fire at the age of nineteen.
Holding the pen in his left hand, Jameson wrote down the words that his grandfather had spoken. Never forget the broken things, the ones you leave behind.
"Clean up the shards," he murmured. His mind raced, his brain churning through everything that Avery had told him.
Game on.
Grayson POV 1
This scene takes place right after Avery, Jameson, and Xander go to see Grayson at the Hawthorne Foundation to ask him about the charities listed in the old will. Jameson has invoked On Spake. The boys ask Avery to step outside so that they can settle things - and this is what happened once she does.
>--------------------<
Grayson waited until Avery was outside to begin circling his brother-slowly, methodically. Per the rules of engagement, he got the first shot... if there was one.
"I told Avery to leave this alone." Grayson sounded calmer than he felt.
Jameson turned just enough to keep him in his sight. "Did you? I had no idea."
"Liar." Grayson pushed down the urge to flying tackle his brother. There was still a chance they could work this out like gentlemen.
"It's not my fault that the girl doesn't do as she's told." Jameson gave the world's most irreverent shrug. It was like he wanted a fight.
"The girl," Grayson countered between gritted teeth, "deserves better than this."
Jameson shifted his weight. "Say what you mean, Gray."
Grayson held on to his calm - barely. "Have you spent even one second thinking about what she stands to lose if this goes sideways?"
Another shrug from Jameson. "What's life without a little risk?"
Grayson stepped forward. "It's not your risk to take."
"And she's not yours to protect."
Grayson moved. Quick as a striking snake, he swept his brother's feet out from underneath him.
It was on.
They grappled, flipped at least twice, then Grayson saw his opening and took it. He pinned his opponent to the ground. "She deserves our protection, Jameson."
"And why is that?" Jamie pressed. "Say what you mean, Gray. Say what you feel."
Grayson's jaw clamped shut. He didn't feel anything. He wouldn't let himself feel anything. He and Jameson had been down this road before, and it didn't end anywhere good.
"She's not yours to protect," Jameson repeated. He tensed against Grayson's hold for only a second or two. "She's not mine, either." Jameson tapped out.
Grayson stood and reached a hand down.
Jameson took it. "She's her own damn person, Grayson, and she can make decisions for herself."
Jameson POV
This scene takes place while Jameson and Grayson are waiting for Sheffield Grayson to meet them at their hotel. This was another one that I really hated to cut! In the final draft, Avery hears the boys mention Drink or Dare, but we don't get to see them actually playing.
>--------------------<
Doing this was a mistake. Jameson had watched as Grayson left a business card with the guard at the entrance in the gated community where Sheffield Grayson lived. Grayson had scrawled the name of their hotel on the back. He'd been discreet.
And then they'd returned to the hotel and waited.
And waited.
And waited.
Jameson was just about done waiting.
"Whatever you're thinking," Grayson told him. "Don't."
"Don't worry, big brother," Jameson said, ambling over to the hotel minibar and perusing its offerings. "I'm on my best behavior." He ran his fingertips over the top of several small bottles of alcohol, then settled for pulling a root beer, some orange juice, and a smoothie with kale from the fridge.
"What are you doing?" Grayson asked suspiciously.
Jameson didn't answer as he went to retrieve a glass - the biggest one he could find. In went the root beer, the orange juice, a dash of kale smoothie. He added some sparkling water for good measure, then give it a swirl.
"It's time for that old Hawthorne standby," he told his brother. "Drink or Dare."
It had been years since they played, and this concoction was only a fraction as nasty as the ones they'd managed growing up, but it would suffice.
"I dare you to grow up." Grayson's light eyes narrowed, but Jameson knew that as much as Gray might bitch and moan about it, he wouldn't turn down the challenge in the end.
He was a Hawthorne.
"Nuh-uh-uh." Jameson wagged a finger at him. "Beauty before age - and that means that I go first."
"The phrase is age before beauty," Grayson muttered.
"Whatever you say, big brother." Jameson lifted the glass and held it up, like he was making a toast. "I dare you to... " He searched his mind for something innocuous, something to loosen the stick up Gray's ass, to distract him - but the first thought that rose from the depths of Jameson's mind to the surface wasn't innocuous in the least. "Admit that you want her."
"Excuse me?" Grayson's tone took on an edge. Powerful. Deadly. And utterly useless between brothers.
"I dare you," Jameson repeated, "to admit that you want Avery. I saw the way you were looking at her, back in the maze. And sword fighting?" Jameson wiggled his eyebrows. "A bit dirty, metaphorically speaking, don't you think?"
"Jameson," Grayson gritted out.
"You taught her to hold your sword." Jameson was an expert at the art of making things not matter. If he could turn this into a joke, what did it matter if Grayson did have feelings for Avery?
What did she matter at all?
"You don't know what you saw," Grayson ground out, his voice tensing against his vocal cords, like an animal caged.
"So tell me," Jameson replied, like the answer didn't matter. Like his own feelings were nothing more than a game. "Or drink."
"You're a bastard, you know that?" Grayson said evenly. Then he grabbed the glass, sloshing liquid over the side, and drank.
"Your turn," Jameson told his brother.
Gray smiled - and it was more than a little sinister. "I dare you to take a lap."
"Around the hallway?" Jameson snorted. "You've lost your touch."
Grayson smiled. "Naked."
There it was. "Planning to lock the door while I'm in the hall?"
Grayson shrugged. "Drink or dare, Jamie."
Jameson stood and pulled his shirt off. He let Grayson think he was going to do it, then settled back down. "As much as I pride myself as being a person who doesn't turn down dares, no one sees this... " He gestured to his bare chest-and then down further. " ... without their consent."
He took the glass back and downed a gulp. "Damn, that's foul."
Grayson smiled-and then he caught himself smiling. "What are you doing, Jamie? What are we doing?"
They didn't spend time together anymore - not like this. They didn't tell each other secrets. They didn't play. But Jameson would be damned, assuming he wasn't already, before he left Grayson to his own devices as they sat around and waited for Gray's father.
This was an armistice. An honorary Vegas-and what happened in this hotel room stayed in this hotel room.
"We're playing a game," Jameson replied simply. Then he stood, strolling back over to the minibar. This time, he didn't shy away from the alcohol. Tequila. Whiskey. Champagne. "Now," he said, once he'd finished spicing up the abomination in the cup, "where were we?"
Grayson POV 2
In the first draft, this scene happens the night that Grayson and Jameson return to Hawthorne House after meeting Grayson's father; Grayson is still dealing with the emotional fallout, as well as processing what they discovered written in invisible ink on Toby's walls. There was a moment in The Inheritance Games when Avery sees Grayson swimming, so I knew going into book two that I wanted a scene where Grayson is swimming, and we see why he swims and the kinds of coping mechanisms he uses to keep his emotions under lock and key.
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Whenever Grayson reached his limit for not feeling, not talking, not exploding - he swam. He'd been on the track for the Olympics once. Tobias Hawthorne had expected nothing less from his grandsons. If you were a Hawthorne, and you chose to spend your time swimming, your form would be perfect. You would apply yourself.
You would prove yourself.
And so it went with everything. Photography. Violin. Volunteering at the foundation. If it was worth doing, it was worth doing well, and if you could do it well, you could do it better.
And better.
And better.
Grayson used to wonder why so much was expected of them when nothing had ever been expected of Skye. There was a time when he'd thought it was because Skye was a woman, but having read everything Toby had written on the walls, Grayson had a new theory now.
Tobias Hawthorne had given his children the world and asked for nothing in return. Toby had been indulged. That was what Grayson had seen in the literal writing on the wall. Toby Hawthorne had never once been made to feel like a disappointment. He'd been coddled and spoiled and adored - and the moment life had pulled the rug out from underneath him, he'd shattered, the way that Grayson and his brothers had never been allowed to, would never be allowed to.
Even when Emily had died, Grayson had known what was expected of him.
Discipline. Honor. Control. Grayson pulled off his shirt. The pool was heated, but the night air wasn't. If it were any colder out, the chill would have hurt. Grayson almost wished that it had. He stood there for another minute or two, breathing through it, and then he dove.
He swam.
His body kept time automatically. He knew how hard he could push himself, how many laps he could do and keep up this punishing pace.
He pushed himself harder.
He did more.
Grayson swam until he could push back the memory of Sheffield Grayson's eyes, of the way the man had referred to his dead nephew as the closest thing to a son he would ever have.
It hurt. But if Grayson swam long enough, if he pushed himself hard enough, his aching muscles would hurt more. If he held his breath long enough, if he let his lungs burn more than anything else did - he could forget. He'd spent so many nights, just like this. Forgetting Emily. It had become so much a part of him that it almost felt wrong to be forgetting something else.
Grayson swam until he couldn't anymore, until he'd pushed himself so hard that making it back to the ledge wasn't a given.
He barely had the strength to pull himself out. For a few blessed seconds, his mind was quiet. Then he looked up and saw a light on upstairs, in the East Wing. Avery's wing. He wondered what she did when she needed to forget-and then he saw a silhouette just outside her window.
Someone's coming for her. Grayson bolted for the house, tracking the figure's movements, then he slowed. His recognized the figure's way of moving. Aggressive. Fearless. Flexible. Jameson. Dripping wet and freezing, Grayson came to a halt and watched as his brother jimmied opened the window - their grandfather's study, Avery's now - and slipped inside.
Muscles screaming, body aching, Grayson turned, strode back the way he'd come, and dove back into the pool.
Xander POV
In the first draft, Xander, Thea, and Rebecca spend a lot of time together, just the three of them, as Xander taps them to help solve the puzzle his grandfather left him in the letter he received at the end of book one. I was sad to cut a lot of funny bickering between Thea and Xander, and I had to rework the Thea/Rebecca arc to appear in scenes where Avery was present. The other thing that I lost when I cut Xander's point of view were scenes that really showed Xander and Rebecca's friendship and the way that both of them were overlooked and defined in relation to their older siblings.
This scene takes place right after Rebecca discovered that Toby is her mother's child. She calls Xander, and he goes to her house.
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In all the years they'd known each other, Xander had never actually been to Rebecca's house. He'd tried to see her after Emily died, but he'd only made it as far as the driveway before she'd texted to tell him to go away. Their friendship had always existed almost exclusively within the Hawthorne gates.
Stepping across the threshold into Rebecca's house felt momentous.
"I'm not going to ask if you're okay," Xander told her as she shut the front door behind him. Her dark red hair was wild, flyaway wisps making her look windblown. Her face was pale.
"It's my mom," Rebecca said. He'd known on the phone that something was wrong, but all she'd said was that she needed to talk to him in person. Now she walked past him to what appeared to be the living room, and he followed. The floor was cluttered with things that probably should have been thrown out: news-papers and printouts and liquor bottles.
A lot of bottles.
"She used to be such a neat freak," Rebecca said. "She used to have so many rules."
Her gaze landed on a nearby shelf full of snow globes and covered in dust. Rebecca walked over and picked up one of the globes. "My mom tried so hard to control everything, to keep Emily in a glass bubble just like this one." Rebecca held the globe up, so it was even with her own eyes. "I thought I knew why."
So far, everything she'd said had made sense. It wasn't something they talked about much, but Xander knew what it had been like for Rebecca growing up. He'd seen it. He'd been there for her through it.
Across from him, Rebecca turned the snow globe upside down. She let the flurries work themselves into a fury, and then she dropped the globe. It hit the ground and shattered, and Rebecca didn't even blink. "I thought I knew why my mom was the way she was with Emily. Before she died-and after. I thought I knew, but I didn't."
Xander stepped toward her, careful of the broken glass. "What didn't you know, Bex?"
"Why she hates your family-and exactly what she meant every time she's said that all her babies die."
Nash POV
Most of Nash's scenes in the first draft involved either trying to keep his younger siblings in line or his relationships with Alisa and Libby. In this scene, Libby and Nash are heading to Cartago on one of Avery's private jets. They just finished trying to find "Harry" in Connecticut and received the note that tells Avery to stop looking.
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Nash wasn't what one would call a fan of small spaces, but as long as he kept his gaze focused out the window of the jet, he was fine. Still, every so often, he found his gaze pulled back to Libby. This time, she was staring at the message they'd intercepted. STOP
LOOKING.
Nash knew one thing for damn certain: Toby never would have left a note like that for him - or any Hawthorne. Because all that really said, if you'd grown up the way they had, was you're close.
"You'll want to keep ahold of that letter," Nash told Libby. "And the envelope. Hawthornes are awfully fond of invisible ink."
He was about to have to look out the window again, but then Libby turned in her seat, and his gaze found a different destination. Her legs were tucked up next to her body, and her hair was slowly but surely defeating its braid.
"Don't take this the wrong way," Libby said. "But your family is weird. And that's coming from me."
Somehow, looking at her was just as good as looking out the window. "I don't know," Nash drawled. "You've never really struck me as all that odd."
Libby pulled at the sleeves on the plain white shirt she was wearing. "You're just saying it because I'm playing normal now."
"You seemed normal enough before." Truth be told, Nash had liked her blue hair. The nail polish. The clothes.
He'd liked that she'd liked them.
"I guess no matter what I do," Libby sighed, "I'm still me."
Nash leaned across the aisle to catch her gaze. "Don't say that like it's a bad thing, darlin'."
"Don't call me darling."
"My apologies," Nash murmured. And then, to keep her glaring instead of folding in on herself, he continued. "Is Libby short for Elizabeth?"
"No." Libby snorted. "I'm pretty sure my mom thought it was short for Little Bitch."
Nash had heard worse. He'd seen worse. But the idea of anyone talking to her that way sliced at his heart.
"Sorry," Libby apologized reflexively. "I guess going back home got to me more than I thought."
Nash crossed the aisle to sit in the seat directly next to her. He put his hand under her chin and raised her eyes to meet his. "Don't you ever apologize for the things you've survived." He leaned across to flip up the shade on her window. "Look out there," he told her. She did. She stared out the window at the brilliant green-blue ocean below. At the trees and the very top of the basilica just coming into sight.
"What's that?" Libby asked.
Nash leaned back in his seat, as much for his relief as hers. "Cartago."
Grayson POV 3
This small scene takes place in the moment when the bomb explodes, injuring Avery. Grayson freezes; he's not able to run toward Avery - and this is why.
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Grayson flew back. He landed hard. Pain surging, he tried to sit up. He couldn't breathe, and Avery-
Avery. He staggered to his feet. He didn't see her, not at first, but then he saw Oren, standing over something.
Someone.
He had to move. He had to get to her. He couldn't just keep standing there. If only he could get to her, then-
What? a voice whispered deep inside him. What do you think you can do, Grayson Davenport Hawthorne?
It was a girl's voice. A familiar one.
You can't save her, Emily whispered. Just like you couldn't save me.
Gigi POV
In the first draft of The Grandest Game, Gigi accepied the ticket she was given, and Savannah was the one who won entrance into the game. Back in that draft, Savannah had her own point-of-view chapters, but when I decided to cut down from four point-of-view characters to three, I made the decision to have Gigi refuse having a ticket gifted to her so that she could prove herself and win one instead. One of my major focuses in the revision was on Gigi's character arc and on solidifying her motivation for playing the game. Although I love Gigi's new intro and how it sets up her overall arc, there were a lot of things I really missed about her original one-in particular, her "internships" and the way we can see, really organically, how prominently a certain shadowy spy figures in her mind. As you read this passage and the ones that follow, you'll also see a few bits and pieces that did make it into the final draft of the book-bonus points if you can spot them all!
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Stakeouts, Gigi had learned, were a BYOE affair - Bring Your Own Entertainment. Luckily, Gigi Grayson prided herself on being very easily entertained. Sitting cross-legged in the driver's seat of her parked car, she dipped a french fry into her strawberry milkshake and hit the Play button on a video on her phone.
"It is officially that time of year again, folks," a Hollywood reporter declared, as Gigi kept her gaze locked on the hotel's back door. "Less than twenty-four hours ago, Hawthorne heiress Avery Grambs released a video marking the start of this year's Grandest Game. Her life was changed forever when a total stranger left her billions, and now she's giving you a chance to change yours."
Gigi ate her milkshake-covered fry in all its sweet and salty goodness. On the video, the female reporter's male counterpart chimed in.
"Unlike last year, when the Grandest Game was a free-for-all as would-be players around the world raced through a series of elaborate clues, this year's game looks to be a lot more intimate."
"Seven golden tickets for seven lucky players." The woman in the pair laughed. "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, anyone?"
Twenty yards away, the hotel's door opened. Gigi perked up - but it wasn't her target.
"According to the official Grandest Game press release," Mr. Hollywood News continued, "three players will be receiving their tickets directly from Ms. Grambs, while the remaining four tickets have been hidden somewhere in the continental United States. Where? That's the million-dollar question. Literally!"
So far, just one clue to the location of the four wild card tickets has been released: a sixteen-digit number. If you're like us, you've already got it memorized."
"One-nine-zero-three-one," Gigi said, lifting a fry in salute, nine-three-seven-one-nine-four-six-one-nine-eight-zero."
The hotel's back door opened again. This time, it was her target.
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By the time Gigi got home, it was dark. Really dark. She stepped out of her car and walked back to the edge of the garage, staring out into the night. As far as she could tell, the driveway and street in front of her house were empty, but she hedged her bets.
"I know you're out there," she called cheerfully. There could be someone. And if there was - perhaps a very specific, dangerous someone she'd met only once - Gigi liked the idea of him thinking that he couldn't hide from her, no matter how much he cloaked himself in shadow.
"Can't out-stealth a stealth-er!" she called. No response. But maybe some night, there would be. As the saying went, even a broken clock was right twice a day.
Gigi didn't like thinking of herself as broken, so most of the time, she didn't. When she'd finished staring out into the night, she walked into the house and delightedly discovered her mom had company.
"Grayson!" Gigi exclaimed.
Her brother (Gigi didn't believe in halves) looked up from the table where he sat having tea with her mother - hers, not his, since the parent they shared was their father.
Nope. Not thinking about Dad. Not even a little. Not even once.
"Grayson!" Gigi reiterated.
Her brother's lips twitched slightly, practically the Grayson Hawthorne version of a beaming smile. At twenty-two, Grayson was the second-oldest of the four Hawthorne brothers, all of whom had been raised exclusively by their maternal grandfather, billionaire Tobias Hawthorne, now deceased. In the year and a half that Gigi had known her brother, she'd gathered, through her impressive powers of deduction and also snooping, that Grayson was the Hawthorne grandson who had been molded from childhood to be the perfect heir: brilliant, formidable, without flaw. Grayson Hawthorne bled power. He bent the world to his will with every glower or arch of his brow!
He was, as always, clad in a suit.
"You're here!" Gigi bounded toward Grayson. She'd decided shortly after meeting him that her brother was desperately in need of a love story of epic proportions and also a wider variety of facial expressions. Only one of those was in Gigi's purview: making him actually smile.
"T've missed your face. Here, have a cat!" Gigi knelt to swoop up Katara - her large Bengal cat, practically a leopard, really - and dumped him in Grayson's lap. Cats were an excellent way of disarming people.
Grayson stroked a hand firmly over Katara's head. "Gigi. I was under the impression you were planning to use your gap year to travel. Or get an internship."
In other words: Hello, Gigi! How are you? I've missed your face, too.
"Internships?" Gigi said. "I have three!"
Grayson arched a brow. "Despite your claims to the contrary, you are not 'interning' with Zabrowski. He values his hide too much to hire you."
Zabrowski was a private detective. Specifically, the one Grayson kept on retainer.
"Should you really wait for someone to give you an internship?" Gigi asked. "Or should you manifest internships through optimism, persistence, and sheer force of will?"
Her mother bit back a smile. "I'll leave you two to it." Acacia Grayson was good at giving people space, even when she didn't know why they needed it. She hadn't once objected to the idea of Gigi taking a gap year between high school and college. She hadn't pushed.
That was, apparently, Grayson's job. "Why would you need an 'internship' with a PI?"
Because the sneakier I am, the better off we'll all be. Gigi had enough sense not to say that. "I'm thinking of majoring in cyber-security," she said instead. "Or philosophy. Stakeouts are very philosophical."
"So the plan is cybersecurity or philosophy now?" For someone who'd taken a multiyear leave of absence from college himself, Grayson could be awfully judgy-and prone to forgetting that he was three and a half years older than she was, not thirty.
"It's definitely going to be cybersecurity or philosophy," Gigi said firmly. "Or possibly informatics. Criminology. Aeronautical engineering, architecture, photojournalism, maybe social work... I'm a woman of many talents! More of them all the time."
Gigi had promised herself that she would learn a new skill every day this year. The more she taught herself, the less time she had to feel the weight of the lie she was living, and the easier it was to pretend that THE SECRET was just a secret, and that she excelled at keeping them.
Her father was dead, but no one could know that. He'd died doing awful things, but no one could know that, either.
Still not thinking about it!
Reading her expression - and possibly her mind - Grayson stood and set Katara gently on the floor, then moved forward to pull Gigi into a silent hug.
This meeting of the Our Father Was Secretly a Monster and Now He's Secretly Dead Club will come to order, Gigi thought. But the tension in her body dissipated as she laid her head on her brother's chest. Grayson smelled like pine needles and perfectionism.
He felt like home.
When Gigi finally pulled back from the hug, Grayson retrieved a black gift box from the table. The box was an inch tall and maybe twice the length of a Pop-Tart. "This is from Avery."
Gigi's eyes widened. She thought of the last time she'd seen Avery Grambs, on a video that had probably been watched by half the world at this point. One-nine-zero-three-one-nine-three-seven-one-nine-four-six-one-nine-eight-zero.
Avery and Grayson were close. She'd inherited his family's fortune. It was a whole thing. And Avery was currently in a relationship with one of Grayson's brothers, which Gigi had gathered was also A Thing.
Taking the box gingerly from her brother's hand, Gigi opened it to find a golden ticket.
"It's yours if you want it." Grayson's voice was softer now. He wasn't a soft person, and that told Gigi that this gift wasn't just a lark. This was Avery trying to make up for-
Don't think about it. Not her fault! It's not anyone's fault but Dad's.
"I'm not going to tell," Gigi said, a lump in throat. "Avery knows that, right?"
Grayson brought his eyes to hers. "She knows."
Gigi swallowed and skimmed her fingers lightly across the ticket's edge. "I should probably give this to someone who needs it more." Gigi had a trust fund. Most people didn't.Â
You can always give the money away if you win." Grayson deployed the dreaded eyebrow arch. Again.
Gigi pointed an accusing finger at his face. "You put Avery up to this because you don't want me interning with Zabrowski, didn't you?"
"Not to belabor the point, but you are already not interning with Zabrowski."
"The photos I just sent him beg to differ. Agree to disagree." Gigi grinned. Smiling made you happier. That was just science. But no matter how much she smiled these days, Gigi still felt... off. Lying didn't come easily to her.
Neither did grieving.
Gigi looked back down at the golden ticket, nestled in the black box. "What can you tell me about this year's game?" she asked Grayson.
"Scan the ticket. Claim your spot. You'll get all of the information you need - and nothing else out of me."
"Oh, really?" Gigi took that as a challenge. She knelt and held out her hand. "Katara. Here, kitty."
Anticipating - correctly - that he was about to have a large cat placed on his head, Grayson elaborated. "I can't tell you anything because I don't know anything. Avery and Jamie asked me to be boots on the ground this year. I'll be running the game, so I'm going in with no foreknowledge whatsoever."
Can't tip your hand if you don't know the cards, Gigi mused. Another thought came on the heels of the first, intense and tinged with heartache. I need this.
She took a deep breath and removed the ticket from the box. As she scanned the code and claimed her spot, Grayson carefully broached the untouchable subject.
"Have you heard from Savannah?"
Lyra POV
In the first draft of the book, Lyra's feelings toward Grayson developed at a very different pace-there was no masquerade ball, no chandelier scene, no moment when she writes that poem and he sees it, no admission from him that he has to practice making mistakes. As I revised, I paid special attention to the Lyra-Grayson arc, and by the time we reached the moment where they were obtaining their hint on the last puzzle, the scene I'd written for that moment no longer worked. But I was sad to lose it, because I do love Grayson Hawthorne playing the violin.
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Grayson removed the box from the drawer. As Lyra watched, he ran his hand over the surface of what appeared to be solid wood. Every inch of it.
"Here," Grayson murmured. He pressed sharply on a specific section of the wood and twisted his hand clockwise. A circular panel fell off the box.
Beneath the panel, there was the face of a clock.
"What-" Lyra started to say, but Grayson cut her off.
"Puzzle box," he responded. "Give me five minutes, ten at most."
Nine minutes later, the box was open. Inside, there was yet another collection of objects, but this time, one in particular hit Lyra hard.
A pair of toe shoes.
Grayson removed them from the box and reached for another pair of objects: a violin and a bow.
Only two items remained in the box: a sketchbook and a mechanical pencil.
"Use them." The sound of Nash's voice reminded Lyra that the oldest Hawthorne brother had promised that after the box was open, they would talk. "Those objects were chosen to be personal. Use them, and you'll get your hint."
"And one more thing... " Jameson Hawthorne sounded like he was enjoying this. A narrow door swung open to reveal a closet full of formal wear. "You all have to dress the part."
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It had been years since Lyra had slipped her feet into toe shoes and wrapped ribbons around her ankles to hold them in place. These shoes weren't new. They'd been broken in, and they fit her feet better than they should have, since she wasn't the one who'd broken them in.
Tying the ribbons, Lyra stood, her dress flowing as she did. She'd chosen the only ball gown in the closet with a skirt made of tulle. The bodice was strapless, which wasn't ideal for moving, but the dress fit her like the toe shoes did: perfectly. The bodice was fitted and a dark navy blue; the tulle skirt started at the slimmest part of Lyra's waist in the same dark-blue color, but the fabric lightened, inch by inch, to a brilliant blue that gave way to a light, frothy one, that melded into the lightest pastel. The bottom of the skirt was completely white. The color didn't change evenly across the skirt; it changed in waves.
Lyra felt like she was wearing a waterfall.
"We'll need to go back to the mosaic room." Grayson's voice was curt. "There isn't room for you to dance in here."
He stalked past her, and Lyra didn't let herself linger on the way that Grayson Hawthorne looked in a vintage tuxedo.
He'd chosen one of the black ones.
He held the violin in one hand and the bow in the other, and stalked back to the mosaic room like he wasn't holding either. Lyra followed, Odette on her heels, the sketch pad and pencil in the old woman's hands. Odette had chosen to dress the part in a long, tight, shimmering dress the color of red wine. Her silvery-gray hair was loose around her shoulders, the black tips popping even against the deep burgundy fabric of the gown.
In the mosaic room, Grayson paused, his back to the wall of windows that showed it was still dark outside.
But not for long. They were on the clock.
"Will you be able to dance safely on the tiles?" Grayson asked. Lyra tested the ground beneath her feet. It felt smoother than it should have, the space between the individual tiles miniscule.
She nodded. If I'm able to dance at all.
Avery and Grayson's brothers had chosen their challenge well. Lyra would have preferred answering a thousand questions about herself to this.
She'd been good once. She'd loved dancing - once. I'm not that Lyra anymore.
"Let's get this over with," Grayson said in that same curt tone. "I'll play, you dance... " He barely skimmed his gaze over Lyra before focusing in on Odette. "And you'll draw." He paused. "I would assume that you're supposed to sketch our dancer."
A musician. An artist. A dancer.
For the longest moment, their entire team just stood there, and then Grayson lifted the violin to his chin, and then he raised the bow, and then he began to play.
Lyra didn't recognize the song-but oh. It was... not just beautiful. Complicated. Powerful. She ached with unfamiliar emotions just listening to it, and without warning, her body lost itself to Grayson's music. Lyra didn't plan out the moves, didn't count a single step in her head - but oh.
Oh
She'd missed this. Legs extending, body turning, on pointe, in the air. She danced the way that Grayson Hawthorne's music was meant to be danced to. It hurt. Dancing hurt. More than running, more than pushing herself, more than the dreams.
It hurt in the best possible way, the music ripping her heart out. Lyra couldn't have held back if she'd tried, and when it was over - when Grayson lowered his bow and the spell was broken - all she could do was look at him like she might never look away.
You're okay.
"There," Grayson said, his voice oddly hoarse. "It's done."
Nothing happened. Slowly, Lyra looked from Grayson to Odette.
The old woman shook her head, and the pencil dropped from her hand. Grayson knelt to pick it up, and Odette shook her head again. "I can't," she said. "You do it." She whipped her eyes from his to Lyra's and back again. "You draw her."
Grayson went stiff. "That wasn't the deal."
"One of us has to," Odette said. "Let it be you."
"Will that even work?" Lyra refused to look at Grayson, who apparently found the idea of drawing her somehow unbearable. "The objects were chosen to be personal to each of us. The sketch-book was yours."
"Believe me," Odette said quietly, "this is personal to him, too."
Lyra had no idea what to make of that. Grayson must have decided that there was no time to argue, because he snatched the sketchbook from Odette, set his mouth into an unforgiving, unwavering line, and began to draw.
Lyra swallowed. Suddenly, she didn't know where to look or what to do. She'd never been drawn before.
"Stand still," Grayson ordered roughly.
Lyra stood still, trying not to feel his gaze like a physical thing, trying not to wonder what she looked like through his eyes or remember the beautiful, painful, everything music he'd played.
"Done." Grayson let the sketch pad fall from his hands to the ground. "Satisfied?"
Lyra didn't mean to walk forward, to kneel, to pick up the drawing. But she did. A breath caught in her throat. There was no way-absolutely no way - that she looked like that. The dress, the expression on her face, the curves of her body. Not hidden. Not downplayed. The almost ethereal - but also intense - look in her eyes. Her hair, falling out of the makeshift bun she'd hastily put in.
Grayson Hawthorne had made her beautiful.
"Nicely done, Gray, but Odette has to draw." Nash did gentle very well, like it came more naturally to him than any of his brothers. "Those are the rules."
"You couldn't have told us that before?" Grayson looked like he was considering murder.
Lyra darted her gaze to Odette.
"I wanted to be an artist," the woman said quietly. "When I was very young."
How young? Lyra wondered. But she didn't say it. All she said out loud was: "Please. We're so close, Odette."
Odette took the pencil from Grayson but still couldn't seem to put it to a page.
"My parents are selling their house," Lyra blurted out. "Whatever financial trouble they're in, it must be bad if they're even considering selling. My dad - my real dad, who raised me - he grew up in that house." Lyra didn't want to be saying any of this, especially in front of Grayson, but she didn't see any other choice. "They can't afford college for me or for my brothers. I'm fine with dropping out, but I want options for them. Please, Odette."
With shaking hands, the old woman put the pencil to the page, and she drew, and when she stopped, when Lyra came to stand beside her and look down at the page, the image that Odette had drawn stole the breath from Lyra's chest.
A calla lily.
Savannah & Rohan POV
One of the largest changes I made in the revision was cutting Savannah's point of view. There were many reasons I chose to do this - it allowed me to play up the mystery surrounding Savannah's motivations and use that to provide some key plot beats from Rohan's point of view; it let me build more tension into the push and pull between them; and it helped me speed up the pace of the book, especially in the beginning. The cost of those gains, though, was losing the ability to let the reader see how Rohan looks through her eyes. In that first draft, they also ended the book in a very different place...
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SAVANNAH
Savannah didn't look at Rohan as she walked past him into his room. He'd drawn on the walls. She took in the images - and he names.
Hers was absent.
She spun, facing Rohan down before he could get any ideas about coming closer. "We're opponents now."
He offered her that smile. "We always were, love."
Savannah hated that she was here. She hated that she'd come. But most of all, she hated that she couldn't leave. "Gigi drew me a map."
She hadn't intended to say that, to tell him that.
"And that's a problem?"
Savannah wondered if, after justice had been served, she'd be able to look at Gigi without feeling like her heart was being ripped slowly out of her chest. She wondered if things could ever go back to the way they'd been before Grayson Hawthorne had steamrolled his way into their family. The way things had been before Savannah knew the truth.
"It isn't anything," Savannah said, gratified that she sounded calmer than she felt. She let her eyes linger on Rohan's. "This isn't anything, either."
He knew what she was talking about. He knew, and he took a step forward and then another-toward her.
"Absolutely nothing," Rohan agreed.
Savannah stepped forward. They were a foot apart now, if that. "I don't lose control - not over something like this."
Rohan leaned forward, or she did - Savannah wasn't sure which - but either way, within the span of a single, jagged breath, his face was right next to hers, his head angled so that he could whisper directly into her ear.
"Has it occurred to you, Savvy, that there might not be anything else like this?"
Savannah swallowed. "Like you, you mean?" she said, calling him out for thinking that he could play her like this.
"Admit it, Savannah: This isn't just me."
She felt his breath on her neck, right below the place where her jawbone met her ear. Her body wanted to shudder, but Savannah didn't let it.
"Whoever made you feel like there was something wrong with you... " Rohan's hand found its way to Savannah's neck. His fingers pushed back into her hair. "Whoever convinced you that it was your job to feel and your failure if you didn't... "
"I don't fail." Savannah's voice was hard, but she couldn't breathe, couldn't blink, couldn't stop her neck from arching, her hand from reaching for the front of his shirt. "Ever." She grabbed the fabric of his shirt and pulled him forward. "And don't fool yourself into thinking that you can make me feel anything."
"I don't have to." He didn't call her Savvy. He didn't call her anything as he brought his lips to almost touch hers. "Some things," Rohan said, lips to lips, the feel of his words exploding through her body like fireworks, like fire, like the snapping of bones, "just are."
Some things. Savannah dug her fingers into his hair, then pulled his head back. Her lips crashed down onto his. She was in control. She was. But his words burned through her.
Some things just are.
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ROHAN
She wasn't a gentle kisser. Good. Neither was he. Rohan didn't mind the way she pulled at his hair. He drove his hands into hers.
"Is this the part," Savannah said, not stopping, not pulling back, not giving him an inch, "where you tell me I'm beautiful?"
She said the word beautiful with an edge. Rohan pushed her back against the wall, not caring if she got charcoal smudges all over those perfect, carefully chosen clothes.
"This is the part where I tell you that you're terrifying," Rohan said, because he knew it would make her smile-and because he meant it.
Savannah Grayson was terrifying.
She unzipped her vest. "This doesn't mean anything," she warned him, as the vest dropped to the floor. "Not a damn thing."
She pushed him back and back and back-and down onto the bed.
"Agreed," Rohan said. This - between them, now - could serve his purposes. This could be a part of the plan, whatever the hell the plan ended up being.
"And tomorrow," Savannah said, climbing on top of him, pinning him down, "I am going to destroy you."
Rohan felt the edges of his mouth turning upward as he flipped and pinned her. "Agree to disagree," he said.
Kissing someone wasn't supposed to feel like this. Nothing was. Nothing could.
"I hate you," Savannah gritted out, but she didn't stop. She couldn't, any more than he could.
Somehow, Rohan's shirt came off - his doing or hers, who was to say?
'You can hate me like this all you want, Savannah Grayson."
"I want-"
"Tell me," Rohan whispered.
"I want you to shut up-and when we're done, to never speak of this again."
Savvy.
"Why would I?" Rohan said. "There's nothing to say."
Except...
This time, when Rohan kissed Savannah Grayson, he was gentle. He ran his thumb lightly across her jawbone and leaned down to whisper directly in her ear. "I promise, Savvy: I'm going to do my very best to destroy you, too."
A Suit-Napping Most Foul
I really love writing Hawthorne brother hijinks. "One Hawthorne Night" and "What Happens in the Tree House" gave me my first taste of what it's like when the Hawthorne brothers "bond" in their own special way, and I initially envisioned having a third story in the anthology that really complements those two. The proposed title was "A Suit-Napping Most Foul," and the premise was basically that someone kidnaps all of Grayson's suits. The story was going to be set either between The Hawthorne Legacy and The Final Gambit or between The Final Gambit and The Brothers Hawthorne... on April Fools' Day.
The initial description I turned in to my editor literally just said: "It's April first, and Grayson's suits have been kidnapped."
Honestly, just looking at that sentence, I totally want to write it. Maybe someday I will! But for now, I can show you the tiny snippet I did write, which was meant to be the opening page of the story.
Enjoy!
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On the evening of March thirty-first, Grayson Hawthorne slept lightly - but apparently, not lightly enough. On the morning of April first at precisely 6:43 AM, he woke to find that he had been robbed. The thief or thieves had hit both of his walk-in closets.
Every single suit was gone.
No jackets. No slacks. No dress shirts. In fact, the only items in either closet were a rather disturbing array of Hawaiian shirts - dozens of them, in the most garish colors imaginable.
Shirts but no pants. Jaw hardening, Grayson looked up. Plastered to the ceiling, held in place by who knows what, was a single pair of leather pants.
Grayson did not know which of his brothers was - or in the case of multiple perpetrators, were - responsible, but that didn't stop him from beginning to systematically plot out his response.
One did not merely fool a Hawthorne on April Fools' Day. One declared war.
Grayson was already considering several avenues for revenge when the first of the notes arrived. The bearer was canine. Tiramisu Panini Hawthorne dropped a clear plastic tube at his feet. Grayson wasn't a monster, so he didn't hold the delivery against the pup, scratching her behind the ears.
If you want to play, he told the suit-nappers silently, removing the ransom note from the tube, I will play.
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That's as far as I got. What, beside the ransom note, was in the tube? What sort of ridiculous ransom was the perpetrators going to demand of Grayson if he wanted his suits back? What form would Grayson's revenge have taken?
I'm smiling just thinking about it. I'm almost positive I'll have to finish this story someday. But for now, I present to you...
An Oral History of Infinity Equals Eight
AUTHOR'S NOTE
The following is this reporter's definitive answer to the age-old question: WHAT DO YOU MEAN GRAYSON IS PLAYING THE GRANDEST GAME, SERIOUSLY, DID YOU SEXY HAWTHORNE MINXES HAVE THIS PLANNED THE WHOLE TIME?
All statements have been excerpted from a series of brief but incisive phone interviews that this intrepid reporter conducted with involved parties immediately after being informed of this development. Cases where the subject(s) did not know they were being interviewed appear with asterisks. (You say "eavesdropping," I say "Nash and his rock-hard backside need to watch out for butt dials.")
I have taken the liberty of piecing together the story chronologically, except where I found it more amusing to do otherwise.
The truth is in the eye of the beholder.
Behold.
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PART I.
A BRIEF HISTORY OF MESSING WITH GRAYSON
FOR FUNSIES, PROFIT, AND HIS OWN GOOD
Grayson Hawthorne. The man. The myth. The legend. By far the most fun of any Hawthorne to fox with, am I right? This is the vital context through which we must interrogate the sudden and unex- pected twist in this year's game.
XANDER HAWTHORNE: I once locked Grayson in a cello case with a longsword, a crossbow, and a calico kitten. But in my defense, it was at least eighty-two percent accidental, I was only four at the time, and Jameson had a pie.
JAMESON HAWTHORNE: Do we occasionally kidnap Grayson's suits and send ransom notes demanding elaborate acts of obeisance for their return? Perhaps. Perhaps we do. But that has no relevance whatsoever to today's-
(interviewer interjects)
JAMESON HAWTHORNE: The thing with the cello case? I can neither confirm nor deny personal responsibility, but let the record show that Xander was four and easily distracted, and I had a pie.
NASH HAWTHORNE: Sometimes Gray needs reminding about which one of us is the little brother and which one of us isn't. (long pause) Might be that sometimes that reminder takes an unconventional form.
XANDER HAWTHORNE: We just want him to be happy. Think of it like a Rube Goldberg machine where the first step is painting stripes on his face and the last step is- (muffled background noise)
NASH HAWTHORNE: But this? This was never about messin with Gray. (long pause) This was about the girl.
PART II.
THE GIRL
The world - and the five of us - were told that this year's Grandest Game would have seven total players: Three who would be receiving direct invitations from Avery and an additional four wild card players who had to solve a puzzle to obtain one of four tickets hidden somewhere in the continental United States.
One such wild card player is nineteen-year-old Lyra Kane.
AVERY GRAMBS: Oren put together a dossier on each of the wild cards. There was nothing particularly concerning about Lyra Kane's.
JOHN OREN (HEAD OF SECURITY FOR AVERY GRAMBS/THE GRANDEST GAME): For the last time, Maxine, I am not available for an "interview."
JAMESON HAWTHORNE: The second Grayson heard her speak, it was obvious: He knew her.
NASH HAWTHORNE: What does she look like? A kid.
JAMESON HAWTHORNE: She's Xander's age.
XANDER HAWTHORNE: Picture, if you will, a teenage archaeologist/assassin as played by a Hollywood starlet who does her own stunts and vaguely seems like she could be a time traveler from either a bygone era or the year 2255.
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And that was as far as I got. I made it to the point where I wanted to show Lyra - as a person - through the eyes of the game makers, and my writerly spidey senses just very strongly said that I needed to let those perspectives and interactions unfold more naturally through the course of the main storyline in the Grandest Game books. Reading back over what I wrote, the thing that brings me the most joy is imagining Rebecca and Thea reading the oral history to each other as it arrives in the group chat, and then watching as Alisa insists that she is not, in fact, a part of the chat, even though she totally is.
The Puppy Hawthorne
* Start with the scene where Nash saves her from that frat boys.
- Maybe begin with her tucked into his shirt, culdled up against his chest, listening to his heartbeat.
- How would she think of Nash? In her puppy mind, what's his name? "Warm Safe Wrestle Man
- Smells like grass and wind and... Libby.
* Get a Libby/Nash moment from the puppy's poit-of-view.
* Xanden naming her.
* Maybe the night with Leather Pants Grayson? I feel like her name for Gray would have the phrase "Good Pats" in it.
* Xanden training her to do very Xandery tricks. Like a Rube Goldbey machine... but with a puppy.
* A scene or scenes with some of the characters we haven't seen as much of? Maybe Oren and/or Zara.
* Probably an Alisa scene because, Alisa is starting to feel the ache of wanting something real and warm and hers (set up secret arc!)
* Nan and puppy would be hilarious!
* Maybe end with pup snuggling Libby's belly?