Sonia M. 

Yes I swim but I have respect ocean. 
Yes I swim, but I have respect for the ocean.
Yes I swim, but I respect the ocean. 
Yes I swim, but I am a little afraid of the ocean.
Yes I swim, but I fear the ocean.  

I like drive so much
I like to drive so much.
I like to drive very much.
I like to drive a lot.
I like driving...

i learn in my school when i had 8 years old. 
I learned in school when I was 8 years old. 

I only drink with social, when i stay in social..
I only drink in social situations. 

Anyone (nadie)
No one

I write about (pensamientos), dreams, and future projects.
I write about my thoughts, dreams, and future projects.

There are many = GOOD, or
I have many. 

I want bring with me my father.
I want to bring my father with me.
I want to bring my father to Portugal.  

I want go to vacation with my daughter.
I want to go on vacation with my daughter.

I want learn English
I want to learn English   

I want speak in English very very good.
I want to speak in English very very well. 

My father have enterprise in Venezuela.
My father has a company in Venezuela. 

My father dont want come here because want sales machinary there,
but is imposible sales right now because venezuela has difficult conflicts political and economic. 

My father doesn’t want to come here because he wants to sell his machinery there. 
it is impossible to sell right now because Venezuela is having difficult political and economic conflicts.