Writing

When we start writing a paragraph, we need to have three main sentences.

The Topic Sentence

The Supporting Sentence 

The Concluding Sentence

The Topic Sentence is the sentences that talks about the main idea of a pragraph.  But you  need to remember we never use words that talk about myself like "I" but they are some exceptions.

The Supporting Sentences help to scaffold the idea of the topic sentence. But they all need to relate back with the main idea of the paragraph. So people use Topic Statements(A sentence that helps writers to keep focus of the main idea)

The Concluding Sentence is the last sentence and ends the paragraph. It usually restates the main idea, gives a suggestion, gives a opinion or gives a prediction about the paragraph.

Words in a paragraph shouldn't be vague like "good". Try using words like fantastic, exceptional,superb.

Here are some words we normally use to end off a concluding sentence

as a result

for this reason

in the end

because of this

hence

overall

certainly

in conclusion

surely

clearly

indeed

therefore

in sum

thus

Here is an example try to categorize them using the following information I have given. Then, if you would like to check if you are correct, you can go contact us.

Apart from High School and College being in different levels, they have many similarities. Firstly, Both of them give you majors so that you can pick what you want to study in. Since they already have majors, when making new friends, you will be categorized in which major you're taking and all the classmates you will have share the same interests as you. Secondly, they provide clubs, groups for you to attend to get a higher chance of enrolling into higher levels. They also give awards to sport clubs that won competition which also helps in your application letter. Thirdly, since you are at a high level, there are professors that instruct, guide and help you to succeed at your goals. But, you should also be able to work independently and without your friends or professors. Lastly, they both give a lot of homework, practice tests, quizzes and essays to do to enrich your knowledge and also to help you academically. For these reasons, we can conclude that both High School and College mostly share similarities between each other.