Do you need an abstract to identify what the paper is going to discuss before the intro?
Introduction
- I like the bold words but I am not sure if that follows proper styling.
- third sentence, I would add: "example of one of those geometry algorithms."
- "On the other hand, finding and dating a romantic partner seems to be the far away from rational science." I would rephrase in a way that you clearly state that romance matching is an application
- change this to these in "combine this two topics"
- change "one of the applications interests us" to "one of the applications that interest us"
- Define query point
- I would change "the data set of speed dating" to "a dataset of speed dating" since you have not yet said which data set and there are probably more than one speed dating data set out there.
Related work
- Applications
- I would introduce the NNS abbreviation in this paragraph again since this is the first time you are using it.
- Algorithms
- I might change "effort to design algorithms to construct" to "effort in designing algorithms to construct"
- Which algorithm did you chose to use for your project and why?
- Matchmaking
- I would change "Those 29 dimensions include kindness, sociability, physical energy, etc." To say something like "Some examples are x, y, and z."
Algorithms
- NNS
- Not sure what this section is for
Application
- Data set
- I would combine the first two sentences along with the name of the data set
- "After the four minute data," to "After the four minute date"
- I'd like an explanation on how those graphs show that being attractive is the most important feature in fig 3
- Experiment Design
- I would state the goal of your thesis at the very beginning of the paper as well as here