I would remove 'Doing' in the title
Problem Statement
- maybe say which dataset in this paragraph(I see it now. I would add it to the first sentence and then you can reference as the dataset or something like that)
- "In recent time"-I personally would like a more exact wording even if it is just something like in the last few decades
- The sentence "In recent times...potentially save lives" Is too long and I think a run-on sentence.
- I would add periods at there locations: "larger wildfires. We" and "data and technique. If it".
- What to columns? Maybe call the columns the techy term which I believe is features
- I am confused about you saying that it will be trained on two columns or features and then saying you are only going to predict with one of those. Shouldn't it be trained and test on the same amount of input values
Predictive Analytics
- What is it
- maybe not use the word analytical when defining predictive analytics
- I would change the second sentence to start with "It" instead of "Predictive analytics"
- Combine 3rd and 4th sentence into 1 sentence
- Maybe also combine the 5th and 6th into 1 sentence
- You use 2 different citing styles. Pick one and stick with it
- efficient should be efficiently in "finding patterns more efficient"
- The 2 sentences in the second paragraph seem repetitive and could be combined maybe. You state faster then humans in both
- "It Key difference" to " A key difference"
- what type of techniques used today? I'd explain more on the difference between machine learning and predictive analytics
- last sentence uses "to find" too many times for my preferences
- maybe define as: "predictive analytics is the process or method of finding ways"
- Origin
- I don't know if this is possible but maybe use predictive analytics less
- Methodology and Applications
- I don't know why but I dislike the wording of the first sentence but that might just be me
- Stick to one citation format
- Not sure when data preparation step started
- I would rethink the paragraphs. I do not see the topic changes between them in multiple cases.
Linear Regression
- Overview
- I wouldn't lead with that sentence. Switch with second, merge it, or just remove it. I don't believe it adds much.
- Talk about supervised learning/what it is
- I am not sure on the amount of paragraphs
- What are the coefficients? What are they used for?
- Confused on the sections on the top of page 5.
- History
- I feel like there are some of sentences that say the same thing throughout the paper so far. For example, I feel like the first sentence has been stated before in different ways.
- I think some of these sentence can be combined for a more complex sentence structure
- Applications
- Avoid using the phrase "a lot", it is very informal.
Related Works
- Wildfire Predictions
- "several organization" to "several organizations"
- Instead of "that data" I would do something like "the data described above"
- Dataset
- I would redefine the data set with its name in the new section first sentence
Methodology
- Goals
- What package?
- What does the second sentence mean? I could use more explanation
- What is meant by prediction rate?
- How are you comparing the groups stuff? Did you describe what the other people in the group are doing?
- What different algorithms?
- improve in what way/using what qualification of improvement?
- Dataset
- Use the technical term, not "columns"
- Where/how are you obtaining this dataset?
- Testing the Fit
- Compare how?
- Why are you testing the model this way?
- Why selecting a random selection for test and training?
- Cleaning the Data
- I'd reword the first sentence to something like "Before we could apply our algorithm, we cleaned the data by..."
- How did you guarantee that your data from the first column stayed with its pair from the second column when selecting it randomly for train or test?
- How big was the dataset to begin with?
- Progress
- "idea of what"
- Include title and caption for image
Where is the reference section?