This question assesses your ability to:
AO5: Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting tone, style and register for different forms, purposes and audiences. Organise information and ideas, using structural and grammatical features to support coherence and cohesion of texts
AO6: Candidates must use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures for clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation.
This question is worth half of the Language Paper (40 Marks), requiring students to apply their knowledge of language and structural techniques to a non-fiction writing piece. In this part of the exam, students will be given a written prompt, and will be asked to create a piece of non-fiction, such as an article, essay, editorial, letter, etc. To be successful, students need to demonstrate their command of mechanics (SPaG), language techniques, and structural techniques.
Suggested time: 45-50 minutes
Top tips:
Plan first! Students are most successful if they do a quick plan of their work so that it can be structured appropriately.
Make sure you have read the question carefully and understand what the focus of your work should be, the tone (appropriate for your viewpoint and your audience), and the format.
Pack it with techniques! You'll be assessed on how well you can use language and structure features in your work, so use them often (but appropriately).
Use ambitious vocabulary. You get more marks from attempting to use ambitious words and spelling them incorrectly, than you do if you only use basic vocabulary and spell it correctly.
Take care in your technical accuracy - it's worth 40% of this section- and don't forget to show off your ability to use a variety of punctuation!
Short, snappy sentences
Short, simple sentences
Long, complex sentences
Short paragraphs
Long paragraphs
Dialogue
Description
Action
Shift in focus
Shift in topic
Shift in time
Shift in character
Zoom out
Zoom in
Exposition
Rising Action
Climax
Falling Action
Resolution/Denouement
Inciting Incident
Connectives
Repetition
In media res
1st person/2nd person/3rd person POV
Past/present/future tense
Temporal references (references to time)
Withholding information
Endings
Order of the events
Flashback
Flashforward
Circular narrative
Justaposition
Chronological structure
Rule of 3
Direct speech
Simile
Metaphor
Onomatopoeia
Alliteration
Sibilance
Sensory Language
Emotive Language
Repetition
Asyndetic List
Oxymoron
Hyperbole
Personification
Pathetic Fallacy
Assonance
Consonance
Colloquial language
Dialect
Dialogue
Dissonance
Imagery
Irony
Pathos
Rhyme
Symbolism
Lexical (Word) Choice
Semantic Field
Need some revision to build your confidence with these techniques? Try the links below.
'People have become obsessed with travelling ever further and faster. However, travel is expensive, dangerous, damaging, and a foolish waste of time!'
Write an article for a news website in which you argue your point of view on this statement.
Hook Begin with a strong, attention-grabbing opening. Use a shocking statistic, bold statement, rhetorical question, vivid scene, or surprising fact. The goal is to immediately capture the reader’s interest.
Establish Expertise Show the reader why they should trust you or your argument. Mention your experience, knowledge, research, or reliable sources. Build credibility so the reader takes your views seriously.
Appeal to Emotions Use emotive language to connect with the reader’s feelings. Stir emotions such as anger, sympathy, fear, hope, or pride. Make the reader care deeply about the issue.
Relate Personally Share a personal story, anecdote, or example. Help the reader connect with the issue on a human level. Show how the topic affects real people (including yourself or someone close).
Tell Them What Should Change Clearly explain what needs to change and why. Give practical suggestions or a strong call to action. Be specific about what the reader or society should do differently.
Sum It Up Powerfully End with a memorable, forceful conclusion. Summarise your main argument and leave a lasting impression. Use a powerful final sentence, prediction, warning, or inspiring call to action.
Have you ever thought about how crazy people have become about travelling? These days everyone seems obsessed with going further and faster, but I strongly believe travel is expensive, dangerous, damaging and a foolish waste of time.
I have looked at news articles online and spoken to people in my family who travel a lot. From what I have found out, flights and holidays cost a huge amount of money, and there are many risks involved.
It really worries me when I think about the damage travel does. Planes pump out so much pollution and that is harming our planet. It makes me feel angry and scared for the future because the environment is suffering just so people can have a nice holiday.
Last summer my uncle spent nearly two thousand pounds on a trip abroad. The flight was delayed for hours, he lost his suitcase, and he came home exhausted. It seemed like a complete waste of money and time to me, and he said he wished he had just stayed at home.
I think people need to stop travelling so far and so often. We should take more holidays in our own country instead. The government should make plane tickets more expensive and encourage people to use trains or stay local. That would be better for everyone.
In conclusion, travelling ever further and faster is not worth it. It costs too much, puts people in danger, damages the environment and wastes precious time. People need to stop being so obsessed with it and start thinking more carefully about the real cost of their journeys.
Is the World’s Obsession with Travel Really Such a Bad Thing?
In a world where the furthest corners of the planet are just a click and a credit card away, have we truly become slaves to speed and distance — or are we simply refusing to live smaller lives?
As someone who has spent years studying the environmental and social impact of global mobility, and who has spoken to both climate scientists and ordinary travellers, I have seen the evidence from both sides. The statistics are clear: aviation accounts for roughly 2.5% of global carbon emissions, and overtourism is straining cities from Barcelona to Bali. Yet the same research also reveals something the critics rarely mention — the profound educational, economic and human benefits that thoughtful travel continues to deliver.
The Cost of Staying Still
Imagine a child who has never left their hometown, whose only knowledge of the world comes from a screen. Now imagine that same child standing in front of the Colosseum, or watching the Northern Lights paint the Arctic sky, or sharing food with a family on the other side of the planet. That moment of wonder cannot be downloaded. When we dismiss travel as merely “expensive, dangerous and damaging,” we risk stripping future generations of the very experiences that teach empathy, resilience and perspective. The real danger is not the journey — it is the shrinking of our collective imagination.
A Journey That Changed Everything
I still remember my first long-haul flight at sixteen: exhausted, overstimulated, and completely transformed. I returned home less certain of my own opinions and more curious about everyone else’s. That single trip did more to challenge my assumptions than years of classroom lessons. Yes, it cost money. Yes, it left a carbon footprint. But it also left a mark on the way I see other people — and that is not a foolish waste of time.
Travelling Better, Not Less
The answer is not to stop travelling. The answer is to travel better. We should demand cleaner aviation fuel, invest seriously in high-speed rail, limit the worst excesses of overtourism, and prioritise slower, more meaningful journeys over endless weekend city-breaks. Governments and airlines must make sustainable options the affordable norm, not the expensive exception. And as individuals, we must ask ourselves harder questions before we book: Is this trip necessary? Can I stay longer and go deeper? Can I give more to the place I visit than I take?
A Wider Horizon
Travel is not the enemy. Thoughtless, excessive, status-driven travel is. To abandon exploration entirely would be to accept a poorer, narrower, less compassionate world. The horizon still calls — we simply have a responsibility to answer it with intelligence, humility and care. The future of travel is not about going further and faster. It is about going wiser.