As we were reading the editor’s draft , we noted 57 comments/suggestions about the organization and presentation of the spec (as well as grammatical and spelling errors). A copy of a noted spec draft is included for your information.
Some suggestions are:
Detail instances for the suggestions above can be found in the attached HTML document below (click the down arrow to download the HTML file).
The comments are at the end with links back to their locations in the spec.
Thanks for your consideration.
Li Li, Wu Chou