2_2 Draft Sharing

Individual Deliverable 2: Draft Sharing

From:     Lani Uyeno

To:         Hali'a Interns

SubjectGetting Started and Drafting

The time has come for you to share your writing with fellow interns. This is your opportunity to get feedback about your memoir.

Posting your draft

Post your memoir draft as an attachment to the 2.1 Discussion Forum. Title the posting “Event: Your Name." Please consult the Daily Assignments listing for the due date.

Remember, your draft should be double spaced with your name and the word count on it.

Click here if you need to a reminder of how to post attachments to the Discussion Forum.


Within your team, select a peer to complete the critique for the draft of your memoir 1.  You will do the same for your teammate and will post the critique by the deadline on your Daily Assignments sheet.

Once you are paired in your teams, you will need to download your fellow intern’s memoir, read it, and answer the questions available on the 2.1 Discussion Forum. 

When you get your peer critiques back, you are ready to finish your memoir. Move on Individual Deliverable 2: Final Draft for instructions on how to complete and turn in your Event memoir.