THE DILIGENT FOX - CALLUM J BROWN
This novella combines elements of fantasy, social realism and the religious parable and koan. We follow the progress of a the growing fox cub Pict and his family in a harsh world where animals speak - but with a strong West of Scotland accent! Here's an extract from the opening chapter:
Midge and Kipper had finally noticed the black and white figures hopping around in their play area. The cubs charged at the birds with joyous cries. Raspy chatter filled the air as the magpies took to the air and scattered. Pict bowed his head and looked at the ground. What he had seen had overwhelmed his mind. What a nasty thing, he thought, the life of a worm must be sad. Is life always like that?
Pict wondered what happened when a creature entered another’s stomach. Where they gone
forever? He knew to be afraid of being eaten. Being crushed by jaws and then swallowed surely caused immense pain and suffering. Whatever followed could not be good even if it was a mystery to the little fox cub. Pict’s mind came to standstill as he reflected on the slaughter his siblings had unknowingly caused and halted. He held a concentration never before obtained in his short life. All at once did the mental intoxications of self leave his mind. Like a dimming light, the questions of
origin and fate faded away. Pride, age and strength had no meaning. He was free in silent bliss under the decaying arch of colour.
A dead rat fell to Pict’s feet from on high. He shot to his feet with a piercing yelp. His trance was abruptly ended. A loud voice, utterly different to the deathly tranquility from before, called out.
“Whit ye daein, ya dreamer? Aren’t ye supposed tae be watching? Ah could ‘ave been anybody.”
Pict turned around and looked up. Before him stood Fritter, a mangy vixen. Her fur was a weak orange, that of a fading ember losing its heat. Bald patches of cracked scar tissue dotted around her body. Fritter looked sternly at Pict. Her frown was highlighted by the slight bend in the scar which
trailed down her right eye. With a squealing voice Pict scrambled together his courage.
“Mammy, I was watching,” he said.
“Naw, ye were daydreaming. No the same ‘hing,” Fritter exclaimed.
Her frown moved towards Midge and Kipper who had not noticed the arrival of their mother.
“Oi, whit ‘ave ah telt youse? Never leave the shelter and stop messing around when am no here.”
“He likes it, mammy,” exclaimed Midge as she pinned Kipper to the ground.
“Well ah don’t an’ that’s that. Get over here now. Swear, youse all drive me insane.”
Midge released Kipper and the two cubs padded over to their mother. Pict stared at the ground as his siblings approached. He could sense a rising tension within Fritter’s belly but if Kipper had noticed his mother’s annoyance he did not care.
“Ew, whit’s that rat? We had it jist yesterday,” Kipper complained.
Fritter jabbed her front right paw hard into Kipper’s side. Pict winched at the sound of his brother’s whelp. Fritter then shoved Kipper’s snout into the soil, pressing down with her paw. Her teeth were bared and her furious voice lashed right beside his ear as she forced him further down into the muck.
“If ah hear another complaint outta ye, ye wee mutt!”
Fritter released Kipper. His head sprang out of the soil and he gasped as though he had been submerged in water. His mother ignored his discomfort and strode over to the end of the fallen tree. She urinated on the rotten wall of wood. The aroma gradually defused throughout the oasis. A warning to others that Fritter was present. Midge sat and looked down on the dead rat. She ignored her brother’s pain and pretended to wait patiently. Pict’s instinct was to help Kipper as he watched
him cough and splatter the mud off his snout but he knew not to interfere in his mother’s chastisement.
The three cubs dismembered the dead rat in silence. Goo-like blood oozed out of its corpse. It was an odd sight which Pict could not understand. Blood was meant to flow hot and free, not cold and sluggish. They devoured the carcass under Fritter’s watchful gaze. They knew not to leave scraps
or complain. Every drop of nourishing blood had to be licked up. Fritter did not like wasting food. The worm like tail slithered down Pict’s throat and the rat was finally gone. He thought again of the earth worms and felt a terrible sense of loss.
The night was still warm. There was a notable breeze as though the earth was snoring, no longer able to control its breathing. It irritated Fritter. The lukewarm wind against the back of her neck reminded her of the hot breath of past foes as they bit and slashed her vulnerable spots. The trio of cubs nestled against Fritter. Her bushy tail sheltered them from the occasional breeze as it curled around their nimble bodies. But Pict could not sleep. His mind pondered over the misery of the past
day. He felt the sting of guilt. So many creatures endured the obvious pain of being devoured and yet only now had Pict realised the closeness of suffering. Midge and Kipper’s breathing was slow and relaxed as they slumbered. Fritter could feel their little furry tummies gently rising up and then
down. She felt that Pict’s tummy was more conscious and rapid in its movement. She knew her son
was awake.
“Whit’s keeping ye awake, son?” Fritter asked in a unusually gentle whisper.
“Sorry, mammy,” said Pict “I was just thinking about something.”
Pict shifted his head and looked at his mother. The bleakness of the summer night concealed her tormented figure. She looked almost peaceful. Pict could tell his mother was not looking at him. Her eyes looked upon the same spot where he had witnessed the massacre of the worms.
“Of the same stuff ye were day dreaming aboot, aye?” She asked.
“Yes. Mammy, what happens after you get eaten?”
Fritter squirmed as though an unwelcome insect had ticked her paw. She scratched her ear, clearly uncomfortable and then shook her head hoping to wipe away the tingling sensation that had begun to scuttle across her fur.
Pict waited patiently for his mother to answer. His innocent, open-mouthed face never shifted away from her. Fritter looked ahead as if something had startled her. After a while she spoke.
“Ye know whit yer problem is, Pict? Ye ‘hink tae much.”
Fritter only allowed herself to snooze after she saw Pict’s little head flop down on her hip as he fell asleep.