Published Senior Writing

Topic Sentence Magic 3 - D1 Writing

D1 Students revised expansion and had to email their teacher with a short paragraph expanding on the topic sentence pictured to the left.

Jade Riki

My favorite thing to do is climb trees. I like to climb high. I like to chill and I can get away from my brothers. I can see the whole of the town.

Freya Cooper

My favourite thing to do is climb trees

I love going to the highest peak of the biggest tree.

It's the best when you can go branch to branch.

Last but not least, one should do this. When I find a

good branch I lie down and fall asleep.

Devon Adams

My favourite thing to do is climb trees.

I like it because I feel free.

I like climbing trees because it makes me feel free away from everyone.

Sometimes I fall, but I don't care. Bumps and bruises are all part of the fun.

Sometimes when I'm climbing a tree my cat Marmite does it with me

Once I climbed a tree with no branches. I shimmied up it like a possum.

When I got up high my mum took a photo.

That's why I like to climb trees.

Bailey Martin

My favourite thing is to climb trees!

I like to climb trees because i like to swing on the branches! When I climb up to the top of trees i feel the fresh wind on my face. I like to pretend I climbed to the top of the red wood trees! I like to pretend I climbed the red wood trees because I know they are the biggest trees in the world

Patrick Scott

My favorite thing to do is climb trees, because it reminds me about my favorite animal, a ring tailed lemur. I like to pretend I am a ring-tailed lemur when I climb. i like to go as possible without falling

Arlo Seymour

My favourite thing to do is climb trees. I like climbing trees because it is interesting to try and find native birds in the trees. I also like to jump out of trees because it feels like I am flying. It feels like I am on top of the world the feeling flows through me like blood in my vanes. that is why I like climbing trees.

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