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Trapped
Trapped
What has happened for the girl to be in the cage?
Why are the ravens circling her?
Why is there a cage there?
What would happen if birds had the same brain capacity as humans?
Mobile Home
Mobile Home
Who is in the house and where is it travelling to?
What does the inside of the house look like?
If you could live anywhere, where would it be? Why?
If you could only take three things with you on a journey, what would they be? Why?
TALK: Talk with your whanau about what you notice and wonder about the image.
TALK: Talk with your whanau about what you notice and wonder about the image.
PLAN: before you write. Choose a planning type:
PLAN: before you write. Choose a planning type:
Draw a picture plan. Add labels and keywords to your plan.
Brainstorm all of your ideas. Circle your best 3 and add extra details to each of these.
WRITE: Use your plan to write about the image.
WRITE: Use your plan to write about the image.
CHECK: After writing, re-read it and...
CHECK: After writing, re-read it and...
Check for capital letters and full stops.
Underline any words you are unsure of and ask a whanau member to help you fix them.
Improve your writing by upgrading words or sentences to make your writing even better than it already is!
SHARE: Take a photo of your work and send it to your teacher, we might add the picture below!
SHARE: Take a photo of your work and send it to your teacher, we might add the picture below!
Student Work
Student Work
Jimmy Watt
Jimmy Watt
Jimmy Watt
Jimmy Watt
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