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EL Education : 6th Grade : Module 3 : Unit 3 : Lesson 5

Collaborative Literary Argument Essay: Analyze a Model and Draft Proof Paragraph 2

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Grade 6_ Module 3_ Unit 3_ Lesson 5

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Lesson Synopsis

1. Opening

A. Engage the Learner - RI.6.8 (5 minutes)

2. Work Time

A. Analyze a Model: Proof Paragraph 2 - RI.6.8, W.6.1b, W.6.1c (20 minutes)

B. Collaborative Writing: Draft Proof Paragraph 2 - W.6.1b, W.6.1c (15 minutes)

3. Closing and Assessment

A. Reflect on Learning - SL.6.1 (5 minutes)

4. Homework

A. Review Independent Reading Journal: Students review their independent reading journal entries in preparation for the Independent Reading Research Share in the next lesson.

Daily Learning Targets

  • I can revise a Proof Paragraph to make it more effective (RI.6.8, W.6.5)

  • I can analyze the structure of Proof Paragraph 2 of the model. (W.6.1b, W.6.1c)

  • I can collaboratively write Proof Paragraph 2 for an essay on whether Cal should leave school to find Pop. (W.6.1b, W.6.1c)

Lesson Prep

  • Review the student tasks and example answers to become familiar with what students will be required to do in the lesson (see Materials list).

  • Prepare copies of handouts for students, including entrance ticket (see Materials list).

  • Post the learning targets and applicable anchor charts (see Materials list).

Lesson Plan

Opening

A. Engage the Learner - RI.6.8 (5 minutes)

  • Repeated routine: Follow the same routine as previous lessons to distribute and review Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 5. Refer to the Entrance Ticket: Unit 3, Lesson 5 (answers for teacher reference) for possible responses.

  • Using a total participation technique, invite students to share their responses to the questions on the entrance ticket. Clarify any misunderstandings and respond to any outstanding questions.

  • Repeated routine: Follow the same routine as with the previous lessons to review learning targets and the purpose of the lesson, reminding students of any learning targets that are similar to or the same as in previous lessons.

Work Time

A. Analyze a Model: Proof Paragraph 2 - RI.6.8, W.6.1b, W.6.1c (20 minutes)

  • Ask students to retrieve their Model Literary Argument Essay.

  • Distribute and display the Analyze Model Proof Paragraph 2 handout. Read the directions aloud and field any questions.

  • Direct students to pair up and complete the items on the Analyze Model Proof Paragraph 2 handout.

  • Using a total participation technique, review the answers. Refer to Analyze Model Proof Paragraph 2 (answers for teacher reference). Clarify any misunderstandings and respond to any outstanding questions.

MEETING STUDENTS' NEEDS 

In Work Time A, after students analyze Proof Paragraph 2 of the Model Literary Argument Essay, invite students to participate in a Mini Language Dive in small groups to analyze a partial quote used as text evidence in the paragraph (W.6.1b). This Mini Language Dive also helps students better understand the function of individual sentences within the larger structure of an argument essay (RI.6.5) and provides an opportunity for students to identify an appropriate shift in pronoun person (L.6.1c).

During the Mini Language Dive, invite students who need lighter support to use a more minimal sentence frame during the Practice section:

Even though ______, ____________ "___________" (____).

Students can insert their completed sentences directly into their Proof Paragraph 2 during Work Time B.

  • Turn and Talk:

"What examples of transition words or phrases appear in this paragraph?" (the second reason, even though, so, also, plus, even if, even)

"What is the purpose of these words and phrases? How would the paragraph be different if they weren't included?" (They show how all the parts of the argument (claim, reason, evidence, and reasoning) go together and connect to create the argument. It would be harder for a reader to understand how all the pieces work together to support the argument. These words and phrases let the reader better understand the writer's thinking and follow her argument.)

"What do you notice about the number of sentences that contain evidence and the number that contain reasoning? Why might this be important?" (There are more sentences that contain reasoning than evidence. This is important because the author should include more of her own original thoughts to explain her thinking rather than relying on the reader to figure out the connection between the evidence and the reason or claim.)

  • Explain that while they are writing the second support paragraph for their collaborative essay, they should also work on ensuring they include transitional words and phrases to better convey their thinking and their argument.

MEETING STUDENTS' NEEDS 

As an extension to the Mini Language Dive of Work Time A, create an activity that helps students who need heavier support better understand how to embed partial quotes into their own writing. Consider providing students with a list of quotes and frames as practice. For example:

1. When one door of happiness closes, another opens." Helen Keller


Sometimes, when I am having a bad day, I try to remember that "_____" (Helen Keller)

2. "I've learned that people will forget what you said, people will forget what you did, but people will never forget how you made them feel." (Maya Angelou)


It is important to be kind to people because they "____" (Maya Angelou).

3. "As much as I loved being back with my father, I was also missing the boys in our Creek gang." (page 314 of Two Roads)


Cal loved being with his father again, but he "_____" (314).

  • Repeated routine: Invite students to reflect on their progress toward the relevant learning targets.

B. Collaborative Writing: Draft Proof Paragraph 2 - W.6.1b, W.6.1c (15 minutes)

  • Move students into writing pairs.

  • Display and invite students to retrieve their Collaborative Literary Argument Writing Plan graphic organizer and their copy of the Argument Writing checklist.

  • Explain that students will continue to work with their writing partner to draft Proof Paragraph 2 of their collaborative literary argument essays. Direct them to ensure they are using transition words to help show the relationships among their reasons, evidence, and reasoning.

  • Students should base their draft on the information they gathered and organized on their Collaborative Literary Argument Evidence note-catcher and Collaborative Literary Argument Writing Plan graphic organizer. Direct students to use the Model Literary Argument Essay, Model Literary Argument Evidence note-catcher, and Model Literary Argument Writing Plan graphic organizer to also help them draft. Point out the correlation between the information in the evidence note-catcher and what appears in the planner for Proof Paragraph 1.

  • Distribute lined paper or devices, and invite writing partners to begin.

  • Circulate and monitor, referencing the following resources as necessary:

    • Collaborative Literary Argument Evidence note-catcher (example for teacher reference)

    • Collaborative Literary Argument Writing Plan graphic organizer (example for teacher reference)

    • Collaborative Literary Argument Writing: Annotated (for teacher reference)

  • With 2 minutes remaining, refocus students and allow time for them to log off devices or put away materials.

  • Invite students to reflect on their progress toward the relevant learning target, using a checking for understanding technique. Scan student responses, and make a note of students who might need support. Check in with them moving forward.

Closing

A. Reflect on Learning - SL.6.1 (5 minutes)

  • Move students into groups of three or four, and have them reread each of the Habits of Character anchor charts.

  • Invite students to reflect on how habits of character were demonstrated in this lesson, discussing what went well and what could be improved next time.

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