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These lessons are designed to build on the learning from the previous sequence. Students draw on their understanding of perspective as they expand their planning notes to compose their own short piece of historical fiction. They apply their knowledge of the context of their chosen poem and understanding of language features as they draft, refine and edit their composition. This sequence concludes with students being supported to write a reflection statement on their piece.
As a reminder, the four poems students have studied are:
‘The Charge of the Light Brigade’ by Alfred, Lord Tennyson
‘Dulce et Decorum Est’ by Wilfred Owen
‘Casabianca’ by Felicia Dorothea Hemans
‘The Black Rat’ by Iris Clayton
During these lessons, students will:
draft their piece of historical fiction
annotate their draft
edit their draft
write a refined copy of their piece
reflect on their learning.
These lessons address the following outcomes:
A student:
EN5-5C thinks imaginatively, creatively, interpretively and critically about information and increasingly complex ideas and arguments to respond to and compose texts in a range of contexts
S505RC1: respond to and compose a range of sustained imaginative, informative and persuasive texts which are increasingly demanding in terms of ideas, arguments and linguistic, structural, cognitive, emotional and moral complexity
S505RC6: understand and explain the ways in which composers transform ideas and experience into and within texts, including consideration of their insight, imaginative powers and ingenuity
S506RC1: create imaginative texts that make relevant thematic and intertextual connections with other texts.
EN5-6C: investigates the relationships between and among texts
S506UA5: investigate and describe the recurring features of particular genres, eg westerns or science fiction, focusing on their storylines, iconography, value systems and techniques
S506UA8: compare and contrast the use of cohesive devices in texts, focusing on how they serve to signpost ideas, to make connections and to build semantic associations between ideas.
The coding for this content point comes from the English Textual Concepts and Learning Processes resources for Stage 5 English – Stage 5.
Students experiment with writing within the historical fiction genre. They work toward completing a draft of their historical fiction piece. They refer to the plan made in lesson 3 to guide their writing and are reminded to revisit the sample explored in the previous sequence for further support.
Learning intentions
Students will:
draft their piece of historical fiction.
Students are supported to refine their draft. They must follow a series of scaffolded steps that helps them annotate their work. The steps in this annotation process ask students to focus on their use of the elements of historical fiction, language forms and features and the piece as a whole.
Learning intentions
Students will:
annotate their draft
edit their draft.
Students use their annotations from lesson 5 to produce a refine version of their piece. After reading through a sample reflection statement, students use a series of sentence starters to guide the development of their own reflection, on both their piece and learning over this sequence.
Learning intentions
Students will:
write a refined copy of their piece
reflect on their learning.
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