In this lesson you will continue your annotation of the poem ‘Casabianca’ by Felicia Dorothea Hemans.
At the end of the annotation task you will have the opportunity to explain your perspective of the content of the poem.
You will also reflect on the similarities and differences between your perspective and the poet’s perspective.
During this lesson you will:
explain how these language features affect the meaning of the poem
explore how language form and features can be used to communicate perspectives of war.
You are going to continue annotating the poem using a guided structure. This process will help you to identify the form, features and structure of the text.
Complete the annotation of the remaining stanzas using the downloadable student booklet.
Or
Complete the activities using the questions and the interactives for the remaining stanzas.
The flames rolled on – he would not go,
Without his father’s word;
That father, faint in death below,
His voice no longer heard.
Consider the use of punctuation in this stanza, what is the effect of the dash?
Identify the alliteration and explain what it tells the reader about the father?
He called aloud – ‘Say, father, say
If yet my task is done?’
He knew not that the chieftain lay
Unconscious of his son.
The boy calls out to his father, what is the boy asking his father and what is the effect of this direct speech for you as a reader?
Why does the poet refer to his father as ‘the chieftain’?
How does line 16 ease the tension in the poem?
‘Speak, father!’ once again he cried,
‘If I may yet be gone!’
– And but the booming shots replied,
And fast the flames rolled on.
Again the boy calls out to his father, what is the effect of this direct speech?
Identify the alliteration using the interactive below. Think back to the rhythm you identified earlier that occurs in each stanza, how does this work together with the alliteration here?
Explain the effect of the personification of the ‘booming shots’?
Upon his brow he felt their breath
And in his waving hair;
And look’d from that lone post of death,
In still yet brave despair.
Identify the personification in the first line of the stanza using the interactive.
Explain how this builds tension.
Identify the metaphor in the thirds line, what does the reader now realise?
‘Brave despair’ is an example of what language feature? Explain what this tells us about the boy?
And shouted but once more aloud,
‘My father! must I stay?’
While o’er him fast, through sail and shroud,
The wreathing fires made way.
The boy calls out again, why does it seem more desperate this time?
Think about the word choice of ‘shroud’ in line 27 in this context. If a shroud is both
a thing that envelops and obscures something
a length of cloth or an enveloping garment in which a dead person is wrapped for burial.
Explain what you think the poet is referring to here and what it adds to your understanding.
Consider the word choice of ‘wreathing’ in this context.
If a wreath is a garland/circle of flowers often presented at funerals or memorials, explain how the fire might be described here as wreathing?
They wrapped the ship in splendour wild,
They caught the flag on high,
And streamed above the gallant child,
Like banners in the sky.
Describe the ‘they’ in this stanza. Why has it been personified in this way?
Identify the simile, explain what is being compared and how this adds to the tension.
There came a burst of thunder sound –
The boy – oh! where was he?
Ask of the winds that far around
With fragments strewed the sea!
At this point in the poem all hope seems lost, how does the onomatopoeia add to this feeling?
Here the wind is personified, it is exclaiming and asking a question. Explain what the reader now understands.
Consider the word ‘strewed’ in this context. What has been strewed and by whom?
With mast, and helm, and pennon fair,
That well had borne their part,
But the noblest thing which perished there,
Was that young faithful heart.
In line 37, the parts of the ship are used to represent something ‘that well had borne their part’, what do you think this means?
What is the effect of the emotive language ‘noblest thing’ and ‘young faithful’ when describing the boy?
Use the sentence starters to track your reaction to the description of the boy throughout the poem by describing your attitude toward the boy for each of the following sections in the poem.
Activity 2 – Understanding perspective
Duration: 1:09
Stanza 2
…As born to rule the storm;
A creature of heroic blood’
My perspective (or opinion) of the boy at the start of the poem is…
Stanza 7
…And shouted but once more aloud,
“My father! Must I stay?”
My perspective (or opinion) of the boy in the middle of the poem is…
Stanza 9
…The boy – oh! Where was he?
Ask of the winds that far around
With fragments strewed the sea!”
My perspective (or opinion) of the boy at the end of the poem is…
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What perspectives on war are conveyed in the poem?
Support your answer with direct reference to the text.
Explain your personal response to the poem, explain what you like about the poem and what you found interesting.
What did you learn about this period in history?
How is this representation of war similar or different to your own perspective?
Over this lesson sequence, you have thought deeply about the language forms and features of Felicia Dorothea Hemans’ poem ‘Casabianca’. You have extended your understanding of how language can be used to communicate perspectives of war through poetry.
You have also considered how our own experiences shape our perspectives. Exploring texts that challenge our thinking and lead us to explore different perspectives gives us a greater appreciation and understanding of our world.
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