The first page is the first impression. Show your teacher that you understand the importance of paying attention to detail. Look at the first page below. Don't be this guy:
The "too much space" problem is a MS Word problem. To fix it, you have to click on the bottom corner of "paragraph" in the menu and then check "do not add space between paragraphs."
Amongst Portray
Basically Obviously
Hence This quote
Heretofore Thus
I, me, my, you, your Thusly
In conclusion
Literally
Seriously. Don't use any of these words in an essay.
Novel and play titles are italicized or underlined. Both are grammatically correct. The MLA messed things up because they (now) require all titles to be italicized.
A poem like "The Raven" or an article title like "World Series Predictions" is placed in quotation marks. The same is true of a song title like "American Idiot."
In America, when we end a sentence with a quotation like above, the period goes inside the quotation marks: "American Idiot." The same is true when it's a comma (goes inside). Putting the period outside is a British thing. You can verify that here if you have doubts.
As usual, the MLA makes this more confusing. For more on what to do with punctuation when a citation is involved, click here.
When a full sentence introduces a quotation, use a colon (:) before the quoting the passage--not a period. A period says "i'm done" to the reader, and a colon says "I'm done, but wait, there's more."
Kumalo’s personal losses are great but his tribal losses are worse: “When the Reverend Stephen Kumalo travels from his home in Ndotsheni to the capital of Johannesburg, he encounters a disintegration of tribal customs and family life” (“Africa Alive”).
For more info on punctuating quotations in MLA format, go here to the OWL webpage.
When there is an author, citing web sources is simple--just put the author's name in the citation: (Carillo). When there is not an author, you put a few key words from the title of your source, and you put them in quotation marks inside the parentheses: ("Africa Alive").