TPOL

I have improved my ability to design and/or build a quality final product.

  • I show that I have improved my ability to design and/or build a quality final product, by asking for more critique than I used to, and by making many drafts.

Evidence:

My short film "Darkness Inside".

  • At first we thought that we were finished with our second draft of our movie, but when we showed it to Mr. Joshua, he asked "Why did you try to open only that door but not the other one?" and gave us many more critique, we realized that there were many things that needed fixing, so we re filmed ¬†and at then edited it all over again.

Darkness Inside 1


Darkness Inside 2.mp4


  • Andre should struggle more when Alondra kills him" -Mr. Joshua

My Movie 11.mp4

Darkness Inside 4


I want to improve my ability to master a difficult skill which is not to be so stressed.


"Vere I think you should work on your stress" -Andre
I think I should work on this skill, because in the past when I was working with a group, I used to stress too much, which would make my group members stress too.


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