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Dwarves Etc.

Dwarves Etc. Intro

Dwarves Etc. is a fantasy/allegory in the style of The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe, about some children who visit a camp and find far more than they expected. It is still a work in progress, so feel free to comment on the blog about any spelling errors, ask any questions, etc. 

Also available are the first few chapters, read by the author, on YouTube.

Introduction


Some stories are written with a particular audience in mind. You have something you want to say to your kids, your church, or your friends. And so when you write the story you focus directly on them, and 'tell' them the story.


Other stories exist as a story, long before you have any audience to tell them too. You wake up at two in the morning, grab your notebook, and quickly write down the idea that has just occurred to you... that bit of plot from which the whole book will spring, or the new world. Then, over the next few days, weeks, months or even years, the story grows a life of its own.


Such a story is Dwarves etc. It began on a drowsy afternoon at work. It began with a 'what if'... and grew to a story with characters that have taken on a life of their own. Each day I would bring home a chapter and read it to my family... and woe to the day where I failed in my alloted quota.


As a result, there is no specific audience. It is a book about children, and my children love it. But it includes themes and ideas that pass over their heads... often themes not clearly spelled out, where even adults have to reread the passage several times to have a glimpse at what the story hides within itself.


It is an overtly religious story; a coming of age/transformation story in the style of 'Sugar Creek Gang'. It is an overtly allegorical story, reminiscent of 'The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe' or 'Pilgrims Progress'. And it is an unfinished story, as all stories outside of fairy tales must be. There is no 'and they lived happily after', but instead a mere, 'and next...' which trails off into, well, into the next books :)


I hope that you enjoy reading 'Dwarves Etc.' half as much as I enjoyed writing it. And may you all, having sworn eternal service to The King, walk in His path.


In Him,

Vaughn Ohlman 


 
Chapters:

  1. Prologue
  2. Chapter 1: I found a camp.
  3. Chapter 2: Third party
  4. Chapter 3: On the road.
  5. Chapter 4: First meeting.
  6. Chapter 5: A good storyteller.
  7. Chapter 6: May I swim sir?
  8. Chapter 7: So you've been here before?
  9. Chapter 8: What church do you go to?
  10. Chapter 9: My not-so-secret sorrow.
  11. Chapter 10: Permission you must always take.
  12. Chapter 11: Your first verse?
  13. Chapter 12: What's a quiet time?
  14. Chapter 13: Advanced Archery?
  15. Chapter 14: A manly activity.
  16. Chapter 15: A nights swim.
  17. Chapter 16: A meeting with a dragon.
  18. Chapter 17: Examining your belly button.
  19. Chapter 18: What a nightmare.
  20. Chapter 19: Not shooting well and not listening.
  21. Chapter 20: We'll meet down by the canoes.
  22. Chapter 21: Blind Shooting.
  23. Chapter 22: Follow the path
  24. Chapter 23: Your path lies here
  25. Chapter 24: A snake, a monkey, and an old friend.
  26. Chapter 25: More radical than being disemboweled?
  27. Chapter 26: Don't ask.
  28. Chapter 27: Now is the time.
  29. Chapter 28: Hey buddy.
  30. Chapter 29: Let's get permission.
  31. Chapter 30: Wow.
  32. Chapter 31: That's my dragon.
  33. Chapter 32: Do I have to wear these rags?
  34. Chapter 33: I am glad you think so.
  35. Chapter 34: And how is my escapee doing?
  36. Chapter 35: They came in wet suits.
  37. Chapter 36: Paean of Praise
  38. Chapter 37: What will we tell...?
Author: Vaughn Ohlman
Posted: March 2009
Status: Unfinished, needs editing and some extra content
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