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Hull is where shadow fjord sitting ok? i need to add the river delta, but is it ok? the only entrance is by boat or the mountain descending...

Shadow Fjord will be good to place with the river delta. The river should cut through a large canyon with jagged cliffs. At its delta, the canyon will open up to cliff walls right along the edge of the ocean, with Shadow Fjord hidden at the base of one of these cliffs.

Also, be sure to make Bryn and Berit part of the same mountain ranges. I'll have to get you a copy of the first chapter once it's done since there are a few more landmarks to add, and the story tells about Jaspers initial journey. There will be an open plains area midway between Halvera. The Olmer family farm should be in that region somewhere. Jarr should be more on the other side of the map, probably northeast, depending on how the story evolves.

What's Svinkati?

svinkati was in the locations page as plains area... thanks for info... too much brown... need to change ground to shades of green