Critique #1: (Get to Know Your DNA) I really like your background image, but I think it would be better if it were larger, or did not tile awkwardly as it does right now. Also, I think the text would look better if you restricted the width of the content pane. I think the concept of trying to give an introduction to genetics, and using that to inspire readers to try out the various products out there is a great one. However, one question I had after reading your site was, what is the difference between the two products that you advertise? I would be interested in what brought about the price difference. On your page on the "Potential for the Future", I think it would benefit from a reduction in paragraph length and the addition of subheadings. Overall, great job so far. I'm especially looking forward to your Genetics 101 video. Critique #2: (A Runner's Ally) I like your concept of a site oriented for a wide audience of beginners and professionals. I think there definitely is a lack of online resources especially in terms of running techniques, so I am looking forward to your site. One thing I noticed on your front page is that the subheading "Ask yourself a few questions:" was the same size as "Welcome" message. It might look better if you reduced the size of your subheadings, so it's easy to tell what the big messages are. I especially liked your summaries under each of the sections. I think they really help capture attention. However, it might help if you reduce the width of your content, since otherwise your lines will be very long. |