-THOK-

The story so far........

   Thok is the son of the present Death God, Yama. To become the next Death God, he must win the throne by battling his brother Lok. After both of them were born, they were sent to the Village Of Fire for relocation.

    Yama was afraid of how weak they were beacause he wanted stronger children to inherit the Death God's power, so his servant, Oritega, was sent to watch over them and train them to be Fire Ninjas. After he trained them well, he sent them to the Ninja Stronghold for missions. In the stronghold, Thok makes a new friend named Segan. Segan is a Fire Ninja aslo and has a bit of special techniques that he lets Thok borrow.

   Lok also made a new friend, named Jet. Jet is a Wind Ninja, and is very, very, fast. He uses this advantage, and circles his enemy like a tornado. He then takes a kunai knife and slashes his enemy 200 times. It is called "Tornado Combo: The 200 Knifes Attack". He teaches this to Lok, but Lok uses it his own way. He trains to do the tornado part well, but instead of a kunai knife 200 combo, he consentrates to make a layer of fire on his knuckles and make fire fists, and instead of 200 attacks, he does 300. He calls it, "300 fists".

    By then, Yama has been examinating their process and thought that Lok has been improoving more than Thok. He teleported to Lok's training grounds. He met with Lok there. Lok was confused and was ready to fight Yama because he looked menacingly. Lok did not know that Yama was his real father, and a Death God. Thok and Lok both thought that Oritega was their father because of the way that Oritega watched over them. Yama was quick to tell Lok that he was his father and that he was a God. But just when Yama was going to give his son The Death God's Eye ( A new Power ) ,  Thok came out from the forest behind them, with a curious object in his hands. He was weilding Oritega's buster sword.

    Yama And Thok faught and Yama quickly found out that BOTH of his sons have succeded in getting stronger. Lok stopped his brother from wounding their father using the "300 Fists" technique. After Yama explained, Thok understood. The two brothers were granted the Death God's Eye. It made the person who had Death God's eye, 100x stronger, and provided a new technique called the " Fire Spider Strangle" that Thok unlishes on his first ever mission.

But this was only the story so far.....  

        -SR

 Sebastian Rodriguez Maisonet

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