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Round 4

Held: Apr 9-15, 2009
Participants: Charles Fry, Noah Gibbs, Tom Lokovic, Rob Malkin, Charles Schafer, Dom Widdows
Challenge:

Write a poem in 20 lines or less that satisfies AT LEAST THREE of the following four constraints:
  1.  "think globally, act locally"
  2. "doing one thing to distract attention from another"
  3. "So I was the lucky one."
  4. Ascribe deep meaning to an obvious coincidence.
Results:



what a night.
was I lucky, or just dreaming?
distracted by the obvious.
global coincidence.
local meaning.

-- Charles Fry



Four One Nine, A Poem

You must remember my last speech
with you last May -- it cost a lot.
I've used most of your cash to teach
good English to the Hottentot.

Creative Writing they love best
and mysteries and fantasies.
Their ministers and princes wrest
great fortunes to send overseas.

For me to grade would be unfair.
My students email to your dad.
What luck!  He's unbiased as the air.
Their tales distract 'til he's been had.

Back to the point, I wrote to say
I mailed your check just yesterday.

--Noah Gibbs (guest contributor)



Little Haiti

Look around--it's paradise!
Exotic spices ride the breeze
through tropic sun and sidewalk
vendors haggling in foreignese.

I'm visiting a far-off land
today.  It cost a dollar eighty
on the bus through Chinatown,
past Wal-Mart here to Little Haiti.

A portly tattoo-covered lady
fortune teller draws my eyes
with signs: "I Do Do Voodoo" and
"Large Medium, Small Price."

She scatters shells, a chicken foot,
some roots and seeds, then draws a breath--
"Your future holds adventure! Travel!
Acid reflux! Love, and death!"

Amazed, I ask for more.  She looks
around, alert, and draws me in.
"The key to growing wealth is--
do you have a lucky bank card PIN?"

"I hope so--is mine lucky? I
use Fifty-Seven-Eighty-Two."
She frowns.  "It's not too bad, but you
should have me charm your bank card too."

She's been away a while--it must
be a complicated spell.
But when she brings it back,
my luck is changing, baby.  I can tell.

-- Tom Lokovic



All the world's a stage, they say, but this one's mine.
Stumbling toward the show, reluctant, purposeful,
counting the cracks so I can't see it coming,
I'm just a speck in the crowd.
Crossroads approaches and I don't break stride;
the light changes behind me.
They're all stuck watching traffic
and I'm on the other side.
I guess I was the lucky one.
But that's nonsense; I've seen hints of the Plan.

-- Rob Malkin



Tokyo to New York
Guess you called it in the air
But first the small talk

-- Charles Schafer


Resolution

He raced the passageway beyond the bolted door
As the past in furies strove to catch
The night shadow. Keeping to the last
Their record of conviction, the company of the chosen
Beholding a miracle signed in destiny
Fallen one by one as heroes.

Now surely, he the final blow to strike,
Rushed, darting left and right
Flitting in the shadows of the fears of the faithless

Bold, charges forth, spills and mingles
The blood of the quest completed.
More he senses like a hare in flight.

Later, legs bloody but arms still strong
He throws, the oldest trick in the book
Stone clatter rattles the stable's sleep
Guards scramble to thwart his imagined flight.
He breathes, whiles on, wanders free
Through the shadows in the scaffold.

-- Dom Widdows