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Round 3

Held: Mar 12-18, 2009
Participants: Charles Fry, Tom Lokovic, Rob Malkin, Charles Schafer, Dominic Widdows
Challenge:

Write a poem in 20 lines or less that satisfies AT LEAST THREE of the following four constraints:
  1.  Make the voice of the poem contradict itself at some point.
  2.  Interpret literally something which is widely understood to be figurative.
  3.  Refer to a specific body of water.
  4.  Refer to "evergreen or deciduous" in some way.
Results:



Why did they need both the Atlantic and the Pacific?
Wasn't one great body of water sufficient?

For one body once it was.
Gathered together unto one place.
When the dry land appeared.

And on the land was the tree of life.
Neither evergreen nor deciduous.
Simply eternal.

But too much for them, apparently.
For they were driven from it.
Cast into mortality.

Separated by the flaming sword.
And two insurmountable oceans.

  by Charles Fry



Ganges
   by Tom Lokovic

You'll see me tomorrow
but it won't be me.
In the Ganges,
today's water flows
through yesterday's channel
and carves the river to be.

I'll see you tomorrow
but it won't be you.
The cork tree in spring
casts new shadows,
reflects without being
the tree that you knew.

Every moment's a goodbye
which the foolish mourn
and desperately deny.
"Yesterday is here,
It will always be,"
they insist, and close their eyes.

But this whole valley is deciduous.
To see evergreens you've got to climb.



Paper or plastic?  Plainly he's
angry, arms akimbo, glasses askew, awaiting my
decision.  Deciduous or evergreen, don't doubt the distinction's
vital.  Mostly vertical, verdant year-round?
Best bags are thus begun.  Bagger baiting's a
guilty pleasure, giving grocers grief a game, but this guy's
face falls on the floor.
Tears tell a terrible tale; this
man's been mocked too much.  The Mon's no match for the
surge I see streaming from soggy sockets.
Shouldn't have shocked him, a shameful
act.  Atone!  Atone!  Assist this
broken bagger, bawling, beside himself with
anguish, afflicted with agony by
my malice.  Manager moseys over to
berate me.  You broke it, you bought it, buster!
He hands me both halves of the
bifurcated bagger.  Bewildered at our break
We three walk out weeping, wondering at the
karma that created this conclusion.

  by Rob Malkin


ten foot wide
  by Charles Schafer

I was blinded by the beauty of Lake Pymatuming.
No. That is jive.
Would you upend this life in Hollidaysburg for the right prize?
Let's roll in Oil City, Nanty-glo, Scalp Level.
Travel broadens the mind.
Let's day trip until our heads are ten foot wide.



Oak and Pine
  by Dominic Widdows

Day and night, land and sea
Hard and soft, now before time
From dripping oaken islands
In the sea the distant roamed
To a peaceful ocean coast of dunes
And pine trees growing from the sands.

Head in cloud, feet in beach,
They sing to me and each to each
I am here, and far away
Apart and whole



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