what some folks who've given it a shot have to say...

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"I finished your essay over the weekend. I consider it a beautiful expression of personal belief. There's many paths in there where I can follow you, and nod my head as I walk along. There's some places where I'm not entirely sure that I still see the road, or want to tread. But it's mostly beyond where I could sensibly say much more."

 

  "needlessly verbose"

 

"First and foremost, your manifesto is at times insufferable, but at others it reminds me of why language has been created in the first place. Why would one use language to philosophize and then claim that there are levels of usage that are acceptable or unacceptable. The text itself is vibrant with an energy that I have only felt when reading Nietzsche, an exuberance that takes one above the text, per se and produces laughter."

"totally out of control"

"thoroughly enjoyable read"

"Some of it was remarkably insightful"

"I got to page 6 without reading anything substantial.  I suggest that the original poster works on condensing the work down so that each sentence is highly relevant rather than just being 'fluff'. "

"The manifesto is original and important"

"Beware! This is a download of some sort. I'm sure I dont want to know what you're peddling"

"hahaha - the words flow like poetry"