FAW North Shore Regional

 
2009  Prose (A) Results - "Super Short Story Competition"
 

JUDGES’ REPORT & RESULTS

 

CATEGORY A :   SHORT STORY

 

  

There were 127 stories entered in this section, providing the judges with a rich feast of reading and a tough task to select a short list of only eight.  Each story was read at least twice, then a process of elimination began, in which the judges asked these questions:

 

1. Is the title clever and intriguing, relating to the tale, or boring and banal?

2. Are the characters clearly drawn and believable, is their dialogue realistic?

3. Does the story have a point and is the pace maintained throughout, with no drop-off?

4. Are the basic writing skills of spelling, punctuation and grammar adhered to?

5. Is the opening arresting, with no ‘set-up’ details wasting word allotment?

6. Does the ending satisfy, with no attempt to ‘preach’ to the reader?

7. Is there strong imagery, with skilful use of language, or are there too many clichés?

8. Does the story have a powerful impact, leaving the reader with a lasting impression?

 

The winning eight all stood out from the rest by virtue of the above points, the judges feeling privileged to have read them.  While there were many good stories among the remainder, a careful edit by the authors, asking themselves the above questions, should produce stories which would be highly competitive in another competition.  Congratulations to all who entered for attempting the daunting and difficult task of writing that most taxing of prose, the super-short story.

 

 

Results

 

1st    -   Hot Dogs From Heaven   by Maggie Veness

 

2nd   -   Weeping For Jed   by Vicky Daddo

 

 

Highly Commended:   An Atrocious Art              by   Jasmine Logue

                                  Uncle Gav’s Pav             by   Peta West

                                  My Hands                         by   Jacqueline Winn

 

Commended:               Maria                               by   Richard Brookton

                                   The Least He Could Do   by   Alistair Sutton

                                   Summer                            by   Maggie Szabo

 

Worthy of Mention:     Right As Rain                    by   Susan McCreery

                                   The Overlander                by   John McMullan