Brother Wren

So the flowers grow

Flowers

Kind of an anomaly. My songs aren't usually personal-sounding. But, it seemed to fit the music. However, I REALLY want feedback on how the lyrics sound. When I listen to it, it sounds like a part of me is expressing something while the rest is blocked out. It's a pretty song, but I want to make sure it's the sort of thing I'd actually like to be proud of.

you provided a story or two
you filled in some gaps and said
what i never knew

do you think that you're so kind
for a moment of truth
it's not what i had in mind

time has passed spring and summer are gone
the wind has carried me away
and thus will the flowers grow


do you remember the time
the day that you fell
the day that your conscience ran dry

you came to me asked me what to do
full of hope 
take my silence as your reply

time has passed spring and summer are gone
the wind has carried me away
and thus will the flowers grow

oh oh
oh oh
oh oh
this is not the time to be the way that you remember me
not today

<solo>

please don't ask my mind
leave me in peace
i'm too far gone to be any good

when you become a child
again
then you'll find where we used to be friends

oh oh
oh oh
oh oh
this is not the time to be the way that you remember me
not today


Chords:

D9 Daug (Bb / D / F#) Em F#m
D9 Daug Em F#m

<bridge> D E G F#

<chorus> 
A E Ab Ab
A E Ab Ab
A E G D
Am Am C C