this comic is my very first comic and is good i think you may have your own opinions i wont hold them back. and the pic at the top is Crank

Crank: man im bored as heck

*gets his bass out and playes for money on the street*
T.V.: weather today is-
*introuption*
???: Crank you know who this is and i know you can hear me come to the western side of town right now!
Crank: darn i was hoping 4 a nice day
Crank: well i beter get the squad togeather
*runs to get the squad*
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???: well do u think he will buy it?
Giz: he's not that stupid
???: fool i know him rember i grew up with him he'll fall for it.
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*at the center of the under ground squad quarters*
Axe:Crank better have a good reason for getting me involved.
Megan: im sure he dose but if he dosnt i am gonna kill him.
Crank: ploting my death are we?
Axe: mabye what did u bring us here for any way?
Crank: i'll tell you when the others get here.

Axe: when the hell is that gonna be?
Crank: i have no idea.
Megan:dont we have a new guy?
Crank: DJ will be here soon as i get the demention gate working.
Meagan: not him i ment the other one.
Jason: im here stop your complaning

Crank: good now that just leaves the other 5
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???: brother how long do you intend trying to stop me?
Giz: as long as it takes.
???: fine than i shall be rid of you.
( ties giz to a chair and flings him out the window into the squads hide out )
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Crank: What the heck?
Giz: oww some one want to pull me out of the table?
Jason: stay there you look nice.
Megan: (glares) i'll help you.
( pulles giz out of the table )
Crank: would you like to sub for a squad member ... who ever you are?
Giz my name is Giz and what dose this "squad" do?
Crank: good question i'll explain later
( the demention gate starts up and DJ pops out)
DJ: why was i pulled out of my house?
Crank: because were moving aginst her
DJ: aginst who?
Crank: Sandra.
Giz: oh my god you guy are after my sister!

Crank: shes your sister!
Giz: yeah.
Crank, megan, Axe: no way!
Jason: that was weird.
Crank: weirdness aside your with our enemy.
Giz; no im aginst her i swear.
(Meagan pulles out her bible)
Megan: swear it on this.
Giz: whats that?
(every one besides Giz is in shock)
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Sandra: crap i shoulnd have done that the cops will be here soon.
Sandra: oh well i guess i'll just have to kill them.
Sandra: so sad i have to waist my time on them.
Sandra: i dont need care about any thing untill i get those chargers
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(the demention gate opens and a strange headgehog pokes his head out)
???: hey DJ are you here?
DJ: Rafiell?
Rafiell: yeah its me.
Crank: god damnit what is with the new people.
Rafiell: chill dude.
Axe: he's right if we go after her we'll need all the people we can get.
Crank: i know that it's just im used to the old team. where are they anyway?
(a screen opens up in the wall)
relay man: sorry Crank the old team can't make it there on a diffrent mission you'll just have to make due.
Crank: damnit... well tell me about your selves and what you can do.
Rafiell: im DJ's brother and i controle fire.
DJ: im DJ and i controle fire to.
Crank; and Giz what can you do?
Giz: i dont want to tel you yet.
Crank: well than i guess well just have to find out.
Jason; im jason and i am a ghost/shadow demon.
Crank: ok well i know the rest of you guys so lets go.

(runing to west of town)
Crank: so Megan hows the kid
Megan: anoying. but she's learning to control her earth abilty
Crank: good to hear
Jason: Crank whats your power?
Creank: oh me. well i also have power over earth and i am not bad with a spike chain
Jason: oh.
DJ: ???
(wispers to Crank)
DJ: did you hit that?
Crank: none of your bissness
Rafiell: touchy touchy are we?
Axe: shut up you two we here.
(Crank tells the rest of the squad to hide close by)
(they hide)
Sandra: ahh good you made it Crank.
Sandra: so nice to see you again
Sandra: i trust u know what i have?
Crank: no u didn't mention it .
???: CRANK HELP ME!!!
Crank: you didn't.
Sandra: i did
Crank: DARN YOU!!!
Sandra: i'll give her back if u bring me my wepons back.
(Crank thinks about it)
Crank: i lost 1 to the humans can i just give you the other 1
Crank: please
Sandra: how u maneged that i'll never know but seeing as i am a kind person i'll alow it
Crank: thank you

sandra: i'll do it on one term.
Crank: what is it?
Sandra: you get the other one back
Crank: oh dear god thats nearly immpossable
Sandra: do it or i kill her
Sandra: and tell the people hiding i can see them
every one but sandra: oops
Crank: very well sandra,
(meagan drops out form her hiding place with a small rainbow orb)
Crank: go ahead megan
(meagan gives Sandra the orb and sandra flys away)
???: get me off this thing half breed
Crank: shut it
???: ok
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???: were back
???: huh theres no one here
(the screen opens again)
relay man: they all went on a mission
???:who's they?
relay man: the replacement squad
???: darn it crank we have what you need
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Giz: you guys are in way to deep
???: realy ya think
Giz and who are you to talk to me?
Brittany: im Brittany
Giz: great now this party has another person
Axe: yeah we do.
DJ: nice to meet you.
Brittany: thanks.
Brittany: and who are the new people ?
Crank: i'll tell you later
Brittany: well Crank you little half breed you how did you screw this up now?
Crank: you heard how
Megan: so where are we headed?
Crank: can elana cause a small quake yet?
megan: no
Crank: well than we'll need to wait around 4 a while than.

this is all there is for now. shortly ( i hope ) there will be more