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Planning to Write an Essay, Speech or Thesis

 
 
Well, that is an interesting title isn't it?  What do I mean by "Bones"  Let me explain.
 
Everything you write, whether it be a Memo, or a letter, a fax, an email, a speech, a Thesis, a business report, an essay or a novel has 3 basic sections that are the same.  These are
  1. The Introduction
  2. The Body - and -
  3. The Conclusion
The body of your speech or letter, is that part where you actually say what you want to say.
 
Writing an Introduction and a Conclusion to any Speech, Report, Thesis or letter is relatively easy, because you don't do it until you have already finished writing the Body of your speech. 
 
Once you have written that, it is just a matter of saying: "Today I want to talk about this" in the introduction - and saying "This is what I talked about" in the conclusion.  The hard part is the Body of your Speech or other writing.
 
The body of a speech is like your own body.  The Body, or 'your flesh' - is what everyone sees and hears in your speech or letter, but underneath it there are a whole lot of bones that support the 'Flesh'. Without those supporting bones, your body will fall down.  The same goes for any professional writing or presentation.
 
The Bones of a Speech or other written presentation, is the outline that results when you use a professional formula to construct your written masterpiece.  The bones of the speech derives from your ability to apply word association to your topic.
 
In the Lesson at www.kingscalendar.com entitled: Writing Memos, Essays etc. there is a photograph which shows you one way to "Draw" the bones or outline of a speech or essay.
That photograph appears on the right side of this page.
 
The Topic for which we are providing an outline is: Toilets. All we do is 'word associate' and come up with Ideas.  These are the ideas I came up with.
 
 
TOPIC -Toilets
  • 1. Everyone uses toilets
  • 2. There are Private & Public Toilets
  • 3. There are Modern & Traditional toilets
  • 4. Toilets are Full of Germs & Sickness
  • 5. We Must Wash hands after going to toilets
  • 6. We Must look after our health
  • 7. China has many 'open toilets' (no water flushing)
  • 8. Tourists want clean hygienic toilets during Olympic Games
  • 9. They built 400 new public toilets in Beijing for the Olympic Games.
Each of these ideas must then be put into some type of category.  In an essay these categories would be called 'paragraphs'.  In a Novel they would be called 'Chapters'.

Categories
  • a. Daily Living
  • b. Hygiene
  • c. China
One you have collected your ideas and categorized them, you can begin writing the body of the work.  To do that, you need to use a variety of Simple Sentences, Compound Sentences, Complex Sentences and Compound-Complex sentences.
 
We looked at Compound-Complex sentences last lesson:
 
 
 
 
 
 

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The Introduction: [P.144]

The introduction tells people quickly and briefly, what the story or speech is about. It should - Attract people's attention & State the main idea/s.
 
Depending on the length and breadth of the work, it might take anything from one sentence to several paragraphs.
 

It may just be some general comments to lead into the body of the work; some facts or information or background to the story itself.

It may contain some type of thesis statement (depending on length, breadth and seriousness of the topic).

Varieties of Introduction: [P.145]

An Anecdote
Images or examples
Quotations
Ask Questions
Refutation of common ideas
Show a new perspective


Concluding Paragraph: [P.215]

A good conclusion should make a final lasting impression on the reader. It may summarize what we have said in the body. (We should never introduce new points in the conclusion)

A formal conclusion is not always necessary - it depends on what and how we write.  Formal Conclusion might involve:

A Restatement of the Thesis
A Solution to the Problem
An anecdote related to the Thesis
A quotation related to the Thesis
Some prediction
A call for action
A summary of the main points.

Page numbers cited are those in:
 
College English Composition: Expressing an Idea : 2002
 
大学英文写作 第一册
编委: 丁言仁  刘海平  王守仁
编者:  赵文书  康文凯
南京大学出版社
 
 

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Water Gate Tower in Suzhou