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Examples of Good Introductions
 
 
Visitors please note:   These are examples of the final result of students doing a 'Grammar Exercise' in Compound-Complex sentences, using an Introduction format.
 
 

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Class 07-3
 
I'm Sun Ling, I'm 21 years old, and I come from Suzhou where I live with my parents, and I am the only child in my family.
 
After I graduated from Zhengze Middle School last year, I came to Yancheng Teachers University for further study, and now I'm living with my friends in the dormitory.
 
Since English is a world language and it is very important, I chose it as my major.
 
I hope to be a teacher in my hometown in the future, because I think teaching English is very interesting though sometimes it may be very tiring.
 
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Class 07-3
 
I'm Tan Chengying, a 21 year old girl from Jiangyin, and there are 3 people in my family; my father, my mother and I.
 
In 2007 after graduating from Nanjing Middle School in Jiangsu Province, I came to Yancheng Teachers College to learn English as my major because I want to have a good knowledge of English so that I can speak frequently with foreigners.
 
Currently I'm a sophomore living in the school dormitory with my classmates and I like living there.
 
In the future I want to be an English teacher in my hometown and contribute to the Chinese Education. 
 
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Class 07-3

I am Jin Xiaoya, a 21 year old girl, and the only child in a three person family from Suzhou
 

In 2007 after graduation from Suzhou No. 10 Middle School, I came to Yancheng Teachers University because in the future, I want to be a well educated teacher in my hometown.

I chose English as my major, not only because I want  to be a good English Speaker, but also because I am interested in it.

Currently I am a sophomore living in the dormitory with 5 other girls and we all enjoy living there.
 
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Altering your Introduction to suit the occasion.
 
Once you have your Introduction organized, you can easily rearrange it to suit different situations.  You will find some examples of this in my article Does it take skill to introduce yourself?
 
 
 

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Answer the Questions in 4-5 Compound-Complex Sentences
 
1.   What is your name?
2.   How old are you?
3.   Where do you come from?
4.   How many people are there in your family?
5.   Do you have any brothers or sisters?
6.   Which high school did you attend?
7.   Which university do you attend?
8.    Why did you choose this university
9.   What year/grade are you in?
10.   What is your Major?
11.   Why did you choose this major
12.  What work do you want to work in the future?
13. What City do you want to work in?
14.  Why do you want to do that work?
15.  Where do you currently live?
16.  With whom do you live?
17.  Do you like living there?
 

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Class 07-3
 
My name is Lu Ting, a 21 year old sophomore Majoring in English in YanCheng Teachers College.
 
There are three people in my family; my father, my mother and I.
 
After graduation from Qin Huai High school which is in Nanjing, I came to this school to be an English teacher and to realise my dream to work in my hometown.
 
Now I live in the dormitory with my friends and I like living there very much.
 
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Class 07-3
 
I'm Sun Jianmei, I'm 20 years old, and the only child of my parents.
 

Having graduated from Yancheng No. 1 Middle school in 2007, I'm now a second year English Major in Yancheng Teachers University because I like English.

Because of my interest in educating students, I'd like to be an English teacher in my hometown of Yancheng in the future.

I'm very happy to live in the dormitory with five other lovely girls.
 
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