I think your society is fairly well based, but I think it would be much better if you made it into more of a storytelling piece rather than keeping the question and then answering it. It seems like your making a society off of a template, which we are but it shouldn't seem like it.
I think your society is fairly well based, but I think it would be much better if you made it into more of a storytelling piece rather than keeping the question and then answering it. It seems like your making a society off of a template, which we are but it shouldn't seem like it.
will do captain scuba