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Posessed_Butterfly's Utopia

Comments (2)

Jeremy Muesing - Apr 15, 2008 1:55 PM

I think your society is fairly well based, but I think it would be much better if you made it into more of a storytelling piece rather than keeping the question and then answering it. It seems like your making a society off of a template, which we are but it shouldn't seem like it.

Aaron McCusker - Apr 17, 2008 2:01 PM

will do captain scuba